17 November 2012

Notes - The Brothers - 6 draft


         Midmorning. Cold and crisp with a dollop of blue November sky.

         This reminds me of the morning light in Florence when we visited two or three years ago. Florence is city of stately class if you ask me with the natural art of river, city and sky standing there right before the memory from my eyes. . . . 1121 hours. I must have fallen asleep for another two hours. Carol is on the phone with Linda and I am still sitting in the chair up in the bedroom.

         Mid-afternoon. You are at the Carl Rahe Park next to the Little Miami surrounded by huge sycamore trees that are not so distinguishable with leaves in the surrounding.. . . You took a photo with your iPhone and are hoping it will be a good example of how it is this afternoon. Let's get started with Brothers-6. - Amorella

         There are almost 2700 words in the original.

         You have completed The Brothers - 6. Add and post. - Amorella

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The Brothers - 6

         The brothers walked to the hillside that dropped to the bottoms and river at a fifty-degree angle, looked down into childhood memories and then back towards the mausoleum. "Let's go in," said Robert.
Richard glanced to the right, the corridor closest to the entrance, which is at the north and saw the three pieces of stain glass at the west wall. “Look at the crypts,” he said, “lots of marble
         Robert said, “I think our relatives are interred in this next section. Second shelf up. The last four.”
         Both walked to where they could see the names. “James and Mabel are on mother’s side, and Ron and Beatrice and David and Jessie are on father’s side. I wonder why they are all buried together on this shelf.”
         “I guess they were good friends,” replied Richard while thinking, the mystery is why would they be good friends. I didn’t know they even got along. Ron and Beatrice were dead before we were born, but I remember the others well enough. I don’t remember coming to the funerals though. They turned toward the center of the building.
         “The mausoleum was built in the twenties for friends and relatives I would imagine," suggested Robert.
         “True enough.”  Richard glancing over to the large centerpiece, “look at the angel with the emerald wings, just above her right hand is an orange Star of David. I wonder why she is tinted green, as are her robes. And look at the dark sky behind her. It is like she flew through a storm to talk to the child at her feet.”
         “Interesting,” said Robert matter-of-factly. “Is the kid in the glass Jesus or Moses?”
         “I don’t know.” Richard moved back to get a better focus. “The kid is wearing a red robe but he is looking at her open left hand. Above her wingtips, on another plate, is the orange double eagle in a green background. A larger copy of the two side pieces’ double eagles.”
         Robert glanced at the opposing long east chamber and at the marble wall of the hallway between the four chambers. “The light from the east chamber was still shining in like we are in a movie, he thought, only the sunlight is natural.
         “I like that naked bulb hanging from the ceiling in the center here,” said Richard. “A nice piece of copper hanging above it but the outer bulb is missing.” With Robert on his left, he turned to peer into the other west chamber at the south section of the mausoleum. “This chamber is a lot shorter. I had forgotten that.” He glanced up and quickly counted, “It has twenty crypts on each side.”
         Robert noted, "I like the marble design of the chamber as a whole. It is interesting.”
         “And from out here in the hall,” noted Richard, “the colors that are most striking.”
         “Why don’t you get a key made instead of the loner from the city,” suggested Robert. “And we could come back anytime.”
         Robert stepped back too, “With decorative markings above that. The rest are typical stained glass features. You see more purples at a distance. It is all rather somber.”
         “Hey, don't forget where are we Rob?”
         Both chuckled, but the comment used to be funnier when they each had fewer of them. They turned and walked away from the south stained glass and the five stacked marble crypts on both sides. Then they walked passed the dark walnut podium with the black cross carved in its center and up the marble hall past the two north chambers and out the creaking brass door that had to be pulled to shut tightly for locking, and which Richard diligently locked.
         Richard was surprised but neither really looked closely down the southeast crypt chamber where all the sunlight was pouring in. That was the one that looked eerie from a distance, he thought, and maybe it was too bright to look into comfortably, but we didn’t. It is hard to believe there were be too much light in a mausoleum, but this morning there was. We probably missed something.
         When they walked to Walnut Street Robert said, “I’m going home.”
         “I’ll head on up Grove to the house,” said Richard. “I like walking in the shade of these old trees and through campus.” The twins walked their separate ways, Richard to the east and Robert north. Their heartsansoulsanminds though settled close together in the deep of what life is.
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         1621 hours. Now I am wondering what we missed, or rather what I missed in the mausoleum that day I wandered about inside and wrote the descriptive notes.

         You missed how empty the place was boy. The next section is 'Grandma's Story'. Post. - Amorella

         Surely this next section will not be so easily completed.

         You'll have to wait and see. - Amorella

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