21 September 2012

Notes - G---D's Promise to Abraham in Braided Dreams /a concept /


         Early mid-morning. You woke up during the night thinking about prophecy and Ezekiel and it suddenly dawned on you - God's Promise to Abraham and Sarah as well as Ezekiel seeing the wheel. Biblical lines is what your were forgetting and this is almost beyond belief because God's Promise to Abraham was central to the meaning of the Merlyn trilogy. - Amorella

         Yes, Amorella, that is what is missing. I am relieved to discover it was not about me thinking I was a prophet of old. 179

         Braided Dreams, page 179 [Pouch Text: Chapter 11] on documents:

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That afternoon Jabal answered the phone, “The French just discovered an ossuai at a Qumran burial site -- the headless remains in the stone coffin -- the speculation is that the remains are those of John the Baptist.”

            “Ridiculous,” replied Jabal, “the press will have a field day. Every headless skeleton found near this city is the remains of John the Baptist. What’s the matter with people?” The old rabbi grew silent. In the old days, religion questioned science, now the media plays the sorcerer’s apprentice and conjures a piece of non-news as the entertainment benchmark of the day. Few people care about empirical data unless it is a matter of personal health. He shook his head in disgust. Shark infested news feeders circling the same old material, regurgitating it in the appropriate season. Personal and private humanity swallowed for dollars. If people really want to be curious why don’t they look in the mirror and see a miserable truth staring back at them. There are all kinds of slavery in the world, and the billions of slaves in the mirror don’t see the chains they’ve tied themselves down with.

            Rabbi Hevron sat his old body in the old chair in the office. He stared upward at the south corner. ‘Where did God go?’ he thought. ‘The world today is like God was never here.’

I miss my Sarah as old Abraham must have missed his. I never found a Rebecca to take her place. We never had children, it was I who was at fault this time not Jessie, I mean, Sarah. God made a promise to Abraham and ultimately to Sarah too. God made a Convenient with Abraham and Sarah that millions would be born, millions as in the stars in the heavens and the grains of sand on the beaches. He promised a good life one day when there were millions of us in the world. He promised everyone a good life once there were enough of us in the world. Humanity has certainly spread their seeds and eggs. The world is quite full of us, probably too much so. Where is the promise kept? I am old, why not now. Then, the Lord works in mysterious ways. People of the book all say that. We all can trace ourselves back to Abraham who was willing to sacrifice his only son because he thought God wished it so. An angel told him to stop before the sacrifice, then a promise afterwards.

We are all old, dear God. I am not alone. For the love of humanity, do us a favor for once. What do you want from us? From all of us? How can we all learn to sleep together under this same tent. Our world is as a desert. We are bones alone. Millions slaughtered in the last great world war. He rethought that statement. Millions slaughtered around the world, not just us Jews. They should be remembered. The good, the bad. It makes no difference. Death comes to us all. We seemed to have forgotten the promise to Abraham and Sarah was not to us alone, but to all the nations of the world.

I was afraid to translate first because I was afraid I would offend my Christian friend, Karl. The Hebrew and the Greek together at that place. It may be a lock of Jesus’ hair in that marble casing. Jewish hair. I am afraid for the world with such a find. I do not see how a good can come of this if it is a fraud or no fraud.

If it is the hair of Jesus, or any Jewish man of the times, we should share it by thirds. Before any questions are raised. It would be the wisest course. The state of Israel keeps the marble vase and a third of the hair as an archeological find, the Christians in Rome get a third to disperse as they wish, and the Moslems get a third as Jesus is accepted as a prophet. We would have no choice in the matter. Then what? Pray tell, then what? And the manuscript, who gets that?

By rights, it is ours as is the vase. We can’t tear the manuscript into thirds; or the vase either. What a perplexing problem my old imagination raises. We should bury it in a vault for later generations, scholars only. I don’t know. Perhaps this is nothing but senility creeping in. I’ll take the senility. My heart says to let it all go. Give it away. But, who to give it to? I should hope it is nothing at all. It is probably only our imagination.

