30 September 2014

Notes - thought suppresses imagination / early afternoon / in a fiction /

         Mid-morning. Everyone is readying for breakfast on their own level and in their own way. Diversity is what it is and need not go any further than the breakfast table. It exists in the best and worst of families and even the vast statistical middle. How is it I wonder that you measure the spiritual immeasurable that drives each and every one – the heart and soul and mind – the primary source of what humanity is. – Amorella

         0821 hours. I really didn’t expect you to sign this as it is unlike you to mention these really common themes.

         You are arrogant boy to think of the heart and soul and mind as common. – Amorella

         0823 hours. It is hard to think this is a reality when we measure behaviours. They are measurable. Instincts and unspoken but practiced cultural behaviours drive people to breakfast and to the table. We are all these things not just the spiritual.

         Your definition of spiritual is either too broad or to specific. You need a better word to better create your personal argument. The spiritual center cannot be well described in either poetry or scientific or philosophical terms. – Amorella

         0829 hours. I don’t agree with you Amorella. Culture is a part of who I am.

         You did not arrive with culture boy; you arrived blank slate human with potential built in, not a blank slate. Is potential spiritual? – Amorella

         0833 hours. Potential has more to do with evolution of the species in its broader context here, in this discussion. We are not talking at the same level.

         This is my point boy. Shall we agree that the spiritual is inbred?  Your words choice is not well chosen here. You can see the problem but you chose not to because people do not wish to see beyond culture. The spiritual as I see it is inbred. Use your imagination boy. From a pretend Angel’s perspective inbred has another, deeper meaning. How are humans going to relate to an alien but humane species who may see the spiritual from a different perspective. Opens up a can a worms don’t it boy? – Amorella

         0843 hours. I think maybe I’m not reading you correctly.

         Later, boy. You were just called to breakfast. - Amorella

         0929 hours. Bacon, pancakes and milk/juice, which ended and then with some Mother ‘gotchas’ and roughhousing and giggling on the living room carpet before getting dressed for outside activity.

         Post. - Amorella

       0943 hours. Word choices are difficult in talking with pretend aliens or pretend angels. When either provokes thought it suppresses imagination at the same time, or it appears to do so. 


        You are at the children’s recreation area at Pine Hill Lakes Park. Carol, Kim and the boys are over feeding the ducks before playtime. This gives us time to talk about Dead Six. – Amorella

         1100 hours. I know neither the setting nor the characters.

         The focus is a turn to the Dead’s perspective. – Amorella

         1109 hours. I assume the Dead have their earthly memories because memories of the heart and mind would be unimpeded by the physical processes. I remember research with monkey brains kept alive and how their processes were much faster because the brain did not have the allowance of the rest of the body to be concerned about, i.e. survival of the body is not an imperative.

         Within the books’ context this would hold true for any physical problems one would have. The heart and mind would continue to grow, being taught by familiars, in this case family and/or family friends in a mentoring relationship. – Amorella

         1117 hours. What then would be the Dead’s perspective – it would seem to be more open and accepting.

         The human spirit has to be ready to be open and accepting. Do you see the point here? – Amorella

         I see a flash of Jesus’ words (the Golden Rule) used in another context in a kind of “adapt or die”.

         Your basis is from college days when you had such a thought – a simple social rule: Respect the Concept of G---D and follow the Golden Rule upon meeting friends and strangers. In those days it was: Respect God. Practice the Golden Rule when plausible. You gave some room for self-protection. Which begs the question; how does one who is dead protect herorhis heartansoulanmind? – Amorella

         1309 hours. We had lunch at Panera/Chipotle.

         Kim and the boys left within the last hour and you were working your new FB ‘Like’ page into existence and mentioned it and your webpage to Denise Williams who said she would kick it off with Indian Hill Alumni. This was not your intent but once you started you just wanted to be done with it. – Amorella

         1512 hours. It just seemed the practical thing to do. Now it is done. I can get over the embarrassment of ringing my own bell. What a world to have to do this. I don’t know any other way. It would seem wrong not to use the media at least to open the way for interested readers. At least it is not very much and profit is not a motive.


