21 January 2013

Notes - The Brothers - 10 completed / Grandma's Story 10 completed


        Before sunrise. No sun, no rain pops into mind and you think the Dead-11. Carol is drying her hair. She has an Inauguration Party to go to later this morning. You have your exercises and a nap.

         Carol has left for her party and fun with the ladies. You have been toying with the Ford Fusion Hybrid and C-Max. You want seventeen-inch wheels, not eighteen that come with the Titanium model. You don't like the black interior. And, customers, some of them, complain that it doesn't have nearly the m/g that the stats say. In fact, most get between thirty-eight and forty m/g (real world) not forty-seven as stated.

         On the screen the car sale doesn't sound so appetizing. Friends who have the Prius get about 44 m/g sometimes it drops to the upper 30's in winter. The physics is understandable and acceptable. I'm already committed to Lebanon Ford for a look/see and possible test-drive tomorrow. Andy B. is our old salesman from the Lincoln-Mercury days.

         You snuck a peek at last night's Downton Abbey, but keep it a secret as you watch it again with Carol. The day is cold and will become colder this evening. Snow flurries in the air with clouds above for their upbringing and support. - Amorella

         What an odd turn of phrase, Amorella. I should not have thought about the weather like that.

         That I already understand, boy. Shall we work on Brothers-10? - Amorella

         Yes. I need to refresh to the times and place. (1241)

         The original Brothers 10 is exactly 1000 words.

         Reduce it and say the same thing. - Amorella

         Those are my very words to students in years past. I think you rather enjoy saying them, Amorella.

         Thoughts have their humor, circular and otherwise. - Amorella

         1409 hours. I have completed The Brothers - 10.

         Good. Drop it in and post. - Amorella
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The Brothers - 10

With Jack contently sitting on his master’s lap Robert sat in the large comfortable maroon chair in the TV room watching an episode of National Geographic about lions and hyenas sharing their scrubby desert-like territory beneath Mt. Kilimanjaro. Jack suddenly jumped off his lap.

“I’m I interrupting?” said Richard softly as he pets Jack who appeared eager for a new playmate.

“No, not in the least. Jack and I were just watching the lions about to attack the hyenas.”

“Sounds exciting. Who wins?”

“Lions I assume, unless fifty hyenas jump out and tear them apart.” said Robert.

“It all has to do with numbers. I have that in my book with the marsupials. They are lucky to have three planets to populate rather than just one like us.”

“Hyenas and lions are not fiction, Richie. You’re marsupials aren’t going to be on National Geographic.”

“I know, but I am making a point about population. I think we are a little beyond the lion versus hyena stage. What’s that? How is the male with the cubs?”

“That’s a female. That’s her clitoris Richie.”

“You’re kidding!”

“Nope. She has more testosterone than the male.”

“Holy shit!”

Robert flipped off the set. “What’s happening?”

“Nothing. Cyndi wanted to come over, so I decided to come along.”

Robert smiled, “How about a Taco Bell?”


Fifteen minutes later, they are at the local fast food restaurant with two tacos and two diet Cokes each. “We didn’t bring any poetry along,” said Richard. “I wanted to see what you are working on in terms of the cemetery poem.”

“I don’t see it in your poetry.” Robert pulled a tightly folded piece of paper from his back pocket and pronounced, “Here is a poem you once wrote that I think can be used in juxtaposition with the one I wrote. The one you read the other day.” He gave it to Richard to read.

                                              A Sunrise

 

                                       The beauty of a clear and Spring-like sunrise

                                               lies in the quiet separation of light and dark
                                              causing the crossbar atop a telephone pole
                                             to shadow down and stretch melancholy out,
                                           to hold a grounded and subtle shape,
                                           a shape a Nazarene once nailed to a cause;
                                          waiting enough, the moving shadows of a solar ritual
                                         pull on the gravity of the eye weighted soul,
                                       tugging the soul to settle and set at sundown,
                                     to be overcome by power,
                                a power resting on the edge of the universe
                         and hovering deep in the outback of the observing mind;
                    It saddles up a god more ancient than Apollo
          and makes him ready to ride a new thought through the cosmos.

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“I had forgotten about this one.”

“A couple of days ago when Ferlinghetti came up, I thought of this poem. It has a sense of Coney Island of the Mind, ‘Number Five’ in it.”

“The gravity of the eye-weighted soul, is a good line, but why did you follow with ‘the eye-weighted rather than ‘an eye-weighted soul’ Richie?”

“I don’t know, Rob. I wrote this more than twenty-five years ago.”

“Then you go on talking about a power resting at the edge of the universe and you say it is hovering deep in the outback of your mind. Is that your unconscious -- the power of your unconsciousness coming out?”

Richard sighed and finished his taco. “The mind is not the same as the brain. It is not physical. The mind is a shadow of the brain.”

“But Richie,” noted Robert with a confident smile, “in your mind it appears the other way around, your mind is more real than your brain, which is then its shadow. The unconscious is not in your brain at all but in your mind. Isn’t that the way you really see it?”

Richard thought about his books, “I don’t know,” He paused then responded, "I don’t know where the words come from. I am in the middle of a pregnant pause but I didn’t notice its conception."

"We're going Uptown to get an ice cream, you boys want to come along?" asked Kay from the kitchen doorway.

"I'm game," asserted Richard, glad to have a diversion.

"I think I'll stay," recited Robert. "I have some work to do."

