1356
hours. A very quiet and relaxing day so far about as tranquil here in the shade
just beyond the open bedroom sliding door (about an arm's length away) and
balcony. High tide. We sat out earlier. Carol was reading. We did see a small
pod of dolphin problem part of the same group we saw yesterday. They are fun to
watch with binoculars (an old pair of Tasco 7X50). The bright Florida sun is
actually quite warm to our autumn toned Ohio skin.
You took a secret photo of Carol in a
relaxed and reading state. Pop it in here. - Amorella
Carol
behind closed bedroom doors.
Late
afternoon and you are reading in the shade at McD's before picking up milk at
Publix. Let's get to it. - Amorella
1645
hours. I have the original Brothers Seven in front of me and it is a domestic
scene with brownies and cookies husbands and wives, talk of Captain Lamar,
their tombstones, and Grandpa's favorite poem, "I met a man who wasn't
there," for a total of 1445 words. Do I work this down adding your
suggestions or do I start over? Personally, as this appears to be continuously
put together serendipitously I don't know that it makes any difference how this
is put together. In some ways the rhythm and the content of the words have a
tendency to mimic my everyday life, as it is each day I write. You add as you
wish an ingredient or two to the mix from what is important in the moment. I
assume these 'extras' are from the heart to add an authenticity to what
otherwise might not be there.
Basically you got it in the last sentence. -
Amorella
Then
do I add the ingredients to what I have in a rewrite or write anew? I could ask
this but the more practical approach would be to work it in with what's here.
You can start and finish this up tonight
orndorff. - Amorella
Sly
and wicked humor plus being good friends from youth - a skip - old age.
2015
hours. I'm about a third through the work but I don't feel good about it. Ready
to stop for the night.
Perhaps tomorrow old man. Post. - Amorella
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