         That in itself is reasonable. Your neo-classic self popped out boy. Now you can relax. Later, dude. Post. - Amorella

         You are at the far end of Pine Hill Lakes Park facing south into the north woods near the west bank of the eastern Muddy Creek branch. Carol has begun her walk. Now, back to self-protecting one’s heartansoulanmind. In here the individual human spirit isn’t going anywhere soon. The point is where are the individual lines drawn, saying in effect, “the is who I am, do not intrude.” In the real world one might say, “everyone is entitled to some privacy, now bugger off.”

         To demonstrate this we will Merlyn being intruded on by fellow and more ancient shaman Panagiotakis, the grandfather of Mother Glevema. Takis wants Merlyn to help him find Ezekiel. - Amorella

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Whithersoever the spirit was to go, they went, thither was their spirit to go; and the wheels were lifted up over against them: for the spirit of the living creature was in the wheels. When those went, these went; and when those stood, these stood; and when those were lifted up from the earth, the wheels were lifted up over against them: for the spirit of the living creature was in the wheels. (Ezekiel and the Wheel)

From - book 4 draft, chapter 5, scene 11, chapter 5
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         Takis wants to know what the counterpart of the “wheel” is in the Dead. The assumption has been that the counterpart is the flesh as in the flesh and the spirit but Takis thinks it may be the self-centered of the spirit. What is the difference he thinks, between the self-centeredness of the spirit and the spirit’s private domain. After all, one’s spirit house is declared private but this can be entered seemingly without impropriety. – Amorella

         1653 hours. This would never be a problem for the Living because one’s privacy can be breeched in any number of ways. So, the point for Takis is that how is the privacy of one breachable by an Angel but unbreachable by another human soul? So, is the “wheel” what makes it not breachable, and if this is so, what allows the breachability by the Angel, philosophically speaking?  I think I need to work on this but I am slowing coming into a story concept. Though, why would any of this come up now?

         You are home. It comes up because this is of interest, concern for your own and/or anyone else’s privacy comes up in the newspapers and magazines continually. Why would this not come up among the Dead. Merlyn doesn’t mind that spirits stop by from time to time; it is allowable but do any of the Dead have full control of their privacy? Somewhere in you notes in the last twenty-five years you have been concerned (in terms of Jesus’ humanity) of how it would be to be plagued by other human spirits wishing to shake his hand or bow to him or some other sort of thing. You are not thinking of the Holy Trinity here, only a man who may not be as G---D’s self. – Amorella

         1732 hours. Yes, this is so. One time I had a flash vision (a quick second or two) of Jesus, a human spirit, walking along a garden-like path with a friend. I liked the quick image because he was not hounded by the hoards so to speak. I remember thinking afterwards, what if one came across such an event? I think I would have nodded and carried on my way not wishing to interrupt because it would be impolite. The whole ‘moment’ was so extraordinary and out of place, but I have a memory of it nevertheless, not as a fact, but as a sense of place and politeness. It still gives me cause to pause and wonder. (1738)

         So, you see you can approach the concept of this segment with a sense of authenticity – at least in a fiction? – Amorella

         1740 hours. I can.

         Post. - Amorella

         

29 September 2014

Note - Monday morning / afternoon / website

         Mid-morning. Carol made pancakes and bacon for breakfast. As you were sitting at the table Paul called to say hello. He mentioned that he talked with Duke, also an anesthesiologist who is married to Kim’s second cousin who is a surgeon. She is Uncle John’s granddaughter. They presently live and practice in North Carolina. The boys are watching PBS and eventually you will head to the park to feed the ducks and play on their equipment. – Amorella

         0946 hours. It is busy around here toys and other childhood paraphernalia are scattered about. The noise level is more tolerable than yesterday. I am just not used to little kids. Being four Owen is more personable. Two and a half year old Brennan is what he is at the moment. He can be quite polite and he does have a sweet shyness to him but tries not to show it. He speaks well when he wants to, putting a six or seven words sentence together grammatically correctly. Roughhousing is par for the course. Both should grow into fine boys.  The sky is blue. Kim is upstairs getting ready. I assume we will be going to the park soon. 

