05 March 2013

Notes - not on a bet / no more Near Final Drafts without Audio input


         Mid-morning and busy. You had to rush in to have blood drawn for Thursday doctor appointment that you thought was on the twenty-seventh, not the seventh. Back in time for breakfast and the paper but within thirty minutes you will be sitting in the dentist's chair awaiting gum and its whereabouts numbness and dental work.

         I took my blood sugar (121) and realized I had to have a blood test for Thursday. Thank goodness I hadn't eaten anything yet. This is always a fasting blood test - A1A and metabolic workups.

         Later, dude. - Amorella

         Almost noon. Carol is readying herself for lunch at Smashburgers. You may have two to five inches of snow tonight. You had a good time at the dentist, no pain and very little numbness, nothing like you expected. You go back in two weeks to be done with the temporary crown.

         I hope to get more done today. Almost every segment of the chapter raises my curiosity when it is being written. As a reader I these books but I can see I do need to do at least one audio draft per chapter.

         Why don't you practice audio drafting on this machinery, See how it sounds, and if the other software sounds better (clearer) go with it, if this is clearer use this. It only has two purposes, for drafting and for Aunt Patsy and Uncle Ernie's listening.

         1420 hours. We are at Pine Hill Lakes Park looking southeast from the far north lot. This is after an excellent lunch at Smashburger.

         Let's continue with Pouch 13. Carol is on page 97 of Die Trying. - Amorella

         1645 hours.  We only spent about twenty minutes out -- too cold and rainy. Once we were home I changed clothes and have been asleep in the bedroom chair until about fifteen minutes ago. This has not been a very productive day.

         You added to the first paragraph but are reluctant to display it here. - Amorella

         That's because it has no validity, Amorella. One can't just write down things like this to drop into a story. I think it is just imagination and not you writing. It sounds like useless speculation that I would dream up when I can't think of anything to say -- a kind of no brainer toys in the attic sort of thing.

         Drop it in and post. - Amorella

         I'll drop in just this part because I think it corrupts the early section of the paragraph.

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(for) Pouch 13 - (maybe)

Objective data analyses leaves no residue of subjectivity initially. Other observations of vitals while anywhere on Ship are compartmentalized into E.Box UsefulanMixData. Marsupialese lettered documents are read from left-to-right then down-a-line then read from right-to left and down-a-line to left-to-right and down again; reading from right-to-left so there is less time waste. This reading mechanics has been used for over fifteen thousand years. Such a reading method has been found to have broaden and strengthen conscious awareness.     
      
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         1701 hours. What this shows me is that I can write anything down but the editor in me says, nope, this is not going in on a bet.

         Post anyway. - Amorella


         2237 hours. I have begun the audio drafting in earnest. Too many words for a good word flow to the ear. I have begun chapter one. I should be writing "Draft" not "Near Final Draft". I will change this immediately.

         No need to apologize, boy. No more "Near Final Draft" until your audio draft is completed. - Amorella

         You are right, Amorella. It is time to begin work on the audio draft. When writing I am too close to the work, too involved to see/hear the awkward cadence caused multiple errors.

         Post. - Amorella

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