21 May 2014

Notes - (final) Chapter 20 / sinking in / imaginary moment / Wilder

         Mid-morning. You are at Pine Hill Lakes Park near the earth dam waiting on Carol to complete her walk.

         0944 hours. Partly cloudy morning but the breeze feels good. Time to work on chapter twenty.

         Carol is back on the trail trimming honeysuckle overrunning the path in the woods. You have completed chapter twenty. Add, and we’ll post when convenient. - Amorella
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Chapter Twenty
Happenstance
The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies                                   
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On Judgment Day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.

            I, Merlyn, have this little ditty above memorized to the point it sets stemmed in letters out of which each four-leafed chapter dreams grow to clover size. I knead the dreams into a word stream of music for the heart and soul and mind with hope that when read, these stories cast a light into those living with an imagination that casts no shadow.











The Dead 20

            Merlyn awakens standing amongst the white foxglove and red poppy just east of the stage ruins. His eyes focus first on his mind's pillar, the giant Oak and on to the boulder and beyond to his hut. His eyes that are not slowly move to beyond the hut, the heather, the narrow woods and rest on six tall blades of grass by the river. Six, and a realization begins . . . Vivian.

            A billiard table rises from a short muscled contraction in a long fingered oak root pointing his way. In a relatively quick blink the felted table green appear empty save for a solid green ball number 6 directly in front of the far left corner pocket. With no cue ball present Merlyn’s curiosity sweeps across the green and merging lightning quick on the far cue spot as a solidifying yellow 1 ball, of equally size and weight rests on green. I am drawn to the 1 ball on the far cue spot. I must have scratched the cue ball but it doesn't appear pocketed. I am ready for anything but losing my Vivian to nothing but dusty bones in the material world.

            "You have only my soul to hold onto, Merlyn," coaches Vivian from afar.

            "The soul is a mystery," he grumbles. "I have only heart and mind to grasp you with."

            “This is not enough to hold me Merlyn,” her distant voice replies.
            A yellow and green ball, considers Merlyn, and yet who is the green? He picks up the cue and its soft leather-like tip kisses the yellow gently towards the green 6.
Now we are close enough for conversation. He says, "I am the one, Merlyn. Who might you be?"
            “I am Bracc's ancient ghost, cornered, green with envy, and ready for the pocket."
            "The cue's been scratched,” responds Merlyn with necessity to the rules.
            "I am stuck still, and in all honesty embarrassed I died in a resort of trickery, to convince the Living, that I could speak to the Dead."
            "But you are the Dead speaking in this, my fabled dreaming mind, Bracc. That is Grandma’s story not my own,” announces Merlyn.
            “Alas, I am done in,” mumbles Bracc.
            "You are on not in anywhere Bracc. There is no trickery here."

            "I am but a poor soul caught, trapped, holed up near a pocket."
            Merlyn quick-wittedly remarks, "The economics of the soul have nothing to do with pockets of poverty, I assure you my fellow shaman. You need to turn about like those other once racked other fellows similarly endowed round balls. This flat green is but a painting, man."
            Bracc responds, "As is your yellow, Merlyn."
            Merlyn shifts thought, "Two solids and a scratched cue, do you see meaning in this transient vision?"
            "My wonder is why I am here at all,” says Bracc.
            "I dreamt you, Bracc; rather Grandma brought you up to me.”
            "As a lesson?"
            "I think so, but you are here as a cross-segmentation of dreamlands — a pollination of sorts.
            Bracc the green ball whispers, "The faeries have captured us both?"
            "No faeries, here, Bracc, unless you find a faeryland in your soul,” states Merlyn directly.
            “The faeries are in me mind and heart but not me soul."
            "How do you know this?" asks a surprised and somewhat disjointed Merlyn.
            "Because faeries came about after creation not before," replies Bracc earnestly. "Tricks came after."
            I thought hearts did the traveling, surmises Merlyn. It appears there may be more to a soul than armor. He questions, "What do you know of the soul, Bracc?"
            Merlyn is asking a once-misguided shaman about the soul?  How can this be? "I know it is lonely, Merlyn," rolls from Bracc’s heartanmind. “Beyond this, I know next to nothing, Merlyn."
            "Whose voice was first then? I thought it Vivian’s.”
            "My own. I know it is not from heartanmind, and that is as honest an answer as I can give." Bracc pauses. "I have learned to be an honest man since my capture."
            "Who captured you?" asked Merlyn.
            "I do not know. I found myself in a sealed solid walled place. It had a door."
            "Did you not try it?"
            "Not for several thousand years I reckon, but when I did it opened and I was free. I do not know who held me or freed me, but it happened just as speaking to you has happened. Avalon is an enchanted place. I am learning many things even now."
            “This is my sanctuary not Avalon. Your heartanmind is learning what?” asks Merlyn.