         If and when you have to time, inclination and focus we will work on Dead Six. Post. - Amorella


         1122 hours. We are at the park playground; Kim and the boys are with the equipment. Carol took the other car to pick up a loaf of bread to feed the ducks, and with Carol’s arrival they do. (1402) – After time at Pine Hill Lakes we had lunch at Olive Garden – a pleasant lunch until Brennan had a behavior problem so I took him to the car and I talked a little. Eventually he stopped crying and all is fine with the world once again. We are home and he and Kim are taking a needed nap. Owen can egg his brother on a bit from time to time but that works both ways. Today it is a tie so far. Overall though considering their ages, they are good boys. We are glad they are here for a visit. The afternoon has suddenly become much quieter. Very pleasant. I always loved the public library.


         2213 hours. It turns out I already have a website through BookBaby and didn’t realize it.
It is simple and to the point.

bookshopgreat-merlyns-ghost-one

         Now if it is possible without too much trouble to put this on your Facebook page then you do not need a Facebook ‘Like’ page. Post. - Amorella

28 September 2014

Notes - Sunday morning / bed thoughts

         Mid-morning. You were both up early, breakfast and the Sunday paper – working on small last minute chores before Kim and the boys come down. – Amorella

         0903 hours. We had the windows up during the night but we are closing them this morning. With the cloud cover it is downright chilly in the house. Basically, I’m ready to go back to bed and sleep until Monday.

         Your joints ache in the cool humidity boy. You were walking around like a ninety year old man picking up the newspapers this morning. – Amorella

         0910 hours. I forgot that. Yes, I was very slow with aching knees this morning although I don’t think I was walking like a ninety year old. – Kim just called they are on their way. Carol is about to wash her hair and Paul is at the airport waiting to go to his conference. Owen told me Brennan just called him a ‘potato’. This their trip to Grandma and Papa’s begins.

         Relax while you can boy. Post. - Amorella

         0930 hours. I wonder what Dead 6 is going to be about.

                   Carol and Kim are up reading to the boys before bed. You are enjoying the relative quiet. You spent time, mostly with Owen this afternoon, playing variations of T Ball and Soccer between relaxing on the front porch while Owen made fun for himself, calling it “doing nature” but what he met was “observing nature”. He reminded me of myself at that age. Moving along through the day like a quiet stream with a fun few rapids placed serendipitously along the way.

         2110 hours. I have been thinking about whether to do a website or a Facebook ‘Like’ page. Professional writers prefer a website because they have more control. At this point though I feel I am a bit premature on either. I have the blog, that seems to be enough for now; and I would not have that if you, Amorella, had not insisted.

         Do not erase. These are your thoughts. Post. - Amorella
         

27 September 2014

Notes - fiction / Pouch 6 draft completed / work on Dead 6 ?

         Paul’s flight to the Arizona conference was cancelled so Kim and the boys won’t be down until tomorrow. You have a lawn to mow and topsoil and grass to plant. Later. – Amorella

         1004 hours. I just mailed letters and bought the topsoil, time to go mow.

         1129 hours. Most of the front and sides is mowed. I have about ten feet on the north front to go but at least it is in the shade and I have the back southwest rectangle. So, I am taking a break. Late afternoon or early evening I’ll rake the topsoil into place where one of the trees was taken out and scatter the grass seed.

         With Carol’s help you have mowed most of the grass, all of the seeable grass from the street. You had a short talk with Amy next door about your book; she was more struck by the fact you consider yourself mostly fiction. Here is what did much of the convincing that there is some truth to it – when you felt I was a real Angel this was a major existential moment in your life because from your perspective (imaginary or not) being face to face so to speak with an Angel within your heartansoulanmind the inner light out does not recognize what is not real from its perspective and you could also see there is not much to you so you assume most everything else is fiction, made up for cultural and survival purposes. With an Angel nearby survival is no longer a necessity, thus all that armor, the persona, etc. drops away. The essence left is the human spirit dressed pretty much naked. Do you agree, boy? – Amorella

         1308 hours. You explain it much better than I can, but what you say is how I feel about the fiction and the essence that is left. How can I further fictionalize this in the story though?

