05 September 2014

Notes - Stats for Ch. 3-4 / Ch 4, GMG.Two near final draft /

         Last night in the bath you came up with regurgitated concepts that don’t really go anywhere. The spiritual leads to the physical and the physical returns to the spiritual with added perspective as if this is what life is all about. – Amorella

         0904 hours. You are right. That is no doubt what I was thinking but I didn’t realize it at the time; arrogance on my part even though it was unconscious. Another lesson. Why would I even think, unconsciously or not, that I had in my head a philosophy incorporating what life is all about? I know better. Self-deception; what is the intent? Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar. I need a nap.

         You are over at Pine Hill Lakes Park sitting in the shade waiting for Carol to complete her walk. Let’s work on Dead Four. – Amorella

         1018 hours. I completed Dead 4 and have the stats for chapters three and four of book two.

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Ch. 3  – Leafing
Words - 2836 (due to chess notations)*
Sentences – 179 *
Words per Sentence – 14.0 *
Sentences/Paragraph – 2.6
Passive Sentences – 1%
Flesh Reading Ease - 100.0
Flesh-Kincaid Grade Level – 1.5

Ch. 4  – Reasonable Wonder
Words - 789 
Sentences - 63
Words per Sentence – 12.4
Sentences/Paragraph – 2.4
Passive Sentences – 4%
Flesh Reading Ease - 100.0
Flesh-Kincaid Grade Level – 0.8

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         You drove Carol home for a large trash bag. She found piles of cans a group must have left and she is cleaning them up before the rains as they were close to bank. Now you are back, parked facing east in the shade up by the earthen dam. – Amorella

         1045 hours. Glad to have this completed. Now I have to put chapter four together for posting.

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FOUR  © 2014 rho GMG.Two
Reasonable Wonder

            The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On judgment day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.



The Dead 4
            “Did you have trouble finding this place Merlyn?” asks Socrates.
            “I came from Mother Glevema’s private sanctuary to Eleusis Street at the northwest corner of Lyceum. So this is the place where the first Rebellion began, The Mikroikia. I suppose Aranos is still present.”
            An older Greek looking no different than he did in the ninth century before the common era when Homer was on earth telling his versions of The Iliad and The Odyssey appears and smiling. “Will you have wine?” asks Aranos.
            “You were here witnessing Sophia, Mario, Salamon and Thales draw the plans,” says Merlyn.
            Aranos laughs, “As though it was yesterday.”
            Yesterday, thinks Merlyn, holds a different meaning, here and now, in this cafe. Time exists; the present exists as a memory/future dream might to we Dead. How to explain this to the Living?  
Socrates looks at the wall painting just to the left of the front door and to the right of the entrance to another side room. The painting shows a small temple. Above the frieze is the pediment, and its center, the tympanum, is painted odd turquoise colors. He is suddenly struck by these particular sky tones while Merlyn sits across from him in thought.
Why with the mix of dark and medium turquoises in the centered tympanum sky," wonders Socrates, "when the outline of the pediment is gold? Two Doric gold columns hold up the pediment of the front corners of the temple. The wall painting surround is a firebrick red with two coiling gold serpents as symbolic decoration underneath the frieze of cooks at work in the kitchen. The turquoise stands alone as the sky in the tympanum. Why the turquoise and not blue for the sky? A blue and gold contrast would go better together.  Socrates asks old Aranos, “Who painted the mural?” 
Aranos grins, “I did. I remembered it from life, from my own eatery. I loved the place so much the family built this. This is my public sanctuary; I am here most of the time. I help passer-bys carry on conversations. I am content.” 
 “Why is the tympanum painted turquoise?” 
“The original artist did that, no one knows why he chose those colors. In life, this artist with a good flask of wine was asked once at my original Mikroikia. He said he didn’t know, that it just came to him, and afterwards he liked it so he kept it that way. To be honest, I liked it myself, the color is rather soothing.” 
Socrates questions, “I assume it represents the color of the sky.”
“A troubled sky by the look of it, like a storm might be brewing somewhere a ways off.” 
            Aranos smiles, “And, it is soothing because it looks like a coming storm. As you know, Merlyn, it wasn’t until the mutual compromise that the recent second Rebellion that we had a sun.” Aranos looks at the painting, saying, “Perhaps it is time to put this away.”
            Nothing goes away, thinks Socrates.
            “Who is going away?” asks Merlyn.
            Aranos leaves Socrates and Merlyn to their favorite wine-in-a-taste of memory to meet a foursome strolling in from the eighteenth century to sit at the bar.
            “The wine that isn’t here is going away,” says Socrates who punctuates the statement with a laugh.
            Merlyn smiles mischievously, “And the glass that holds the wine which we taste does not exist any more than we do.”
            “We do perceive the sensation of taste, but if we exchange cups . . ..” Socrates trades him the glass for Merlyn’s, “ . . . and we drink “
            “We still taste our personal sense of wine,” responds Merlyn. “I cannot taste your memory of a favorite wine and you cannot taste mine.”
            “Why is this?” asks Socrates. “We recognise ourselves, our species and from our fellow ghosts, the marsupial-humanoids. We can have dialogue but we cannot experience each other’s experience of reality any more than we two can. I could better accept this when we are living but not now.”
            “Physically we were built to follow function, to survive on Earth – that’s what brains and sex were for. These marsupial-humanoid spirits say we are a spiritual combination of heartansoulanmind.
            “What are the dreams for Merlyn. The visions. We know their form as we live within dreams and visions. We share our dreams but we cannot share our wines. Why are you sharing the experience of being Dead with the Living? What is the sensation for the Living?”
            “It was a request we asked for,” retorts Merlyn, “to change the perspective of the Living so they might live better.”
            “But why, Merlyn?” replies Socrates. “How does this effect our own condition? How does it really effect theirs?           
            “Maybe that’s the humor,” says Merlyn with a dark smile.
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The Brothers 4