            "How the soul teaches. That is what it seems but I do not know this."
            We are but entanglements of personality, conjures Merlyn in the moment. The human spirit of soul and heart and mind dances a threesome within the Living and the Dead. If matter can be in a bit quantum entanglement, a piece of Bracc, then what of me in basement of the dream and being of no matter at all? Thought alone, first, before the plowing of words and their immediate considerations. Faeries to berries and berries to fruit with thunder to toot. Lightning yellow balled be first and foremost and is carried through the soul of Vivian who else would be green with envy but myself?






The Brothers 20

            Robert says to Connie, "It looks like a day of rain. Let's go to a movie."

            She nods in agreement, replying, "I'll have to wash my hair. I'll call Cyndi first to see if they want to go. What do you want to see?"
            "Quartet" is re-playing at the Drexel on Main, We all enjoyed the film; let's go see it again."
*
            Late morning and the four are sitting in the northwest corner of Ernie and Pat’s Grill, Uptown Riverton, looking through the varied sheets of rain across State Street to the perky front window of Patricia's Flowers pressing on the staid white marbled Citizen's Bank. The two sisters are finishing their classic salads, mixed fruit cups and sharing a side of sweet potato fries while Robert has finished his an Italian Combo and Richard his Cuban Panini. Both are nibbling on their remaining sides of barbeque chips while waiting on Connie and Cyndi. Each had unsweetened ice tea with lemon with Richard sipping on his second glass of Coke Zero.
            Richard asks, "Anyone for a Graeter's ice cream?"
            After the movie," suggests Cyndi, "we can hardly finish our salads."
            "That's because you ate the sweet potato fries first."
            "And, you didn't even share them with us," declares Robert.

            "You could have ordered your own," quips Connie smiling.

            "It is hard to believe that Dustin Hoffman is directing. He was born in 1937," notes Cyndi to Robert.

            Smirking contentiously at his wife's remark, Rob quickly grins at Cyndi, "Not when you think back on The Graduate, Hoffman looked pretty young in those days."

            Richard chuckles and adds, "We were young back in 1967."

            "You were a quarter century," comments Connie and now we are all moving on to three-quarters of a century."

            Richard continues, "Speaking of three-quarters of a century, how old is Maggie Smith? She plays the grand lady Jean Horton in Quartet, and the old Dowager of Grantham in Downton Abbey."

            Cyndi corrects, "She is the Countess of Grantham."

            "Whatever. How old is Maggie?"

            "She was born 28 December 1934," says Robert glancing at his iPhone.

            Connie comments, "Maggie puts her heart and soul into her work. She is a wonderful actress." All ardently agreed.

            Richard asks, "I can understand her heart, Connie, but how does Dame Maggie put soul into her work? How does anyone put the soul into anything?"

            She responds, ”It's her enthusiasm, Richard, her passion."

            Cyndi quickly follows with, “It’s her quintessence."

            Robert checks his iPhone, “Quintessence, mostly I get references to the song, the music. I looked up 'phrase - heart and soul' and it is still reference to the music." He pauses to tap in more letters. "There is "Brevity is the soul of wit,' and 'wearing one's heart on his sleeve', but that is not what we are talking about here."

            "Love powers the heart," affirms Connie, "but what powers the soul?"

            "Passion powers the soul," states Robert as if it were a fact.

            "We need a definition first," claims Richard.

            "No, let's use a thesaurus, responds Robert. "Here, I have it. 'Spirit, Embodiment or Quintessence’. Cyndi's right with quintessence."

            "What's the difference between one's spirit and a ghost?" questions Connie cynically.

            Richard is readying a sarcastic response when Cyndi swiftly connects the two, "Like the Holy Spirit and the Holy Ghost."

            "We have argued this before," says Richard, "but let's say I agree with you that you have a soul. Let's say the soul is without mass but that it has an energy and  it carries information."

            "What kind of information?" asks Robert.

            "Let's say it is electromagnetic in some bazaar quantum mechanical way."

            "Richard," responds Cyndi, "let's don't follow Alice down that old rabbit hole."

            "No, seriously, I mean like light and radio waves can carry information. This physics can store a human self-awareness and memory. The soul can a natural entity rather than something supernatural?

