26 July 2016

Notes - a response / events / focus / language / spirit



       Mid-morning. Carol is watering the lawn from both outside spigots. The heat continues, as does the lack of rain. You are happy that Tim completed the lawn mowing and trimming. You are also pleased you finished Grandma Thirteen near final draft. – Amorella

       0907 hours. I am going to work on Grandma 14 today. I like the Grandma stories and their transitions through GMG.3. I have a response to the question: “Why not just say your name? (When meeting an Angel of G-D) – Amorella”. – I thought I did, but the response left me. – The response has something to do with G-D expects more clarity of thought, i.e. G-D wants me to use my brain – and I think of Socrates’ “Know Thyself” so I wanted to show G-D I had thought about the question when alive and I wanted to show that like a good Boy Scout I was prepared to respond. – rho

       This will do. Post. - Amorella


       1334 hours. After reading over what I wrote earlier today, I might have disclosed more than I intended. I don’t care to go into detail.

       Writing from your deeper humanity, events such as this happen. I won’t tell if you don’t. – Amorella

       1337 hours. Good humor, Amorella.

       Carol has a hair appointment this afternoon, you had a hot dog and cold beans for lunch. Post. - Amorella


       1411 hours. The original Grandma draft is 4658 words and I have cut it to 2132. Also, I have two set themes an oak table and a mystery box with a surprise conclusion.

       Cut the children and focus on the four adults. – Amorella

       1416 hours. This will make the job much easier. Thank you, Amorella.

       Take a break. Post. - Amorella


       1654 hours. It took me less than five minutes to cut the text down to 1214 words.

       You had Smashburgers for supper. Tomorrow morning Carol and you will head to Bethesda North for your stomach test, which is scheduled for eight-thirty. Jill arrives after ten to clean the house. You both already have errands for tomorrow also. – Amorella

       1835 hours. My plan is to work on sections of Grandma, first doing those parts necessary for the story.

       You only need an allusion to these themes or one example of each. You might also read Grandma One for GMG.3 to remind yourself where the story is going. – Amorella

       1838 hours. Another good help, Amorella, much appreciated. You are right, I have forgotten how the wooden box connects but the Brothers already has a reference to the old oak table. It doesn’t have to be the same table, only the appearance of the connection is all that is needed.

       Something strike your mind right here? - Amorella

       1842 hours. Life, nonfiction, is like that, an appearance of a genuine connection is all that is needed; it doesn’t have to be real to change a person’s perspective, and perhaps her or his life.

       Am I, the Amorella, an appearance and not a reality?

       1846 hours. No. My notes, my books, this blog are all examples of reality because they exist. As far as context in language, grammar and content, is concerned you are a reality.

       I question this thinking because following then G-D exists because Holy Scriptures from a variety of religions show that G-D exists (in context), do they not? – Amorella

       1851 hours. My reasoning is ill conceived.

       You and Carol have been watching the Democratic Convention as you also watched the Republican Convention. You are very proud of Senator Bernie Sanders because he shows politeness is still a consideration to act upon and you agree wholeheartedly. – Amorella

       1910 hours. I do. And, watching the speeches of Michele Obama and Bernie Sanders live last night was wonderful – the magic of the passionate and genuinely spoken word is an awe-inspiring and dignifying moment. Tears ran involuntarily at times during both speeches. Language is the most wonderful gift. Alas, it can be used for humanities good was well as evil. Demons and Angels excluded. – rho

       Post. - Amorella

      You have 531 words already chosen for Grandma, Chapter One, Book Three. – Amorella

       2014 hours. It was a good suggestion to read the next chapter, again, generally, excluding the children makes it easier. I also dropped Brothers 1 book 3 and Pouch 1 book 3 in these files for reference. I like the way this is working. I will do Book 3 in sets of three chapter segments at a time, much easier to keep organized and, I think, by adding “The Dead” segments another dimension of the books will show forth. At least that is what I assume since this organizational format takes the place of a total of six books in the series.

       You preclude the dimension but that is not the case, you are showing how much the Dead mean to the Living and the Living mean to the Dead, that is the point. Both are in an invisible yet knowable partnership on moving forward, always moving forward, though we are talking about the evolution of spirit here, not time. – Amorella

       2025 hours. I do not remember about an evolution of spirit as such. Heartansoulanmind is what it is. It cannot evolve because time and space to not exist.

       So be it for now, boy. Post. - Amorella

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