22 August 2014

Notes - it is a rule / chapter titles /

         Mid-morning. The day is dark and heavy with humidity with lot of lightning and subsequence of cannon-like rumblings throughout the night. You are wondering about GMG.One and how the proof is coming along at BookBaby. They said it would be ten days – why don’t you check it, boy. – Amorella

         1050 hours. I had a nap. I did check. BookBaby and they sent me a note on 12 August that I should have the new proof within ten business days so that would make it next week, the 26th.

         That was easy enough. No sense in using mental energy on concern when there is no need to do so. – Amorella

         1056 hours. That is an interesting statement. I would think there is no reason to waste mental energy on any sort of concern when there is little or nothing that can be done.

         Humanity takes over, boy, and a person worries or becomes anxious when a real need to worry arises. In here, ask the Living or the Dead. – Amorella

         Do you want to exploit this, boy? – Amorella

         1101 hours. No. I have no need or want to do so Amorella. There is enough darkness in this world already, no need to worry about the next, fiction or not.

         Post. – Amorella

         1105 hours. Your dark humor is sometimes unsettling. I would just as soon let this commentary go. I don’t know why I even thought to exploit it. “Can I use this?” just popped up out of the blue. I tried to shove it back, that’s when you asked if I wanted to exploit this – to bring the thought to light, no doubt.

         I need you to remain transparent, boy. Otherwise I cannot be of assistance. It is a rule. – Amorella

         1113 hours. I must be kept in context. I understand this. Without the context there is no authenticity from which I can continue writing. This is still an experiment in writing from one’s authenticity and even if you are imagination you have to remain authentically so for me to continue writing. This is an existential act in set conditions. I agree, it is a rule as basic as grammar and form. - rho


         Mid-afternoon. You picked up a take out lunch from the Italian Street Restaurant on Mason-Montgomery and ran some errands as well as straightened up the desktop to work on Chapter Four. – Amorella

         1550 hours. We had a late lunch. Carol has been working on washing clothes most of the day since we are going to be gone for a week. King’s next door will check on everything and feed and care for the cats. Tim will probably mow the grass as we have had two inches of rain in the last couple of days – everything is greening up.  We had rain and lots of thunder last night. Sometimes when it is out of the northeast we hear a secondary echo-like effect of long rumbles out of the Little Miami River Valley, which is about three miles to our east. As we make our way down into the valley it is like we are in the beautiful West Virginia hill/mountain country. This is a very nice place to live – very pretty. It also reminds us of the Virginia side of the Washington Beltway. What is the chapter theme for chapter four?

         Let’s use ‘Reasonable Wonder’. – Amorella

         This is an odd choice. I don’t equate wonder with reasonable.

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reasonable – adjective

1 (of a person) having sound judgment; fair and sensible: no reasonable person could have objected.

• based on good sense: it seems a reasonable enough request | the guilt of a person on trial must be proved beyond reasonable doubt.

• archaic (of a person or animal) able to think, understand, or form judgments by a logical process: man is by nature reasonable.

2 as much as is appropriate or fair; moderate: a police officer may use reasonable force to gain entry.

• fairly good; average: the carpet is in reasonable condition.

• (of a price or product) not too expensive: a restaurant serving excellent food at reasonable prices | they are lovely shoes and very reasonable.

ORIGIN Middle English: from Old French raisonable, suggested by Latin rationabilis ‘rational,’ from ratio.
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wonder – noun

a feeling of surprise mingled with admiration, caused by something beautiful, unexpected, unfamiliar, or inexplicable: he had stood in front of it, observing the intricacy of the ironwork with the wonder of a child.

• the quality of a person or thing that causes wonder: Athens was a place of wonder and beauty.

• a strange or remarkable person, thing, or event: the electric trolley car was looked upon as the wonder of the age.

• [ as modifier ] having remarkable properties or abilities: a wonder drug.
• [ in sing. ] a surprising event or situation: it is a wonder that losses are not much greater

ORIGIN Old English wundor (noun), wundrian (verb), of Germanic origin; related to Dutch wonder and German Wunder, of unknown ultimate origin.

Selected and edited from the Oxford/American software
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         1615 hours. What comes to mind is “surprise mingled with sensibility” – this too is an odd combination. It is like you [Amorella] having this comment after my reading the chapter – “What did you expect, boy?”

         You can always change these chapter titles after the fact. – Amorella

         1622 hours. I would not do that because if I change the theme title all it might mean is that I missed the point. I assume there is a point to the titles.

         Rightly so, boy. Post. - Amorella


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