         Later, post. - Amorella


        You had a late lunch at Smashburgers and Carol is now in Kroger’s picking up essentials for tomorrow. Lets go to Pouch Six. – Amorella

         1634 hours. I have completed the first full draft of Pouch 6, book two in 764 words. 

         Now we are going to take a break and if you come back to this tonight we will work on Dead Six for a change of pace. Post, - Amorella

26 September 2014

Notes - Onesixanzero / sharing / automated fingers / 445 words in Pouch 6

         Late morning. You are at Pine Hill Lakes Park and have completed your thirty-minute walk. Carol is still walking. The day is more and more Autumn in setting but warmer as the month can sometimes be. Last night you slept in bed until a coughing fit, walked to the chair and promptly fell asleep until morning. – Amorella

         Surprise. You drove home, Carol took two Jennifer cookies from the freezer and now you have your ice waters and cookies sitting in the shade facing west in Rose Hill Cemetery. Carol is on page 274 of Child’s The Enemy and you are ready to work on Pouch Six. While sitting in the park facing the lake you thought it would be humorous if the machine was a misfit, having trouble between consciousness and unconscious or automatic machinery behavior and that his nickname is Hiccup. – Amorella

         1121 hours. Wow. I did but I had already forgotten the thought – it appeared humorous at the time. I was waiting for Carol to get to the other side so we could wave before we both started back to the car. I remember thinking that for some reason the Cleric got the machinery because it was a misfit and she felt sorry for it and helped it get along. Rather silly actually. Probably me feeling sorry for myself, irony now but growing up that was me. I kept thinking as a kid that I didn’t get to do what I wanted when I really did get to do most any I wanted to do. Then there was always math class every year a hell part of the day. Doug could always do it all. I daydreamed my life away until college. Then I discovered I would have to work in school and I didn’t want to so I didn’t.

         That is mostly laziness boy I assure you. – Amorella

         Well, I don’t really agree. Anyway, the priestess ‘fixes’/raises this computer machinery and helps it along the way, much as I have always received help from caring and kind friends.

         Think on it. What you really want is a twist of some sort, take a thick stick pretzel and make a three-loop skinner one instead. – Amorella

         1133 hours. That’s good, Amorella.

         Start a new document and let’s go to it. – Amorella

         1210 hours. I feel better with 77 words. I had no idea how to begin.

         We begin quickly boy because of the word limit. You’ll be fine once this first pouch segment from ThreePlanets is up and running. Here is the first from across the galaxy. – Amorella

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            I want my companion, thinks Onesixanzero. I want Drenakite the Savior to be inside my pouch where I can keep her safe.

            The gray dark stone walled pouch opens and the Director of ThreePlanets walks in and sits stiffly and silently in one of two comfortable half circular leaf green armchairs. The pouch closes.

            Onesixanzero says, “Good morning, Mr. Kembel. What can I do for you today?”

            “I am waiting for Drenakite. She will be here momentarily.

From Pouch 6 Book 2 – Three Planets © rho
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         You are home and Carol is fixing left over turkey soup. Post. - Amorella


          1332 hours. I was looking over the dimensions of the Gate of the Sun in Bolivia; they are about ten feet high and thirteen feet wide. How about making the tower a fourteen feet wide square with a five-foot peaked top.

