17 September 2013

Notes - upon waking / busy, busy


        Waking up during the night you had a thought. You had forgotten to include a friend or two, a counselor of sorts, to help an individual personality spirit in the initiation of surviving death, and in becoming freshly aware of the importance of the human spirit holding all that one takes to the beyond. – Amorella

         0851 hours. I thought on this for about an hour realizing that elsewhere in either notes or drafts this had come up along with children’s spirits and how a family/friend would be near to help without being obliged to do so. The Dead 3 draft was being subjugated to a harshness that was somewhat inhumane in itself. I need to correct this.

         I will help in the simplified reconstruction. Post. - Amorella


         Mid-afternoon. Carol is on page 279 of Coben’s No Second Chance. You just finished your Subway picnic at the canoe livery park along the Little Miami at Foster. You ran errands and did house and yard work this morning as Carol worked on the wash and began her general cleanup for the weekend.

         Home. You have two hundred pounds of dirt to move about and grass seed to sow since you are not going to have the yard aerated until it rains enough for the plugs to pull out, most likely in two or three weeks. No grass slice seeding until later or early spring. We can work for a bit on Brothers 3. - Amorella

         1445 hours. I do not have a central ‘theme’ word for this chapter yet. It is no wonder I was taking a while with it. The word I come up with is ‘Circumstance’ but I think I wanted to use that in the last chapter so far I have ‘themes’ Slavery and Control. Amorella, you know best here.

         I think you will find that ‘Circumstance’ works well in this chapter. Certainly Dead 3 fits. Now, let’ rework that first paragraph in that segment. – Amorella

         You have been busy most of the day, plus buying mattresses, etc. for two beds. Tomorrow, dude. - Amorella

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