03 August 2013

Notes - stubborn and childish / work-a-day / Pouch 20 completed / self-learning


         A very late wet morning. You were hoping to mow the grass that is still wet from an earlier shower. You were reading about the WLW Tower in the Mason Historical Society newsletter and was surprised to read that Hitler himself actually designated the tower as a target on his hit list during the war.

         Little old Mason on the hit list. Who would have ever thought such a thing? The old wooden watch tower (in search of enemy planes) still stand next to the metal tower itself. Life is interesting. Fragments of history still flaking off into print like fragments of sentences in a blog.

         Leave it, boy. - Amorella

         I don't want people to think I am associating this blog with history. It just hit me a few seconds ago. I was just having fun with the 'fragment' business - that isn't right either. Word grammar doesn't mark the sentence as a fragment. Where's the verb? 'Flaking' is a verb here? Shouldn't it be: 'Fragments of history are still flaking off into print like fragments of a sentence in a blog'? I'm wrong. Word grammar says it is correct. Technically, it is I guess, but it sure sounds like a sentence fragment to me. In this case, the ear wins as far as I am concerned it is a fragment. I'm the expert. Word loses.

         You got carried away there boy. - Amorella

         I was just thinking it through Amorella hardly conscious my fingers were moving to the keys.

         That's the main idea, boy. Post. - Amorella

         Makes me look like a silly old fussy butt.

         Some students the world over think of language teachers in a more vivid description than that, particularly when they received a paper back filled with red marks or 'do over'. Do not consider apologizing here. You have a right to be arrogant just like everyone else. - Amorella

         I was going to apologize for keeping this in here not for grammatical errors. This is a waste of the reader's time.

         Are you talking about this post in particular or the blog itself? - Amorella

         This is my experiment, these are my notes. They are not a waste of time to me; in fact, they are necessary. I cannot write without putting thoughts on paper first. Otherwise, I don't really know if the thoughts are there or not. As for readers, people are free to read my thoughts or not to read them. The end result of the notes is supposed to be the Merlyn books. I don't care if people read them or not either.

         You are a funny old man, orndorff. Stubborn and childish, just like the rest of your species. Now post. - Amorella

                1444 hours. Late lunch at Panera/Chipotle and now a stop at Kroger's for dry cat food and the like before home. A little blue showing through and it's warming up so the grass ought to be ready for mowing once we are home.


         You are thinking about working on Pouch 20 so why not go ahead boy. - Amorella

         1507 hours. I have 724 words and must have had 50 or 60 more and Microsoft Word crashed. This rarely happens, now I am back to where I was. I don't remember what was said but Yermey was talking about hunters and gatherers and being efficient and the women choosing not to have many children because they were nomads though there were tribes and territories.

         We need to be more efficient ourselves, boy. - Amorella

         1704 hours. Once home we mowed the yard; amazing how warm it became in such a short time, at least it seemed warm. I mowed in sun and shade and Carol mowed in sun and shade. I took a bath as Carol was finishing up the hill on the southwest side. It has not begun to rain again yet, perhaps it won't. The mowing is done in any case. Perhaps I'll trim in the morning. No more today though. She's cleaning up -- I assume it is going to be a relaxing Saturday night of 'catch-up' television.

         Post, boy and relax, hot or not the sun got to you and you were getting slightly sick when you finished the front and Carol took over for the north side and back. - Amorella

         I don't like to talk about it Amorella. It was just queasiness above my stomach. I drank plenty of water but was working at a faster pace than usual. I have to watch for heat stroke. It didn't seem that hot. Anyway, once in cool bath water I was feeling better. I don't know why you bring up things that don't make any difference.

         You have three doctors and a son-in-law who keep tabs on you boy, I might as well too. Post. - Amorella

         I am not any sicker than I have ever been, in fact I'm healthier than I was at the turn of the century.

         True, but you are older physically. Later, gator. - Amorella


         2145 hours. Surprisingly I completed Pouch 20 but it feels incomplete to me; not the conversation, just that I expected a deeper discussion on the soul. There is much more to add.


         You have another chapter and two more books, orndorff. Give it a rest. Add and post. - Amorella


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Diplomatic Pouch 20  © 2013, rho, drafted for GMG

            Blake and the phrase, "define the soul" tossed about in bed during the night. We say the soul is our essence, the embodiment of our individual selves. The soul is our mind as separate from our heart; but no, our mind is our reasoning, our consciousness, not our soul. Philosophies say our soul is our greater sense of duality, our immortal part. We are not gods. Besides the feminine pouch how is their Godofamily different from what many human equate with God, usually male. The Mother or the Father, what connotations are connected with each. They can know no more than we on such things were they a hundred thousand years ahead of us in their knowledge, society and technology? They are no wiser than we; otherwise they wouldn't have been stumbling around in our initial meetings. These alien people appear polite, kind and mannerly. We can be polite, kind and mannerly also. We can be . . .. Blake awoke immediately.