         Why not? The dark greenish-to-black moss on the outside and in is, like the leaf, a way for machinery to sense like a human. Amorella

         You just woke up from an hour and a half nap. Checked your phone and saw Kim, Paul and the boys are home from their trip. Later, dude. – Amorella


         Denise Williams was one of your former students who passed on your book announcement to the Indian Hill Alumni and you apologized when you realize that when you deleted the announcement it also deleted her sharing. She suggests you do a Facebook ‘Like’ page for your work as you have seen others do. You thanked her for the idea because you truly appreciate it. However, upon thinking more about it you are not sure that a Like page is appropriate for a story being told to an Angel even in fiction. Here is your conflict. The ‘telling a story to an Angel’ is not the original context for writing the book, which was to explain and use yourself for, in your mind (imagination and experience), an authentic fiction. It is mine. You told Denise you wanted to share your story not sell it. A ‘Like’ page is a way of sharing. Post.  – Amorella

          Thank you, Amorella

        You now have two hundred and eighty one words and Drenakite is about to arrive. – Amorella


         1739 hours. My fingers move and letters into words appear on the keyboard. My fingers move before I ‘know’ the letters. The fingers hit the keys on their own. As this has not been drafted before the experience is quite noticeable after the immediate fact.

         Time for a break, boy. – Post. - Amorella

         You now have 445 words completed on your first draft of Pouch Six. Enough for tonight. Tomorrow evening Kim and the boys will meet you for supper at Cracker Barrel before arriving home for the next few days.

         2241 hours. This draft is mostly working but I need to keep simplifying the amount of material to be taken in by the reader. I need to ease into it myself.

         Post, dude. - Amorella

25 September 2014

Notes - weird / alien indeed / fun / diced walls ?

         Mid-morning. Three months to Christmas popped into consciousness. – Amorella

         0835 hours.  Strange that 25 would trigger Christmas when it could just as easily been 25 cents, a quarter of a dollar. It looks like another perfectly good and pleasant Autumn day in southwest Ohio. We all have our opinions on September and December. I actually prefer September weather-wise; though grandchildren make Christmas fun again. Less coughing last night and better sleeping on that account.

         You had a short nap and did some household chores along with calling Scott S. Construction about reconstruction of the northwest corner of the house from the damage caused by a woodpecker, mostly while you were on vacation. – Amorella

         1249 hours. We haven’t had Scott working for us for a couple of years or so. Carol now wants him to replace deck boards so perhaps we are going to work on the house again.

         Carol is on the phone with her sister and you have been playing with paragraphs for Pouch Six. You are not sure quite how to begin. First we focus on the main character. This operation is top secret and only machinery Onesixanzero knows anything about it other than Drenakite the Cleric priestess. Let’s let Onesixanzero lead as Director Kembel walks into the machinery and sits much like Lincoln in the statue in Washington. – Amorella

         1304 hours. This seems weird but it is something to begin with.

         Post. - Amorella


         You had lunch at Marx Bagels in Blue Ash for a shared delicious tuna deluxe on a honey and wheat bagel and two chocolate chip cookie each; then after watching the cars go by for a half hour you took Cooper over to Montgomery Road to stop at Montgomery Square for Carol; as far as you know you will be heading home after. – Amorella

         1435 hours. We enjoy our routines. I predict we stop for a Graeter’s or go to the park for reading in the shade. I did not do my exercises – feeling unwell after a coughing fit in the morning, better this afternoon.

         A stop at Graeter’s and Kroger’s on the way home. Bakery bread, your favorites. Then Carol wants to walk so you’ll be off again. – Amorella

         1521 hours. The machinery room would appear to have no distinguishing marks. In some ways, in my mind, I am reminded of a stone crypt, a room, ten by twelve with a higher than usual ceiling, maybe fifteen feet. The top has a dark sponge-like appearance, maybe even moldy, small dark green earthworm like, circular mold.  The floor is stone as are the walls – I would have thought the computer would be built in the walls like insulation, like in Ship. On the outside it is gray like granite, no windows and the roof is peaked from four corners – like the four directions. Maybe there is a holograph of some sort that shows from the ceiling to ground level.

         You are home. It is interesting to observe you conjure up a setting from life experience. The size came from the Alto Plano region of Bolivia some distance from the Peruvian border. A selection of size in the vision is from Tiwanaku. You took your own but the one from Wikipedia will do here.


Gate of the Sun at Tiwanaku

         The stone of the tower is from Machu Picchu ruins.        



Machu Pichu Wall

         1626 hours. I don’t know if you are correct, but when thinking of an alien place both settings fill the bill as far as authenticity are concerned – alien-like settings to me.