            Rob adds, "Scientists can read our thoughts with signatures of the signals generated by firing neurons. Whether this can be worked into a container or soul I don't know."

            "I don't think of a person's heart and soul and the physics of light in the same breath," comments Cyndi dryly.

            “The soul is supposed to be our spirit,” adds Connie. “It’s our inner self, it doesn’t have to be supernatural.”
            Richard responds, “We’ll never define the soul scientifically then?”

            “It’s intangible, Richie,” declares Cyndi.

            Richard comments, “In my fiction, it’s a shell.”

            “So are you, Richie,” toys Connie.

            “Dickie’s a shell-game,” laughs Robert. They all chuckled light-heartedly.

            “This universe is just another stage,” pipes Richard. “We are all a piece of entertainment.”

            “For whom?” asks Robert, “the Dead in your story or the audience in the cemetery?”








Grandma's Story 20

Fifteen years have gone by and Criteria and Renaldo have never consummated their relationship or married. They are partners, story gatherers. In their travels, Criteria took Renaldo to Rome, Athens, Jerusalem and Cairo.

Criteria feels almost all narratives are derived from one original story, just as she senses all people are descendants of an Adam and Eve. Renaldo thinks the accounts are spawned by one’s spiritual nature. He doesn’t agree with Criteria that a Master First Story existed. He parallels with Pythagoras who noted some numbers are special and thus held sacred and that, likewise, some stories are special and sacred. The two continually discuss these issues but never argue because each secretly fears offending the other to the point it would destroy their now much extended soul-felt friendship.


Presently, the two, on horseback, are on the road from Rome to the Abbey of Saint Maurice and from the abbey they were to head north to Notre Dame du Clarier, the Cathedral of Sion in Valais.

"The Bishops of Sion and of the Abbey of Saint Maurice are rumored of creating a speculation," says Criteria amusingly, “I wonder what this is about?”

“A sin, no doubt,” mirrors Renaldo's chuckles. “If there is a good story, a sin is involved.” He had been assessing the founding his own story which is about their surviving the previous night’s quite unusual tornado, but he can’t conjure a sin to carry the wind in it.

            Reading his face Criteria declares, “In last night's cyclonic tempest, God could have taken our bodies and souls.”

            Renaldo responds, “I thought that. Aristotle, Pythagoras and Plato made allowances for the soul's survival -- a method by which the soul may travel from one body to another.”

            Criteria jokes, “Metatempsycosis, modernized ideas from the Gnostics but not Rome.”

            Renaldo abruptly states, “The Church says the body is resurrected, that the body is not separate from the soul.”

            “Pythagoras said the body was divided from the soul and that the soul could transmigrate from one body to another." Criteria takes pause then, “I like Pythagoras because he sometimes taught to an all woman audience, that one of the philosophical monastic orders was all women and they held their property in common.”

            “We hold our property in common too, Criteria,” adds Renaldo in laughter. “We are a monastic order of two.” They climb off their horses for a night’s rest and take out their bedding for under the stars. A bit later.

            “We are,” she says and snuggled in close, affectionately confirms, “We are one in our hearts.”

            Renaldo warmly kisses her forehead, "and our souls." They quickly fall asleep in each other’s arms.


            Criteria stirs at dawn, “Renaldo, are you awake?”

            “I was thinking about the soul and perhaps it is possible that an angel would hold of them if we both had died," comments the obviously awake Renaldo.

            Criteria sits up in interest. “How, pray tell, do you come to that conclusion?”

            Smiling contentedly he says, “Because an angel holds each of us in his hand?”

            After bread and fresh water they climbed on the horses and continued north on the road from Rome to St. Maurice.

            That evening after a meal of stewed goat meat and onions at the White Cross Inn the Frankish leader, Comets del Acqs III, interrupted them. His coat of arms clearly visible from a chain, he asks, “Good pilgrims, do you mind if I sit?”

            Both stood in politeness, “Kind Lord, of course not, replies Renaldo. “We heard you were staying at the inn. It is an honor, sire.”

            “You are a legend, sire,” professes Criteria, “as were your great, great grandfather and great, great grandmother, King Pharamond and Queen Argotta.

            Comets del Acqs eyes her carefully and comments, “I think you are a princess in disguise.”

            Criteria set a standard aristocratic smile, saying in Greek, “I am but a simple pilgrim, kind sir.”

            “And a scholarly one who knows her native language,” Comets replies. “I know your father and one of your brothers.”

