Waking
up during the night you had a thought. You had forgotten to include a friend or
two, a counselor of sorts, to help an individual personality spirit in the initiation
of surviving death, and in becoming freshly aware of the importance of the
human spirit holding all that one takes to the beyond. – Amorella
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hours. I thought on this for about an hour realizing that elsewhere in either
notes or drafts this had come up along with children’s spirits and how a
family/friend would be near to help without being obliged to do so. The Dead 3
draft was being subjugated to a harshness that was somewhat inhumane in itself.
I need to correct this.
I will help in the simplified
reconstruction. Post. - Amorella
Mid-afternoon.
Carol is on page 279 of Coben’s No Second Chance. You just finished your
Subway picnic at the canoe livery park along the Little Miami at Foster. You
ran errands and did house and yard work this morning as Carol worked on the
wash and began her general cleanup for the weekend.
Home.
You have two hundred pounds of dirt to move about and grass seed to sow since
you are not going to have the yard aerated until it rains enough for the plugs
to pull out, most likely in two or three weeks. No grass slice seeding until
later or early spring. We can work for a bit on Brothers 3. - Amorella
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hours. I do not have a central ‘theme’ word for this chapter yet. It is no
wonder I was taking a while with it. The word I come up with is ‘Circumstance’
but I think I wanted to use that in the last chapter so far I have ‘themes’ Slavery and Control. Amorella, you know best here.
I think you will find that ‘Circumstance’ works well in this
chapter. Certainly Dead 3 fits. Now, let’ rework that first paragraph in that
segment. – Amorella
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