04 June 2014

Notes - AM / Brothers 2.1 draft / Grandma 2.1 draft

         Early for you to be at the park, but here you are. Carol is out walking. – Amorella

         0805 hours. Last night I had the memory of being asked to take off my beret in Westminster Abbey. The older fellow looked at me rather sternly and said, “This is a church.” I knew this of course but at the moment we had just left Poets’ Corner and I was thinking museum. I dutifully took off my beret and felt rather embarrassed mostly because my father, in his later years, told me to take my hat off when we were eating at a respectable restaurant. Then a couple of years ago when we were at the Wayside Inn near Concord a lady berated me in the parking lot because I had worn my beret while eating in the restaurant. I told her, “My father didn’t like me wearing a hat either . . . so that is probably the reason I do it.” She left in a huff like I had spoiled her dinner. The Westminster Abbey incident was an error. I was thinking about Chaucer because we had just visited his burial sight.

         This got you to wondering about the chapter format and segment set up in the Merlyn books. Each segment is under or just over 800 words. None that you remember are under 700 words. This focused you on the length of the Prologue characters in The Canterbury Tales and you wonder if you unwittingly borrowed the segment format from Chaucer. Now, you think, “That was rather arrogant of me.” – Amorella

         0817 hours. It was, if this is true, that I borrowed from him. I will have to check the word length of some of his characters in the Prologue to see if there is any correlation. Of course this is just circumstance and means nothing in itself except to me. – Why dig so deep as to copy Chaucer? Sheer laziness would have prevented it. I really don’t know why I waste such time pondering such details that are of no real importance.

         Good reason to stop, boy. I would like you to mention the incident in Westminster though in Brothers 2.1. – Amorella

         0824 hours. Whatever you find useful is fine with me. Time to just sit and enjoy the birds singing on such a cloudy day. Rain is coming, or so they say.

         1227 hours. I finished Brothers 2.1.

         You also completed your forty minutes of exercise. Add and post. – Amorella

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The Brothers 2.2 © 2014, rho

         “Can you believe the girls are still looking for new hats?” gripes Richard.

         Robert, sitting in the driver’s seat, sighs, shakes his head sideways in his typically reasonable manner, “Deal with it Richie.”

         “It just pisses me off. We bought our caps in sight of ten minutes, and we have been waiting in the car ever since.”

         “I don’t know why we do this every year. The women go out and buy all this stuff for Christmas and want to have it wrapped even though we know what we are getting, even the daughters know.” He fiddles with the steering wheel of the Lexus, “It is just a waste of time.”

         “It’s a cultural façade,” comments Richard nonchalantly.

         “I’m not talking about Christmas. I’m talking about the present wrapping.”

         “That’s just time wasting, like you said. I mean it was okay to wrap all that stuff when the kids were young and didn’t know any better, but our kids have a kid.”

         “They’ll just say it’s for the kid,” mimics Robert also nonchalantly.

         “Women.”

         “You know the old cliché.” The twin brothers’ minds recollected the old banalities about marriage and relationships.

         “Sometimes it would be nice to not be here, to just go away to some deserted isle and contemplate the absurdity,” says Richard.

         Robert picks up on the comment and taps his brother on the shoulder, grins and comments, “That reminds me of the incident in London where the fellow wanted to kick you out of Westminster. I wanted to be on a deserted island at the moment and contemplate the absurdity of the charge.”

         “It was absurd,” laughs Richard. “We had just left the Poets’ Corner and the old geezer says to me, “This is a church, hat off please.” I immediately felt bad, he thought. People were always telling me to take my beret off out of respect; they didn’t say that but that is what the meant. We had just visited Chaucer’s encased remains. He was the first who sparked an interest in the human condition. “Whan that Aprille with his shoures soote; The drought of Marche hath perced to the roote.”

         “What are you thinking about bro?”

         “Geoffrey Chaucer. He changed my life with . . .
         “And specially, from every shires ende
         Of Engelond, to Caunterbury they wende,
         The holy blisful martir for to seke,
         That hem hath holpen, when that they were seke”

         “A good doctor would have been better than the martyr, don’t you think?” asks Robert respectfully.

         “We took that pilgrimage too, Robbie.”

         “We did, but we had poems to write didn’t we Dickie.”

         “People had an innocence in those days. And, even today, at least when we were there the last time, a single burning candle sat on the floor near the Chair of the first Archbishop, St. Augustine. I thought that very cool. Inspiring even, that in this day and age someone would light a candle in memory of Thomas Becket, murdered at the cathedral.”

         “It was inspiring that anyone remembers,” adds Robert thinking on one of his poems in remembrance of . . ..”

         Just then, Connie and Cindy come out of Macy’s with their load of hat bags. Both are sister chatting – listening and talking as if it were a simultaneous translation in the works. Twinning is a process as much as it is a function but these two aren’t twins the brothers are.

         “Finally, we are out of here,” comments Richard with relief.

         “I couldn’t have stood another minute,” adds Robert, whose point is missed by Richard.

         Once the women had loaded the car and were sitting comfortably in the back seat, Connie enthusiastically asks, “Where are we going for lunch?”

         “I would like the Tea and Sandwich Express,” replies Cindy.