            Richard sits in his favorite stuffed chair in the living room. Here it is two weeks until Christmas. He scratches his head with his left hand. I could get wife a book. I have never seen such passionate mystery readers as Cyndi and Connie. Who are their favorite writers? A whole litany of mystery writers in our bookcases and at the moment I can’t think of a one of them. I’ll get them both an equal gift certificate at one of their favorite hands on bookstores. 
What a mix the two are, thinks Richard. The girls have their books. Robert has his poetry; I have my writings. We all have our passions. I wonder where are passions come from?
Robert knocks on the front door and walks in. “Hey, what’s happening?’
Richard responds, “You sound like daughter, except she says, ‘Hey, what’s up?’ but it is the same tone.”
Robert smiles, “You got nothing going on then.”
“Well, yeah. I have been thinking about what to get Cyndi and Connie for Christmas.”
“How about a gift certificate at Barnes and Noble or Amazon, Richie?”
“That’s a good idea. I hadn’t thought of that,” replies Richard.
Rob continues, “It doesn’t entail much work. I like that part. Nothing worse than spending a lot of time trying to think up something.” He pauses, “Remember those shear nighties we got them at Victoria Secrets?”
“Yeah, Rob. Cyndi still has hers in the drawer. It has never been worn as far as I know.”
“Same with Connie. It sets in a drawer. She didn’t take it back either. What a waste. We thought we were doing well.”
We were idiots to go into that store. We were the only men shopping.
“What was Victoria’s Secret,” asks Robert.
“A Scotsman,” comments Richard with a smile. He adds, “Why don’t we go Uptown and split a medium pizza Homer’s.”
“Sounds good to me. I’ll drive,” replies Rob. “Didn’t the four of us see movie about the Queen and her lover?”
“Yeah, it was after Albert died. Do you have the Jag?”
“Yeah, the women are bringing the groceries over here eventually.”
Shortly they park and walk to Homer’s. Once inside they ordered before sitting down. Once seated Richard nonchalantly asks, “Why do we have such a passion for ice cream and cheese?”
Robert comments, “Grandpa was a milk man, he worked for Borden’s for forty years.”
“So, passions are inherited, why you become a surgeon and me a teacher. No one in the family has been in medicine or higher education.”
Robert comments, “No one had the time in those days.”
“So, today, you think we have more time for our passions?”
“Our kids do. Look at them, they pretty much do what they want when they want to do it.”
“Trips abroad. Ski trips. White water rafting, even parachuting.”
“Yeah, isn’t that amazing. I wouldn’t jump out of a plane for any amount of money.”
“Julie and Jennifer paid to jump. They said it was a whim,” says Robert in a hint of wonder.
            In short order the drinks and pizza were served and heartily eaten. Soon they were on their way home. Richard asks, “I wonder if we are born with our passions?”
            “I doubt it,” remarks Rob. “Most are born with instincts to survive, but that doesn’t mean we have a passion for living.”
            “I have a passion for family, scholarship, chess and writing. I can’t think of anything else at present, but I don’t have a passion for living.”
            Robert takes a moment to reconsider, “I have a passion for the living; it was my job to better peoples’ health, to save people’s lives. I have a passion for saving lives – not for life itself.”
            “Why is that? Neither one of us has a passion for life.”
            Rob smiles, “We are existentialists by nature.”
            “Do you think we were born that way? Nobody else in the family has been an existentialist as far as I know. I don’t know what our kids are but they are not existentialists,” replies Richard. “None of us go to church with any regularity. If someone asks, I say I was raised Protestant,” Richard breaks into a laugh, “no one has ever had the guts to ask for clarification.”
            Robert echoes the common laugh, “That’s good, Richie. I’m a surgeon. No one has ever asked me.” They continue laughing.
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Grandma’s Story 4