            In short time Blake knocked on Pyl and Justine's door. Within minutes they were walking to breakfast. No sooner than they were settled with milk, juice and bowls of cereal that Hartolite and Friendly walked into the room with Yermey following shortly thereafter. After a few minutes of casual banter among the six (and a bit of wit between Yermey and Blake) Blake drew the conclusion that his sister was attracted to Yermey for his mind and comfortably for no other reason. None Blake could think on in any case and he realized that Justin had not the hint of any jealousy so he dismissed it. He asked a question. "Last night we were talking about the soul. I am interested in your concept; do you people think of the soul as intellectual and emotional as we think of the mind and the heart?"

            "Morning fresh," smiled Friendly, "these matters are easier to speak on. We think of the soul as immortal though not the same as Godofamily is immortal."

            Hartolite added. "Our species and your own have similar thoughts on souls, hearts and minds. Each has no material weight nor is it in the same four dimensional space we find our physical selves."

            "We observe the heart and soul and mind through our personal thoughts and actions but they are immeasurable," continued Friendly.

            "We discern the heartansoulanmind in our friends also; just as you do," reinforced Hartolite.
           
            Blake commented somewhat in dismay, "You are some twenty thousand years ahead of us and you are no further along scientifically? Last night, Yermey said that you have machinery that can detect a person's soul."
           
            "I think I said the word has to be defined first. This is easier to do in our home language because you focus on details. Hartolite brought this up just a minute ago when she spoke of how we cannot quantify the soul. We would never think to weight the heartansoulanmind." He muttered, "It is madness to think on weighing the soul."

            Pyl touched Yermey's hand in compassion, "It is madness; this is not how we three imagine the soul. We don't find the mind or even the soul as nearly as mysterious as the human heart." Her sentence ended with a softly humane smile.

            "That is another subject," commented Justin. "What can we say about the soul that we earthlings agree with?

            "We can say," declared Yermey, "that soul is immortal."

            Justin asked, "I notice you say heartansoulanmind like it is one word."
           
            "We look at it as if it were one so when speaking in English it flows as one word," responded Friendly.

            With strong interest Justin asked, "How did you come on that?"

            "I think it is our pouches that made the initial differences in our species, that is, the differences as how we see the world philosophically." She gave a slight pause and glanced to Yermey.
           
            "Early on, just like you, when we had our own form of hunters and gatherers, our tribes and territories."

            "Particularly when we were on a single planet," interrupted Hartolite.

            "Yes," replied Yermey with grumbled voice and eyes on Hartolite, "when we were on a single planet." He paused with wide eyes and open thought and said, "Growing pouched is a community. We are heartansoulanmind first. Growing pouched is as much psychological as it is physical. Our small groups evolved from the pouch concept. This group evolves into our species as a family unit. We are connected physically through sharing, just as our individual heartsanminds share an individual soul, an immortal shell," he paused, "to us, the shell is a pouch, you see."

            Being open, frank and a bit irritated, Pyl looked Yermey in the eye and without thinking, said, "I have a private womb, not a communal pouch. What's that worth?"

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         2310 hours. Back from the store one more time for milk and eggs. It has been a very pleasant summer evening, nice drive with the windows down and the moon roof open and the stars out.

         You are already wondering on Dead 21, the conclusion for the Dead segments in the book, Great Merlyn's Ghost, Vol. I.  - Amorella

         It has to have a continuation not a conclusion, Amorella.

         Why? Doesn't Volume I show the stories continue?  - Amorella

         A summary doesn't seem right.

         We are not having a summary even at the conclusion of Volume III. Don't you expect the few readers that you might have to actually read the books with interest?  - Amorella

         I would hope anyone who opens a book reads it with interest.

         It is in your interest as a writer to write for an audience, is it not? - Amorella

         It is interesting to me so I assume it will be interested to a few others.

         Isn't that rather selfish? - Amorella

         You are trying to mess with my brain, Amorella.

         Aren't you attempting the same thing for the reader? - Amorella

         As a teacher of English I tried to mess with as many brains as I could. Thinking for one's self is fun and challenging. I dedicated the first series, in part, to my former students. I don't think of these readers as students and I am no teacher.

         No, you are no longer a teacher; you are my student. - Amorella

         I am being self-taught.

         However you are comfortable expressing it; you are a student. - Amorella

         I agree, I am a student.

         What have you learned? - Amorella

         I have learned that in terms of the heartansoulanmind words are not so important. This is nothing new. The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupery rings a bell here, but I have no desire to tame or to be tamed by anyone. The heart is not the all , it is only a third in these books. I don't know why The Little Prince came up. I do not remember the book from my heart or soul.

         You are correct the book came from neither place. - Amorella

         I am self-learning about the heart and the soul and the mind.

         Yes, you are. Post. - Amorella

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