         “Why don’t we park there,” says Robert.

         “And, we’ll walk across the street to Taco Bell,” completes Richard.

         “What have you two been talking about?”

         “Memories mostly,” responds Robert.

         “Were we in the conversation?” questions Connie.

         “Of course. We were thinking about our last trip to London,” notes Richard, “and Westminster.”

         “Oh,” says Cyndi, “you were talking about being asked to take off your beanie.”

         “Beanie, that’s a good one,” notes Rob.

         “You know it’s a beret,” directs Richard.

         She responds, “Just trying to get your goat, dear.”

         “Remember when you two were college freshmen and had to wear those ridiculous beanies,” says Connie.

         “I kind of liked them,” comments Cyndi. “They both looked cute and innocent.”

         “No one’s is ever innocent,” remarks Robert.

         “Babe’s are,” badgers Cyndi.

         “Depends on their age, isn’t that right, Robbie.”

         “Hey, our two babes are always innocent,” replies his twin. All four laugh.

***


         1716 hours. The time has rolled by. I have completed Grandma 2.1. It appears intact. I manipulated the ingredients into a new recipe by cutting the work in half and dropping it together on the run, so to speak. It appears to have worked. I will better be able to judge this in the morning.

         You had the time, Carol was either napping or on her Mac. Here it is. Load and post, boy. No more tonight. – Amorella

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Grandma’s Story 2.1 © 2014, rho


         Criteria and Renaldo had a big wedding in Greece. Plenty of money flowed from Criteria side of the family. Once established that the Queen of the Scotland is a cousin. Criteria buys land and a comfortable house fit for the now Lady and Lord in Scotland. Both give up previous Catholic duties as story gatherers and live peacefully on the Isle of Arran off the southwest coast of Scotland where the warmer Gulf Stream flows. The birth of their first child brings immediate problems, says Grandma.

*

         Criteria lies exhausted. Two servants, Kirsten and her sister, Flora, work to control the birth baby’s periodic seizures. Between the baby’s muscle twitching and salivating, the child stares blankly and falls limp. The babe rejects any substance. Crying would start then stop. The open eyes become motionlessness. This sets Lord Renaldo on his knees in fully intense private quiet prayer.

         In her late thirties Criteria is seized by the newly felt pain of a mother’s world. Immediately recognizing that praying is not the answer here.        

         Two days and nights fly by. The newborn boy sporadically takes in nourishment then lies still only to be plagued with outbursts and seizures.  Everyone in the household becomes nearly physically exhausted and emotionally devastated.

         This child should not take so long to die is the silent unshared thinking. This concludes with a ‘May the good Lord take now.’ The unsettling wonder is who the prayer is actually for.

         “His head is fighting his body,” says Kirsten.

         “How can a newborn know which is which?” asks Flora.

         “Angels know things,” notes Renaldo. “He is a fighter.” He thinks, this boy is a warrior. If he survives, he will become a warrior for God. If he dies, he will rise as a new angel among the rest. His body moves in spite of his head. Doubts rise like blackened suns. A retired order of God should not be the Lord of anything. What would Criteria have me do besides pray? What else can a retired monk do?        

*

         “I see a runner,” says Flora the next mid-morning. “A strange man running this way.” Silence for a moment.

          “It is Merlyn!” shouts Renaldo, “Merlyn! Merlyn is here at our manor! Merlyn is here!”

         Tam, the head servant, opens the door and immediately bows. “It is an honor, a blessing. The baby. You came to help the baby.”

         Merlyn acknowledges the bow with a slighter one. He hears the immediate cry up the stairs. He commands,  “Let me see this child. I shall have a way with him.”

         Merlyn holds him. The swaddling clothed boy trembles at the fingers while his elbows shake to a different rhythm. “Get me sea salt,” he orders, and head servant Tam is on his way. Merlyn holds the child carefully and observes the boy’s every movement and recognizes there was an order to it. The twitching slows and the blank staring begins. With a blink the boy drools. Limpness. A few drops of urine. The tiny, vulnerable seeming infringed upon body stiffens. The twitching begins at the extremity of one limb or another. An elbow or a knee would then quiver. Trembling and quivering and crying or screaming commences. Merlyn sees the boy in and out of this world both at once and suddenly foreshadows his own fate -- how it is it that I, Merlyn, will experience this terrible sensation in my own life? How is it that I will find myself in two places at once like this poor child . . . I am stuck frozen and flat in this future place. The cold stone surrounds a pond of stars. I am here then and now. I am the shaman dancing. A shaman I do not know looks at me and points to a not so bright star, and says “We are from there,” then he points to the soil beneath my feet, and continues, “to here.” Here, his vision ends.

*

         It seems like half a day, which it is not, when Tam returns with a sack of sea salt. Merlyn makes a solution in a bowl of water and put a cloth to soak within it. He takes the cloth and squeezes a few drops into the child’s mouth. He does this several times in the afternoon, and thus Merlyn saves the firstborn son of Lady Criteria and Lord Renaldo. By evening the young babe begins to become a stronger, healthier and well-reasoned child.

Merlyn the Magician has an unknowing trick up his sleeve
His mind is in a nature for his dreams to slide and weave.

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