          This is Grandma, and I want you to meet Sarah first. She was twenty when her Grandfather, Lord Thomas died in 779. This is a selection of what Sarah had on her mind and memory at eighty years of age.
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            ‘Some women are shields, but not me. I strike first and move everyone to cover if need be. It has been this way since the death of Robert in the year of our Lord, 807. We have land. We have sheep. I am tired of both. Have I never been anywhere else? I am old and people expect me to die soon. I am ready.’
            Sarah found a stronger alliance with her Grandmother after hearing of her Uncle Jacob and Aunt Ruth’s murders and their land taken in Viking raids of 783. Had she and Robert not left to live on Grandmother Hilda’s estates, they would have been dead too.
            ‘Thank God Daniel had been saved from the worst of the Viking raids by Treasa, who had been in the kitchen making pastries for the dinner that night of Lord Thomas’ death.
            Daniel had his family’s wealth well hidden. Afraid to claim his lordship’s title upon marrying his “Sweet Treasa”, Daniel later discovered a looted royal notation from Queen Hrethel, a Geat of South Sweden. Daniel forged the document to show that he is directly related to dead Queen to prove his royal ancestry. Cousin Daniel and Treasa live on the mainland now, near the River Clyde and the Highlands. Their legal names became Frodisharg and Vigdisdottir.
            As one who could read and write in several languages, he traded the plundered church and historical relics and made quite a name for himself in ancient Glasgow. Along the way to further wealth, he discovered the family’s large oak table; the one Merlyn had rested his real arms on. He and Treasa kept the family heirloom and told their families’ stories of Renaldo and Criteria and Merlyn, always in modification to fit the ancient Scandinavian sagas. Frodisharg’s well-known family watchwords were: “It pays to have knowledge, but first it pays to have wealth.”
            Frodisharg’s words are best remembered by his son Wilfred when told, “Our greatest treasure is the old oak table.”
“Yes, it is,” said Wilfred.
“It is priceless, son. Never sell it.”
Wilfred smiled politely, “It is your table Father, not mine.”
“It is not my table. The table is a legacy in itself. Selling this table, is selling family. This table belonged to great, great, great grandfather, Lord Renaldo in the six hundreds.”
“Lord and Lady,” scorns Wilfred. “We are Viking blood, not English. Do you have a record of this?” asks Wilfred matter-of-factly mimicking his father discussing buying a relic. Daniel does not bat a sardonic eye and blatantly comments, “You are the record, son. Are you about to sell yourself short?”
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            Sarah watches intently as her two sons, James and John, enter her room. They assume she has called them to talk of her fortunes and how the land and sheep are going to be divided into two separate enterprises. Each assumes that once the legalities are signed they can get about their individual lives. The first papers are not such legalities, but genealogy of the family instead. Each receives a copy that each child had originally drawn up as an odd requirement for inheriting the land and sheep. Grandma interrupts herself, “Here is the conversation that these long dead still remember.”
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            “You and your wives have both done a good job in raising yourselves, your children, and your grandchildren,” says Sarah. “As such I have further training for you after I’m gone.”
            “What might that be, Mother?” questions John.
            She looks in his long adult eyes, “You need to go where the money will be, not under your feet where it sits to be walked on by others.”
            “Pardon, mum?” replies John thinking the worst of nightmares.
            Sarah detects a slight smirk on James’ face, and fires her eyes his direction quietly thundering, “That goes for you too, James. This land and sheep are sold upon my death. I want you to take the money and your families and head southeast to a place called Pucklechurch. I have there secured land and sheep for you both.”
            James and John knew as much about raising sheep and holding land as their mother both they did not know the extent of their mother’s management and wealth. The two men better understood their father’s and mother’s early business watchwords though, follow the money. James and John were ready when their day came.
Sheep and land used to make one feel grand
When economic security suited the family’s plan –
Another family stable: an old oak table.
To continue this Grandma’s once a fable.

