18 October 2014

Notes - 'No doubt,' responds Amorella / dark humored / Brothers 8 completed

         Afternoon. You had lunch at Smashburgers and are now at Kroger’s on Tylersville – Carol is making chili for supper. You put the windows down for about ten seconds and back up because of the chilly temperature and brisk north wind. This morning Scott was over to work on repairing more woodpecker damage. He injected bug killer in several place and plugged the woodpecker’s new hold plus the injection sites. He also fixed the streamer tape you bought and screwed it into place. You and Carol have always been pleased with Scott Schmidt’s Construction and rated him well on Angie’s List for quality work and fair pricing. – Amorella

         1409 hours. This is uncomfortable; it is like an advertisement for Scott.

         Is it? I was pulling this off your feelings about his work. – Amorella

         1444 hours. We are home. Your point is well taken. One could say the same thing about our cars or Papa John’s, etc.

         My criteria for posting is not the same as yours orndorff. I write down your legitimate feelings for your own understanding when and where appropriate. If you remember (which you don’t always) that whether I am fiction or not, I stay in line as a pretend Angel so that your work and your ‘real’ persona is as it is. This way your ‘experiment’ works consistently. Consistently you are as you have been for many years, an agnostic. If you want a date it is, for all intents and purposes, when you had to make a choice when joining the First Presbyterian Church, when you gave the oath, the Apostles’ Creed, in front of church witnesses and did not believe it. – Amorella

         I asked you to erase this last paragraph (your response to the above paragraph), which you have done. It is no one else’s business, but you were ready to post it anyway. Post. - Amorella

        2014 hours. I don't care because it was honest.

         How else would you speak to an Angel, pretend or not? - Amorella

        2016 hours. Come Hell or high water, I, an agnostic, would say what is on my mind and in my heart.

         2022 hours. I think I have been tricked by my own dark humor into an admission. 

         2238 hours. I completed The Brothers 8 in 798 words. It was fun to finalize.


        You needed to focus. You see a bit of humor in the segment. – Amorella

         More so than in the original draft.

         Post. - Amorella

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