From Braided Dreams
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         The Promise was to everyone, that was the key, and I was forcing it to happen in fiction as I feel it may never happen in real life. That is the reason for the marsupials, not to show humans the way, but a way to live better if we just give up pride and greed. That was the idea. Wishful thinking, but then I'm a romantic. It would be difficult for me to leave this aspect of the books out, to delete it completely, and certainly it needs to be established somewhere in the first three chapters.

         We can work on it boy, you had to rediscover this yourself. Post. - Amorella

         I found another reference from Braided Dreams on page 263, Chapter 16, "The Brothers"

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“What about today? If it’s not a plague it is a nuclear accident in my book.”

“Just like in the Cold War times. That would be ironic. The Soviets are gone and we still end up in a nuclear battle,” replied Richard as he watched people get on and off the elevator. “We and the Russians still have hundreds of missiles. 20/20 said it would only take twenty missiles to kill eight billion people. I think that was right.”

“And we don’t even have eight billion yet,” commented Robert. “That’s what’s really depressing. Is 20/20 on NBC or CBS?”

“Elizabeth Vargas was the narrator, so it has to be ABC.”

“That’s true. And you said Global Warming was number one, that it would do us in. That’s a real surprise to me.”

“Me too in a way. I would put a plague or accidental nuclear war before Global Warming no matter what Al Gore says,” responded Richard. “I have to say though that Grandma in my stories would probably agree that it is number one because she says it is a necessity that we change. We have no choice. We will run out of oil or the oceans will eventually rise twenty to forty feet and the coasts of the world will not be the same and we won’t either. The other day I was thinking about the ducks down on the Creek. With Global Warming, they won’t have to migrate. What are they going to do?”

“Maybe it will help prevent a future bird flu epidemic,” said Robert on a sincerely positive note. He added, “Grandma is you, you know.”

“I know,” said Richard. “On some level I must agree with her, that Global Warming will force us to change our ways, but outwardly nuclear war or a plague would do it much more quickly.”

“Is there anything positive in your book? On some level, like you say, you must be positive enough to sit down and write the book in the first place. I mean, if there were no hope, in one of your many levels, then why write anything?”


“Not really. I satirize how human beings don’t have the guts to live as humane as the marsupials, which I think is funny since I made them aliens. That’s the funniest part.”

“So you made the aliens better than us?”

“That comes out later in book two which I know you won’t read for a while if ever. It only comes out in the marsupials though.” Richard paused, “We are just as good as they are, but they have several thousand years head start.”

Robert thought on how to get him angry then asked, “I don’t see how that is much realistic hope. Besides, everybody already knows all the other scenarios.”

Richard sat mulling over his brother’s words. “You piss me off,” he mumbled. “The alien’s are human beings in a possible future. That is the idea.”

“Where’s the realistic hope, Richie? From aliens, that’s been done before too.”

Richard took another sip of his seven and seven then folded his hands on the bar. “There isn’t any real hope. Writing gives me something to do, Rob. Satire doesn’t provide hope it provide humor to get through a hopeless situation.”

“Utterly depressing, Richie.”

“I know.”

“This is just like when you were a kid and spent your time making up stories.”

“Fuck you,” muttered Richard and grumbled under his breath, “You are really beginning to piss me off.” He downed the rest of his drink and declared, “I’m going up and take a nap. Let me know when the girls come back or what we’re up to if they call.”

“Yep,” said Robert. “I’m going to go play some Black Jack.”

“Tell him you were a surgeon,” lambasted Richard as he left, “maybe he’ll let you cut the deck.”


A few minutes of quiet did Richard in and he grumbled, “Well, shit! Damn it to hell anyway.” God’s promise to Sarah and Abraham is the only hope I can come up with.


Meanwhile, Rob is downstairs on the main floor enjoying a visit from Lady Luck who had him up about seventy-five dollars.


