20 November 2012

Notes - Words & intro/mid of Pouch - 6 (495 w)


         Mid-afternoon. You are at Kroger's on Tylersville. Carol was cleaning and on the computer much of today, you had a fasting blood test for Dr. Bajaj next Tuesday. You tinkered with landing and take off material from the ancient Cessna 210 manual hoping Doug will give the thumbs up. - Amorella

         I want a small plane setting no real jargon. I am not sure Friendly knows how to fly a small plane.

         You were just interrupted by an impolite fellow who shouted out to you, "Thanks for fucking the country, asshole!" so you know you are in conservative Butler County territory. - Amorella

         I was going to ignore it. I noticed he didn't stop to pick a physical fistfight out of it. Probably just as well. Makes me want not to take the Obama signs off the rear window. It's a first verbal slur I've heard personally in this election year, or any since the 1960's. Twenty something year old beats up seventy year old Democrat at Kroger's lot. Ha. That would have made the local headline news. (1444)

         A lot of thoughts were pulled into your mind boy. - Amorella

         Yep. I regret a few of them already.

         No one heard them but me. - Amorella

         Those words were my doubts talking. 

         Reflective thought, huh? - Amorella

         Yes. Words have gone. I'm thoughtless.

         Later, dude. - Amorella

         You split a late lunch at Penn Station, a small fry and a large chicken teriyaki with two drinks. Carol is on page 149 of Red Mist and you are ready to write. Friendly is looking over the controls. Let's begin with her as an introduction. - Amorella

         About time for the national news. Take a break and post what you have. - Amorella

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Pouch - 6

         Friendly glanced over the instrument and screen rich Cessna Silver Eagle control panel and pushanpulled the start toggle fumbled then pushed the toggle to the up position. Embarrassed that Pyl was watching she quickly smiled and commented, "It's been awhile."
         "The panel is pretty much up to date," replied Pyl calmly. Take your time." She thought if we go down, it's your plane sister. Pyl found herself taking closer observation because 'why did this woman push the toggle up then pull?'
         "We all do silly things," said Pyl with a smile. “I love this plane, outside of me I think this was Dad's favorite thing." She winked, "Isn't that right, Blakey?"
         He feigned a grumble, "Yeah, Pyl was always the favorite."
         "What about your mother?" asked Hartolite with an undertone of seriousness.
         Blakey leaned to the right, "She's just kidding. It's an old family joke." Surely this woman could sense the humor in Pyl's voice.
         Justin deadpanned, "Pyl and Blake come from bright creative parents who were a bit dissimilar."
         "Pardon."
         "Dissimilar, you know, diverse."
         "Distinct, is a better word," chuckled Pyl in the front.
         "Everyone has their secrets," replied Hartolite in Justin's deadpan tone. What in the world are they talking about, she thought, families that are 'dissimilar', 'diverse,' ‘distinct’? Do they mean 'heterogeneous'? Why don't they just say that? Are they trying to be clever here? Are they suspicious? What did we do to provoke thinking-in-a-row?

 238 words / continued below

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         You had supper and watched a "Castle", "Bones" and "Modern Family" You are ready to continue writing but don't know where to go other than, 'it's Pyl's turn'. Let get to it. - Amorella

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         In the quick quiet moment Friendly revved the engine and confirmed the rpm status, verified the alternator and voltage and they were rolling down the runway with the flaps at nine percent, a lift of the nose and a slow climb southwest, tapped the brakes to stop the spin and retracted the wheels. Quickly nearing the Ohio shoreline Friendly continued climbing and turned the yoke left. The Silver Eagle continued a steady climb with Catawba Island, then the Marblehead lighthouse were below the right wing and Kelley's Island and greater Lake Erie lay down below the left wing. The plane continued climbing due east until leveling off at nine thousand feet with a speed of 140 mph. Friendly felt her body immediately relax. "We're good to Burke," she said. "Beautiful day, beautiful scenery, one beauty of a plane."

         Pyl smiled and need not respond. Pyl could sense whatever nervousness there had been leaving Friendly. The plane and the pilot were as one in the same. Pyl loved the flying so much that she could enjoy another pilot at the yoke.

         The flight continued, seemingly uneventful, or so Pyl felt, as she had taken a catnap. Awakening to the drone of the engine she found that Justin and Blake had fallen asleep too. Pyl let them sleep. She glanced over at Friendly, smiled and quietly said, "I can tell you are in love with this plane. I am in love with it too." Pyl closed her eyes in a ruse and let her mind moved into surreptitious quarters.

257 words
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         2231 hours. I have about 250 more words to go. I assume this will be defining or exploting what is on Pyl's mind before they land at Burke Lakefront.

         Yes. Enough for tonight. Post. - Amorella

         I hope this is coming along satisfactorily.

         What might Pyl be thinking? - Amorella

         I think there needs to be another clue, something she noticed in the instruments, some kind of data that is not normal for when the plane was inspected and 'cleaned up' by Ship under the guidance of Yermey.

         Worth considering. Tomorrow, orndorff. - Amorella

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