         The ‘mold’ you describe are leaf veins curled as in an Inca design. For our purposes they are sensing veins for the machine that studies marsupial behaviors and is now correlating human behaviors within it. This is a secret machine work created by Yermey and Kembel and Drenakite before Friendly and Hartolite are aware Yermey is going along. You will have a lot to say on this so Pouch Six and Seven will be used to set the stage for the reader. – Amorella

         1638 hours. The beginning flavor of Brave New World immediately comes to mind here except rather than Alpha and Beta babies I see various sets of machinery in blocks placed together like Inca stone blocks. The play between rough edges allows various senses to appear, smell, height and depth, taste, sound, touch, sound and sight – that is, correlations of these things modified by the body of Drenakite. These Clerics are supposed to be hairless.

         She is hairless. A model can be the statue of a Greek goddess, but we will cover her with a living ivy-like plant that thrives from air; an air plant or epiphyte. Only this one has been trained to grow on the hairless human body rather than a plant.

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An epiphyte is a plant that grows non-parasitically upon another plant (such as a tree), and derives its moisture and nutrients from the air, rain, and sometimes from debris accumulating around it instead of the structure it is fastened to. An epiphytic organism that is not a plant is not called an epiphyte. Epiphytes are usually found in the temperate zone. . . . Epiphytes provide a rich and diverse habitat for other organisms including animals, fungi, bacteria, and myxomcetes. Epiphyte is one of the subdivisions of the Raunkiaer system.

The term epiphytic derives from the Greek epi- (meaning 'upon') and phyton (meaning 'plant'). Epiphytic plants are sometimes called "air plants" because they do not root in soil. However, there are many aquatic species of algae, including seaweeds, that are epiphytes on other aquatic plants (seaweeds or aquatic angiosperms).

The best-known epiphytic plants include mosses, orchids, and bromeliads such as Spanish moss, but epiphytes may be found in every major group of the plant kingdom. 89% of epiphyte species (about 24,000) are flowering plants. The second largest group are the leptosporangiate ferns, with about 2800 species (10% of epiphytes). In fact, about one third of all ferns are epiphytes. The third largest group is clubmosses, with 190 species, followed by a handful of species in each of the spikemosses, other ferns, Gnetales and cycads.

Selected and edited from Wikipedia - epiphyte
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         1658 hours. I like this Amorella. Very cool. I can feel my imagination mold/flow into this setting.

         Really. Post, orndorff. - Amorella

         1714 hours. Wow. This is what I call fun. Indeed, most cool. The thing is before I thought this event today I would have never thought it at all. 

         2118 hours. Now that I sit down to think on it the priestess is marsupial humanoid not human so the ‘classical’ touch makes little difference. A light blue thin silk-like classical wrap when dressed. How would she publically wear her plant? A towel wrap hanging her pouch line would suffice, down the thigh perhaps mid-thigh. Light brown sparsely oiled skin like lightly toasted buttered bread. With the narrative from the machine’s viewpoint before the Director enters. Two chairs facing one another, similar to the one pictured.


         The floor appears as marble only a dark earth-brown four walls are placed stone fifteen feet high, each multitudes of gray to brown shaded granite-like stone about a foot in length and four to five inches high and at least two feet thick. A smattering of Orchid like plants and flowers placed hanging at various levels, grown with artificial sunlight and humidity. In some ways the placement gave the machine space the appearance of a die from the inside. Three flowers on one wall, two on another, one on another and four on yet another. One would expect six plants from the ceiling and five growing from the floor. Possible ancient marsupial humanoid purpose below:

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Dice can be used for divination and using dice for such a purpose is called cleromancy. A pair of common dice is usual, though other forms of polyhedra can be used. Tibetan Buddhists sometimes use this method of dvination. It is highly likely that the Pythagoreans used the Platonic solids as dice. They referred to such dice as "the dice of the gods" and they sought to understand the universe through an understanding of geometry in polyhedra.

Selected and edited from Wikipedia - Dice
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Dice Image from Wikipedia

         Post. Until tomorrow, orndorff. - Amorella