            Renaldo gently interrupts, “Kind Lord, do you have a story for our scribing? I am sure Rome would enjoy the story from an illustrious a Lord as yourself.”

            He sat amused. Criteria and Renaldo listen. “I have a story. My grandfather had a daughter, Viviane of Avallon del Acqs. My great, great aunt married Prince Taliesin, the Arch Druid.”

            “Blasphemy in Rome, sire,” responds Renaldo while assessing the titled name, Viviane.

            Comet replies bluntly, “But not with the Franks, pilgrim. This is not Rome.”

            Criteria touches Comets del Acqs sleeve. “Indeed, Sir, it is not."

            “You are, Criteria, your father’s ever roaming daughter who is guided and protected by the monk, Renaldo, that I can see, and shall get word to your father as such.” He points, “I see that Pythagoras rests on the extra chair.”

            “Plato and Aristotle too,” adds Renaldo who wonders in silence, who is this Viviane?

            Criteria quickly remarks, “Renaldo is right, Plato, Aristotle and Pythagoras -- our two Greek columns and a pyramid.” She observes Comet del Acqs now boisterous grin and quietly gives thanks.







Diplomatic Pouch 20

            Morning, Blake lies in bed mulling his thoughts. These people know no more than we on such metaphysical things though they are twenty-thousand years ahead of us in their knowledge, society and technology. These people are no wiser than we; otherwise they wouldn't have stumbled around in our initial meetings. Friendly, Hartolite and even Yermey appear polite, kind and mannerly. We can be polite, kind and mannerly also. They are no better than we are when it comes to knowing who we are and why we are here. You would think they would have learned something about hearts and souls, at least given them more criteria. You would have thought that machinery like Ship would have a soul by now. We think we are that close, but the artificial intelligence is just like we are but less heart-bound. No, that might not be true. Ship appears to have a heart for we humanoids.


            Once up and a short time later Blake knocks on Pyl and Justine's door. Within minutes the three were walking the hall to breakfast. No sooner than they were settled with coffee, tea, milk, juice and bowls of cereal that Hartolite and Friendly entered into the room with Yermey following.

            Blake quickly draws conclusion that Pyl is attracted to Yermey for his mind and for no other reason. Blake also realizes that Justin shows hint of any jealousy so Blake dismissed that dark thought. With a lull in conversation Blake asks Friendly, "Last night we were talking about the soul. I am interested in your concept; do you people think of the soul as intellectual and emotional charged as we think of the mind and the heart?"

            Friendly smiles graciously, "These matters are perhaps easier to speak on in the freshness of morning.” She glances at her comrades and says, “we think of the soul as remaining neutral and immortal though not the same as Godofamily is immortal."

            Hartolite adds. "Our species and your own have similar thoughts on souls, hearts and minds. Each thinks of them separately and having no material weight and seemingly taken up no space within our physical selves. That is if you consider the mind to be a spiritual-like place beyond the thought processes of the brain."

            "We discern the spirit, the heartansoulanmind to be in our friends also; just as you do," reinforces Hartolite, “each is in our individual selves but it is also spiritually communal, at least that’s our culture’s view.”
           
            Blake comments somewhat in dismay, "You are some twenty-thousand years ahead of us and you are no further along? Last night, Yermey said that you have machinery that can detect a person's soul."
           
            "This is easier to do in our home language and loses something in translation. Our machinery cannot quantify the soul.”

            “We would never think to weigh your heartansoulanmind,” mutters Yermey in the dullness of the presentation. "It is madness to think on such a point."

            Pyl touches Yermey's hand with compassion, "It is madness; this is not how we three imagine the soul. We don't find the mind or even the soul as nearly as mysterious as the human heart." Her sentence ended with a softly humane smile.

            "That is another subject," comments Justin. “First, what can we say about the soul that we all agree with?

            "We can say," declares Yermey, "that the heartansoulanmind is immortal."

            Justin comments, "You continue to say heart and soul and mind like it is one word."
           
            "We look at it as if it were one so when speaking in English it flows as one word," responds Friendly ever so reserved and polite in this subject area.

            Justin thinks, Yermey make one’s heart and soul and mind sound like a trinity.
With strong interest Justin asks, "How did you come by this three words in one?"
            Friendly reasons, "I think it is our physical pouches that make the initial differences in our species, that is, our pouches provide a genuine difference on how we view the world." She glances to Yermey to continue.
           
            Yermey says, "Early on we were just like you. We had our families of hunters and gatherers, our tribes and our separate territories."