Connie came into the room, smiled her dear warm-hearted smile, and coerced with a "Let's go, big boy. You need to be more social."

726 words
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        Carol arrived told you about her day, then you were off to McD's on Mason-Montgomery for coffee and a diet Coke, now you are stopped at Kroger's about two yards due west of McD's for a few items.


         1553 hours. I feel quite relaxed. It is rather pleasant finishing a story section in a day. I'll take the short ones when they show up. Grandma's Story 10 is next and I'm ready to take a look. Maybe I can get it done today also. ---  Okay, 3392 words; this one is going to take some time. (1600)

         1644 hours. I decided to take a look at the blog statistics for the month. I realize some readers hit the blog accidently, but nevertheless I thank every one of you who stop by once in a while. You help make me feel like I am a normal person who has to tell the world how it is here inside. Thank you every much, kind people, for your reading. Remember, if you want to copy the book for free, you may as long as you give Amorella and me credit for putting it together. I don't mind if you share your copy as long as it is with someone who is genuinely interested.  Richard Henry Orndorff (signed)

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         It is fine that once in a while you thank your readers. Don't be too kind though, boy. Human beings are not always who they seem to be. - Amorella

         Why would you say such a thing, Amorella. There is nothing wrong with being polite.

         No, boy. There is not. Post. - Amorella

          Now you are making me cautious.

          That is my intent. I am your friend first in this position I find myself. - Amorella

           Why do you always have to be in character?

           To keep you honest and wary at the same time. You are no fool, boy, and I will not allow you to be. - Amorella


         2211 hours. I have completed Grandma's Story 10.

         So you have. Add and post. No more tonight. - Amorella

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Grandma’s Story 10  ©2012, rho, nfd

Some aspects of human society are as invisible as gravity as you will see in this little story that takes place about three thousand years ago on the coast of East Africa in what is now Kenya.

         Rumbasant stood at the edge of the forest inspecting the horizon beyond the great water. She is thinking the horizon is not the end of things, as I am not standing at the beginning of things. Our men leave this place by boats. Most do not return. Always the sons of the chief or sons of his brothers leave on quests. It has been that way for as many stars as there are in the night sky.

         I would like to leave on a boat with one of my brothers. I will never leave. I keep my blackened walking stick. The fire from the sky struck the tree I used for shelter. This stick is from that tree. God's fire hit my left shoulder and went down my right leg and into the ground. The fire is still in the ground where I left it. I know what it is to have been touched by Father’s fire.

         It was a great shock to the tribe. Older people say the Sky Father struck me for being born to our Grand Chief first. I argued that if this was so, Sky Father is an abusive father.  We do not strike each other or our children anymore. We are a simple and peaceful people.

         In Grandma's the last story, Abbatoot and part of her clan had survived a terrible storm, and I am brewing a typhoon not far from where Rumbasant is standing. Rumbasant has been struck down once, what more can the Sky Father do? To be struck by sky fire twice would be unprecedented. Would it not?

         The sunset appeared as a tunnel, a tube by which she could cross to the other side of the world. A huge storm roared onto the beach during the night. The winds grew steady to stay between fifty and seventy miles per hour. Rumbasant held her sacred stick high as lightning struck nearby trees. Wind-driven and stinging, sticky bleached sand hit Rumbasant’s face. Continuous thunderous roars, ominous booms, green tinged sky, blue, and low purple bands of a mass cloud.

         Rumbasant shouted to the storm, “By Mother Earth and by her sacred marriage to Father Sky, I command the winds and rain to cease!”

         This grew into a magical chant, a spontaneous ritual dance and a shout to the up heaved ocean. Only to be responded to by wind, rain, lightning and thunder. Rumbasant unconsciously shortened the oath. “By Mother and Father, I command this water and wind to cease!” The night storm roared on and so did Rumbasant who shouted her spontaneously created chant.

                                    Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.
                                    Foam of the mad dog.

                                    Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.
                                    Foam of a mad sea.
                                    Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.

                                    Foam to the mad wind.
                                    Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.

         Like the storm Rumbasant roared on, “Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.” She shouted the word with every other beat of her terrified and defiant heart. “Arumba. Arumba. Arumba.”

         Lightning strikes the Stick. Fire burst forth and the Boom echoed in tribal memory for life.

         On the beach Rumbasant laid stirring and twitching. The smoking Stick lies beside. Living is not enough, thought Rumbasant, but I am enough alive to think.

Rumbasant clutched at Stick and pulled herself up. As Rumbasant stood once again and raised Stick in right defiant hand, a wall of lightning snapped at the bank of palms where the tribal witnesses had recently stood.

         “Stick is what it is,” shouted Rumbasant to her tribe in the distance. "I am hammered twice by Father’s fire and I am alive!" The people came closer staring at Rumbasant’s face in disbelief. Her right eye socket was empty. The tribal people began a search for a shell with Rumbasant’s burnt eye in it.

Early one morning not long after, Rumbasant discovered a perfectly white slightly oval shell in the water near the beach. Rumbasant put the shell up to her empty eye socket, pulled open the lids and slid it in for a welcome fit. She thought, this will work just fine.

She was called Shell Eye in stories along the Kenya coast of East Africa long after her death. The name Shell Eye was forged into a mystical tribal name.

Taking an eye for an eye or so it’s been said
Is not quite the same as taking wine with bread?

To see what story time remains to be seen,
One needs the depth of one eye threaded quite lean.

773 words
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