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Diplomatic Pouch 4

            The six are sitting informally at their usual locations around the table in the mid-morning. Friendly has notes. This has not occurred before.
            “What is this about?” asks Justin. “Is there a problem in navigation?”
            Yermey breaks into a grin saying, “This is about navigating our culture. We waited until we got to know each other a bit better and can be comfortable with certain social truths that were adapted long before we came upon the scene.”
            “This is about how we were taught – social programs as it were,” adds Hartolite.
            “We do not wholehearted agree with these rules but we do not need to,” comments Friendly who desperately wishes there were not ten of them.
            “Just tell us the rules,” says Blake suddenly thinking of the common safety rules listed at public and private swimming pools.
            Friendly begins, “First, allow me to read the rules in total, then we will take questions. These are the social rules children are taught to grow and mature with. Children and adults alike are expected to do their best to live by common sense within them.
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The Rules
            1.            Respect the Concept of Godofamily,
            2.            Honor the Dead,
            3.            Be a Friend,
            4.            Work to Serve the Family, so the Individual may be Freer,
            5.            Be Unselfish Helping others and with Hope,
            6.            Be Free within socially cultural Limits,
            7.            Give up arrogance and false pride for better Survival of the greater Family,
            8.            Nature loans us Life; this allows us to Lease most tangible Goods so We might be Free of material wealth.
            9.            Give Love to those who are in Need; and,
            10.            Allow a nonviolent social world to exist so the Individual may become content in herorhis self-dignity.
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            “Our cultures will not react positive with this rules,” comments Blake.
            “These rules are not practical. We need, we demand laws on the book,” says Justine while thinking people break rules all the time.
            “On the whole, I like them,” smiles Pyl, “but they would be considered very naive on our planet.”
            “Besides,” adds Blake unthinkingly, “we are primates.”
            “How do you promote such rules?” asks Pyl in a cynical manner with a disgusting eye towards her brother at the same time. “What is the social propaganda used to manipulate people into this ruled conformity?”
            Friendly responds, “Our citizens learn to obey this rules because they tend to free one within herorhis human spirit. People have to learn to make personal judgments and they do so during home and social schooling. Early on students are told that in making tough personal decisions it is usually good to consult people you love and who love you. This training begins in, uh, pre-kindergarten. On or near one’s sixteenth birthday, each student who is deemed socially and personally responsible is given two pills. This is the way we say it, “These pills are for your own good so that you will think first. Both pills appear the same on the outside.”
            Friendly, Hartolite and Yermey take out their own pills as testament. Hartolite continues, “You can see the pills are identical. She pauses instinctively. One pill contains a poison that will kill you quickly and without pain. The other pill makes you very sick and is quite painful for long enough that you will wish you had taken the other one, but you will recover and hopefully survive a wiser person.”
            “What happens to the poisoned pill once you have survived,” asks Blake.
            Yermey says, “The remaining pill is taken away and destroyed. If both are taken, one recovers but the pain is generally longer. At least that is what people say.”
            “The point,” notes Hartolite, “is that each is given the personal responsibility for herorhis own life at the age of sixteen.”
            “It is similar to allowing people in your cultures the legalities of driving a car – freedom and responsibility,” comments Friendly in a cheerful tone.
            “I thought you people cared so much about personal safety,” says Pyl in some disappointment.
            “We do,” replies Yermey. “The pill is built only for the individual genetics of each person. Taking someone else’s pill gives the individual a terrible body rash which when discovered allows medical personal to determine whose pill was taken. This happens rarely because we can show the individual the scientific and witnessed proof of the pills ability to work as advised.”
            “Has there ever been an error recorded?” asks Blake.
            “Only one,” replies Friendly. “Yermey is the only one in fifteen thousand years who discovered how to tell the two pills apart, and after the demonstration of taking one pill and his eventual recovery he explained to leadership how he picked the right one.”
            “I became famous,” says Yermey with his mischievous grin. “I was seventeen.”

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         Everything appears up to date. Be sure and copy the chapter to Page for save keeping in iCloud. – Post. – Amorella

         1117 hours. Good point. I had not thought about that. – Done. 

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