            "Particularly when we felt we were stuck on a single planet," interrupts Hartolite.
            "Yes," replies Yermey with eyes on Hartolite, "when we were on a single planet." He paused with wide eyes and open thought and remarks, "Growing pouched is a community. We are heartansoulanmind first. Growing pouched is as much psychological as it is physical in our species. Our small groups evolved from the pouch concept. This group evolves into our species as a family unit. We are connected physically through sharing, just as our individual heartsanminds share an individual soul, an immortal shell," Yermey pauses to gather himself from talking too fast, "to us, the shell is but an extension of the pouch, you see."
              Being open, frank and a bit irritated with Yermey’s somewhat dogmatic style and mixed sense of logic, Pyl looks Yermey in the eye and says, "I have a womb, not a pouch. What's that worth to you Yermey?”

***


         Mid-afternoon and after lunch. Carol is on page 14 of Vince Flynn’s The Last Man and is not sure she is going to read much more. You are at the far north lot of Pine Hill Lakes Park under partial tree shade. First, skim over this chapter to remind yourself what is going on. – Amorella

         1432 hours. That I’ll do. I am trying to recollect the last chapter but it has faded way. This is just what happened after a day of giving a Brit lit/history background lecture. It was done until another semester or another year. Well, this is not exactly true. I keep the lectures in mind for about a week or so. Wikipedia is so awesome. I remember ‘selections’ of the events in a particular literary period but I cannot remember details without a quick check. Basically, here though, I forget the general as well as the specific. How these books get completed is beyond me.

         1445 hours. I completed the scan, now what?        

         All four sections are to be moved together in one unit. We are going to weave the dream stories together in this chapter. – Amorella

         1447 hours. I should make a working copy and drop it into Word for easier working then when completed, drop it into Page. I am not sure how this is going to be accomplished. Merlyn is the central character though so I assume the story will pivot around him.

         One would think but that is not the case. It will pivot around the Supervisor. – Amorella

         1450 hours. This is indeed a surprise.

         First, copy the chapter onto Word. – Amorella

         1457 hours. I made two working copies.

         Address the number of words in each section as well as total chapter words presently. – Amorella

         1502 hours.  The segment totals are: The Dead – 795 w;  The Brothers – 776 w; Grandma’s Story – 742 w;  Diplomatic Pouch – 724 w; with a total of 3,037 words not including the Chapter Preface which is 97 words.

        You are home. Now, let this sink in. Post. – Amorella

         1808 hours. The weather has turned dark and heavy rain is imminent. At the same time (coincidence no doubt) I am thinking on the Supervisor and how this chapter twenty-one is going to be. The word that comes to mind is spooky – our black cat is sitting curled by the front window and I can see an open right yellow eye after background thunder to the west. She is looking to me. Ha, ha. Spooky. The rain begins at 1814 hours. Most cool drama in my mind. Spooky opens both yellow eyes and watches me owl-like, powers down and those yellow eyes lids close leaving me a faceless black cat for observation. (1817)

         Nothing like a little theatre for one, eh, orndorff. – Amorella

         It was fun while it lasted, actually it is getting a little lighter but that is distanced by soft thunder to the west by northwest. I am having a problem getting my head around writing with the pivot being the Supervisor. Even in the notes I want to drop the italics onto the preceding ‘the’. As I wait in the wings with the Supervisor alone on stage I think of the wondrous Oz and as a small child being as frightened as Dorothy awaiting his presence.

         Orndorff, don’t get carried away in the imaginary moment. I, Amorella, am the Master here not my caretaker creation who oversees the Dead. Relax go watch some television we’ll come back to this later. Post. - Amorella


         2109 hours. We had left over Papa John’s pizza for supper – as excellent as it was last night. We watched CBS and NBC News as well as the last two episodes of “Revenge” which is now done for the season. There were two scenes adapted from Shakespeare in the last showing. Lots of Shakespearian scenes in the series. This makes it more fun to watch. Carol went up to bed and I am not sure what I am going to do here presently except to check my email.

         Let’s wait until tomorrow to work on chapter twenty-one. – Amorella

         2116 hours. I do feel better about it now that the imaginary spookiness has fluttered away. I cannot put myself in the Supervisor’s character; doing so makes me feel self haunted, which is very weird. I have no idea how Amorella will set the scene. I cannot think of a play or a piece of literature to adapt from other than “Our Town” (and that just came to me in the moment).

        Post. - Amorella 

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