On the hotel wireless Internet, Richard found the Hebrew Bible in English, a translation of the Jewish Publication Society, 1917 edition. Genesis, Chapter 22:  15 which says, “And the angel of the LORD called unto Abraham a second time out of heaven, 16 and said: 'By Myself have I sworn, saith the LORD, because thou hast done this thing, and hast not withheld thy son, thine only son, 17 that in blessing I will bless thee, and in multiplying I will multiply thy seed as the stars of the heaven, and as the sand which is upon the seashore; and thy seed shall possess the gate of his enemies; 18 and in thy seed shall all the nations of the earth be blessed; because thou hast hearkened to My voice.'”


Here is something, thought Richard, “... . and in thy seed shall all the nations of the earth be blessed.” This would include everyone, even Merlyn. The Blessing weaves through our DNA. He heard the doorknob turn.

“What’s up?” said Robert.

“I’m just thinking about the book.”

“And,” said Robert, “what hope did you find?”           

“I found a reference to God’s promise to Abraham in chapter eleven.”

“I remember. Some rabbi is talking about losing his wife.”

“I think you’re right.” Richard finally glanced his brother’s way, “How’d you do at the table?”

“Not bad, I won four hundred and eight-six dollars.”

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         They are at Las Vegas. I forget why exactly. The language is a bit offensive but I was more interested in how it is. Yet, Bob and I never really spoke that way in public or private. I guess I wanted it gritty. Who knows? I don't remember. I even quoted scripture. I forgot that.

         Post it and hope it reminds you of what you want to avoid in this flavoring of Merlyn heartansoulanmind. - Amorella


         You are picking up Brennan from a couple of hours at daycare in about forty minutes. Carol is in working on the laundry and you decided to sit in the car and write. You have your Jennifer cookie and you both had combo lunches (soup and half a sandwich) at Stone Oven for the first time this trip to Cleveland. Your thought is to place the Biblical quotation at the front of the book and let it go at that.

Hebrew Bible in English, a translation of the Jewish Publication Society, 1917 edition. Genesis, Chapter 22:  15 which says, “And the angel of the LORD called unto Abraham a second time out of heaven, 16 and said: 'By Myself have I sworn, saith the LORD, because thou hast done this thing, and hast not withheld thy son, thine only son, 17 that in blessing I will bless thee, and in multiplying I will multiply thy seed as the stars of the heaven, and as the sand which is upon the seashore; and thy seed shall possess the gate of his enemies; 18 and in thy seed shall all the nations of the earth be blessed; because thou hast hearkened to My voice.'”

         And, you have two other thoughts on the subject:

         Yes, somewhere on the same page I would place:

Ezekiel Saw The Wheel
Ezekiel saw the wheel

Way up in the middle of the air

Ezekiel saw the wheel

Way up in the middle of the air
And the little wheel run by faith

And the big wheel run by the Grace of God

A wheel in a wheel

Way up in the middle of the air

         Then I would add this:

         Merlyn took for himself an ancient text; then one from the twentieth century and decided that as he was a mix of Druid and Seventh Century Christian he would reference the New Testament in the following logic.

         Jesus was a Master Carpenter,
         A Spiritual Worker of Wood,
         And, thus Jesus was a Druid-King
         Addressed on a Four-Pointed Tree.

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         Something to that effect, on one page, though I am not sure how it would look. Actually it doesn't look as good in print as it does in my head.

       You are home in early afternoon and about to take a nap. Later, dude. Post. - Amorella


         1544 hours. Feeling better after a nap, Brennan is taking one now and Carol is either reading or taking a nap. Kim should arrive home around 1730 hours and we will be on our way. We may run into traffic on I-271 but traffic should be uneventful in Columbus.

         You are thinking of erasing the above because you weren't really thinking, and in the process, you feel you could have jinxed the trip. - Amorella

         Alas, you show how weak-minded I am. I begin writing without realizing what I am thinking until I see it in print. Pretty bad.

         Why don't you work on the clean up of those chapters and I'll show you where to include the Genesis quotation only. Later we can deal with Ezekiel. - Amorella



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