21 October 2014

Notes - do you think? / spooky statement / work on Grandma / only half of it

         Afternoon. You are waiting for Carol at the VOA Centre’s Carter’s shop (boys clothes) and have a stop at Target and the pet store for kitty litter. You had an excellent lunch, sandwiches and soup at Longhorn’s and told your server, Jen, that you will be in more often for the lunch menu. Earlier Scott and Eric finished up work on the house and cleaned the gutters in three places where the leaves build up even though you have gutter screens. They will come back for the gutters at the end of November when most of the leaves should be down. Kim called and said the signing for the house may be postponed until Friday morning and if so you are going back up Saturday and move clothes, etc on Sunday so everything next week will go on schedule – the movers come on next Monday morning. You are excited to see the house and the finishing touches. Fortunately they had the grass put in on time (three weeks ago) and it is coming up well for which they are thankful. You thought they should sod but you are happy they didn’t listen to you and Carol. – Amorella

         1446 hours. I’m glad Kim and Paul are independently minded enough to do what they think best even though they listen to our advice (when we are asked). Good for them. We still have a few things to do but we are further along than I thought we would be. Carol has clothes to wash this afternoon. What is she doing in that store; it’s been half an hour? It is time for me to work on this genealogy problem.

         1637 hours. We are home from our errands. I have been working on Grandma and need to make sure that the first chapter segment begins with Scotland and the other chapters follow suit that way the reader should be less confused and there needs to be a reminder clue in each segment as to whom we are dealing with – Scotland or England.

         Do you think anyone cares about this sort of thing orndorff? No one is ever going to check, do you think? – Amorella

         1641 hours. I care. I want the Dead in their proper family order even if it is fiction. In real life there is no doubt a lot of fiction resting in the ground and on the headstones for that matter. This way the books will be in with the mix. Quite fitting actually since I’ll be in there with them.

         Post, orndorff. - Amorella


         Earlier you were speaking about the fiction in the cemeteries. You did mowing and road/cemetery maintenance work for Blendon Township for two summers during college, you worked with your cousin Dave Short and you both gained employment through one of the township trustees, Harold Freeman, a cousin to your Grandma Schick who was a Freeman. After the second summer you transferred to the City of Westerville. Uncle Ernie got you the summer job and the first summer you worked on the sewer and road maintenance crews, the summer after you worked for the water department, city parks, city electric maintenance crew, garbage crew and cemetery maintenance; then the following summer it was grave digger and cemetery maintenance. The final two years you did maintenance at the city cemeteries and the sewage plant (waste management). Many of these summer jobs involved work at varies township and city cemeteries. The first grave you dug with an air hammer, shovel and axe made you tired enough to fall asleep in once completed. One was a former junior high math teacher that you prayed to God for most of that year – “Dear God, Please let either Mr. O’C. or me be dead by morning so I won’t have to go to class.” And, you ended up burying the man some years later. Another, while using an air hammer, you pierced a wooden casket that was buried in a supposedly empty plot. Lots of stories about the Dead run through your mind, many of them up close and personal. These books do not gloss over your business with the Dead. A gravedigger knows things, and you were a gravedigger. You know city sewage and trash collecting too. You had six summers of public service employment and graduated from Otterbein College (University) in seven years. – Amorella

         1755 hours. I don’t think this is all that important but one does learn things about people working for township and city government services. Gravediggers though learn a lot about themselves while digging each grave they dig and some of that experience cannot ever be accurately articulated into words. Bodies within two feet all the way around and I went right to sleep. Waking up from a sound sleep and climbing out of a clean, shaded and cool grave plot into a hot afternoon sun is another. One does not forget these experiences and many others. Most everybody has things they want to forget, but not me, I would just as soon remember them all.

         This sort of reasoning makes it easy to have a pretend Angel in his head or not far from his headstone that he can tell his story to. Nothing much is missing here but a cement of truth to seal the stories with. Post. - Amorella 

         1812 hours. That is a somewhat spooky statement Amorella, but then it is October.
   

         You worked through the seven Grandma segments and have the dialogue settings straighten out – they were in a mixed order of Scot and English. Now you have to make sure that each can segment has a direct connection back to Criteria and Renaldo. Eventually the Scottish side and the English side will marry and eventually Robert and Connie and Richard and Cyndi will be directly connected – descendents of Criteria and Renaldo. The point being that genetics lasts a long time and there are connections and interconnections within the species that few would recognise as an under-garden of mushroom-like elements attaching themselves to hearts and souls that produce a gravity-like glue that allows the metaphysical and physical to co-exist. – Amorella

         2241 hours. I write without deliberation and wonder what mistakes I might be making in translation Amorella but if it makes the book better fiction I’m all for it.

         This fits in the commonly held romantic thought that two people are ‘made’ for each other. Sometimes it is more than two but never less. If you want a mistranslation into imagination this is where you will find it as far as these Merlyn books are concerned. – Post. Amorella

         2245 hours. This sounds like fun – “two people made for one another; and that’s only the half of it”.

         We will work this up through the second half of book two. - Amorella

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