28 March 2014

Notes - bloody sorrow / a surprise

         Late morning. You just completed forty minutes of exercise, and you had mentioned Smashburgers for lunch as well as a walk in the park as presently it is not raining. You finished up last night’s post online but did not include it here. Drop it in where it belongs because, as you say, the focus, a major theme in the Merlyn books is perspective. Taken to heart you continually learn something important about how your species fits into the scheme of the world, the galaxy and the universe. Now you wonder how all this fits into the scheme of Before. – Amorella

         1141 hours. Fiction allows a broad range of perspectives. One of my favorites is the whale, Moby Dick. What does he think on Captain Ahab and the Pequod? My bet, a nuisance, and a natural problematic he has to deal with from time to time. Ahab’s rants mean nothing; the crew’s loyalty to their captain, nothing; Ishmael’s survival, nothing.

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Three "Goodread quotations" from Moby Dick I find fitting here:
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“Whenever I find myself growing grim about the mouth; whenever it is a damp, drizzly November in my soul; whenever I find myself involuntarily pausing before coffin warehouses, and bringing up the rear of every funeral I meet; and especially whenever my hypos get such an upper hand of me, that it requires a strong moral principle to prevent me from deliberately stepping into the street, and methodically knocking people's hats off - then, I account it high time to get to sea as soon as I can.”
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“There are certain queer times and occasions in this strange mixed affair we call life when a man takes this whole universe for a vast practical joke, though the wit thereof he but dimly discerns, and more than suspects that the joke is at nobody's expense but his own.”
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“... and Heaven have mercy on us all – Presbyterians and Pagans alike – for we are all somehow dreadfully cracked about the head, and sadly need mending.”
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I see little whale in these lines above, only humanity in a bloody sorrow for no reason but herorhis own.

         Taking to preaching, eh, boy? – Amorella

         No, taking to showing how literature projected into perspective displays humanity better than social statistics.

         Post. - Amorella


         1210 hours. Here’s the preaching: “We need to be more like we can be rather than what we are. We need to rise up and display our humanity first and live by it. The Golden Rule is a start. And, by we, I mean myself first.” – rho

         This is a strange thing for you to say, since you are already displaying your humanity. (Do not erase this, boy.) Post. – Amorella


         Early afternoon. You are heading to Panera/Chipotle for lunch and then a stop at Kroger’s on Tylersville. Spooky had to have her butt cleaned and she meowed when you were holding her. Jadah watched then as we left she went over and gave Spooky a nose kiss. Jadah, who is about half the weight, sees herself as an adopted mother. You are happy they are companions in that they play together several times a day, sometimes jumping over each other like bunnies playing in the yard. – Amorella

         1346 hours. Our cats are good companions to us also. They each add a spontaneous delight to our otherwise quiet empty nest home. (We both like the quiet for reading, reflecting and writing.) Retirement is good to/for us. I’m getting hungry.

         Late afternoon, you had your lunch, stopped for groceries and drove Carol to Pine Hill Lakes for her walk. While she walked you completed the corrections, etc., that are on the chapter ten hard copy. – Amorella

         1658 hours. This was a surprise. I didn’t rush; the chapter had fewer corrections unless I have to add to Dead 10 and delete a paragraph that was made clear in the previous chapter. I finish just as Carol knocked on the car door. I did not even see or hear her coming up.

         We will work in something if need be. Take a break, orndorff. Later. – Amorella

         You had a snack for supper and watched the news, a new comedy with “Jack” in the title, “Believe” and “Suits”. You also keyboarded in Dead 10 and are now ready for bed. Post. – Amorella

         2302 hours. Earlier today, in the first paragraph you mention the species might fit (in a fiction) in the scheme of the world and galaxy and universe as well as in the Before. I need some clarification here as it seems this should be woven, or dare  I say, ‘braided’ within book one.

         I agree there are dimensions unaccounted for here but hey, (as you say) Dante had his nine circles up into the rose. – Amorella

         I think dimension is overused as a word. It can mean too many things or levels.

         We use the tree as an image, and its Christmas like lights are universes since this has already been suggested in one of the earlier Merlyn books. The root of which is being enriched by the ‘soil’ before. The tree sets on a flat ‘mirror-like’ lake from which it also gains nourishment. The ‘sun’ is as a ‘tunnel’ with the sky being the gateway to a ‘mass’ from which this ‘sun’ (look alike) tunnels through, looking not unlike a root only instead of a ‘solid’ (physical-like) it is hollow like a horn of Empty not plenty. Something along these lines, what do you think? - Amorella

         2319 hours. This is a surprise, but it is better than dimensions. How will some of this come out in the story?

         Part through Ship, Yermey and the beacon on dark matter; part is shown via an accident caused by the Earthlings on HomePlanets; part when the Dead challenge the Supervisor once again for further clarification; and part when Grandma (The laws of nature are fooled by other laws of nature not seen since the Beginning after the Before (the Big Bang so to speak). We will work this into a reasoned plausibility certainly with more clarity than Dante’s politics mixed within the circles. – Amorella

         2330 hours. I have to keep ‘knowing nothing’ in mind and heart here. Whatever you say, Amorella.  It is my choice to give your concepts and setting/plot/theme a try. Who am I to say what can and cannot be done in a fiction?

         Good. Post. - Amorella


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