08 January 2013

Notes - human enough / Dead-9 & Brothers-9 completed/


        Coming on noon. You just finished your exercises and you are thinking of a phrase you used the other day on Facebook: "take politics and religion out of the equation" and wonder it that is how to start anew in HeavenOrHellBothOrNeither? You want to erase humanity and begin again? - Amorella

         No. But in the books. No. Our humanity appears tied to both politics and religion. Where would the arts be without both? Such are our human passions for power and moral ethics -- a check and balance, though hardly ever, if ever, balanced. It is more like chess, check and check again until mate, until the king falls seduced by a greater power or strategy, with usually the queen being involved (in the common game) from the other side of the Board.

         You have the game as a common one yet Board is capitalized. - Amorella

         The Board is the Greater Nature of our environment, i.e. the universe and Beyond. Power and Ethics is the base though on which we develop our philosophies of life and our rudiments of culture. These are built by heartanmind though, it seems to me, and not soul so much, while in life. In death, in the books, there is a greater, more equal balance in soul. It comes into flowering upon physical death; at least it seems so in my mind. As such, why the Rebellion at all? I think I have built a board without much underlay in HeavenOrHellBothOrNeither.

         Unless, in your present thinking, the soul is responsible for the Rebellion. - Amorella

         It seems we are back to "Genesis" and a leap to Milton's Paradise Lost, not souls but Angels.

         You enjoy kicking the stone along as you walk the narrow path, boy. - Amorella

         What a turn of phrase, Amorella. You are a delight. (1210)

         I am your source of light. Later, boy.. Post. - Amorella

         Never trust one's self. A thought is not a truth, many thoughts, few if any are truths, that appears human enough. 

         Indeed it does, old man. - Amorella


        1333 hours. I have better completed Dead-9.

         Add here, post, and we will move on. - Amorella

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The Dead - 9 © 2013, rho

            Merlyn stood surprised to see Mother Glevema, Panagiotakis and Sophia, who had stubbed her toe at her entrance to his sanctuary, standing beside Mother. "Greetings, Mother, Takis and Sophia. The first time I have ever seen you two together, the resemblance and a mother and daughter separated by a multitude of generations has never been more remarkable. Appearing the same age in spirit you are as the identical twins in other stories from this Realm." Merlyn added politely, "I thought this was a private matter between Mother and me Takis, but I can see by your sagacious presence it is of more overriding importance."
            "Indeed," replied Panagiotakis speaking to Merlyn as if Mother and a daughter were not present. "You must speak to the Living about the First Rebellion to add order and authenticity to the books. You visited in those days when the First Rebellion began and know something of those times because you were witness in the second nature of your spirit."
            "Indeed I was. I was given that privilege, by you I imagine."
            "It was by the Supervisor, Merlyn," interrupted Mother.
            "Oh." With this news presented as a fact at hand, Merlyn realized he was not the Dead's choice to lead the return of the Dead to the Living; it never was.
            Merlyn's mind moved into overdrive. How did the Supervisor pull this off? That is my first question. Why does Mother tell me not Takis? Why didn't Takis tell me? Surely he knew the truth? Mind quickly moved to Heart's memory and a whispered circle of multiple ghosts in singly themed thinking that have come to the attention of those ready to move on after physical death.
            Who am I? Why am I here? What shall I do here? How much can I know and understand of my role and responsibility in this Place of the Dead, Avalon.
            In general the Dead agreed on this substance: “We thought if we were not free in life then we would be free in death but that is not the case in this Place. We ruminate and find camaraderie through our personal identities, personalities and interests. The human center is Our Mother, the first who was allowed in this Place. She is our common point. We are equal citizens through our ancestry. We have become a hive of sensibly silhouetted questions searching for equally reasonable responses. What else can we do?”
            Merlyn's soul did not seek the answers to heartanmind questions. Only Sophia now stood in Merlyn's sight. He asked, "How should I tell the story, Sophia? You witnessed the First Rebellion. What is important for the Living to know of something so very long ago?"
            In trance Sophia drifted, "It was less than three thousand earth years ago."
             We five sat around the oak table: Thales, Kassandra, Mario, Salamon and myself. Our Mother had put me in charge. We were at our favorite local eatery, a bar and cafe at the northwest corner of Lyceum and Eleusis Streets, the Mikroikia.
            I can remember my very words. "We shall have a peaceful protest. I have been assured by Our Mother that this demonstration will have a full ten thousand heartsansoulsanminds standing as one while I make our demand directly to the Supervisor." I paused and added, "I have directed my currier to contact the Supervisor who should then arrive shortly."
            Someone asked, "Who is the currier?" and I responded, "Aeneas, because he is protected by his mother, Aphrodite."           
            Merlyn smiled, "It is not so strange, the same story could be told by the Celts in Avalon, different names that's all."
            "True. We see this today, but not in those times. Our culture was the center of our Spirit World. Our culture was our womb where we were comfortable being with others of our own thoughts and ways."
            In a deathly whisper she said, "I remember Thales and Salamon debating shortly after."
            “We do not know the Supervisor is Hades, Thales,” asserted Salamon assuming the Supervisor was most likely Zeus in disguise. Salamon mused, what difference will it make? Zeus or Hera. Zeus will have his way, no matter. The Supervisor is a decoy. Aeneas is the currier The Gods are taking sides in this already; we have done nothing but consider. Salamon grumbled, “Olympus is aligning itself, I can feel it in my soul.”

            "What ominous words while sitting at a shared breakfast, she said sadly. We did not know what we were doing. Merlyn you need to let the Living know this," commented Sophia sincerely. Merlyn and Sophia, quiet as death, faded to their own personal sanctuaries, leaving Nothingness unturned.

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           1345 hours. I like it. I have not seen so clearly through Sophia's eyes before. It is an interesting perspective. I needed to begin at the beginning. A new doorway has been opened for me to see the First Rebellion with not so much novel detail, just essentials from the leader, Sophia, talking to Merlyn. One-on-one. This is the way I liked to teach when I could. Just yesterday I believe, a former student had put a joke cartoon on her Facepage and I replied with an addition to the joke. She wrote back saying, 'Mr. Orndorff, after all these years, how do you still know me so well?' I responded, 'we both have a dark humor that gets us through the world, my favorite is "Cheer up, things are bound to get worse.' And, when things don't. Wait.  ;-)'". I learned a lot about human nature through my students. What a wonderful laboratory the classroom was for me. I love the literature and the grammar and I love my students still. And, I love Facebook for allowing me to peek into there lives once and a while, always hoping the best for them and their children and grandchildren. My former students, my friends and my family keep me positive and give me hope in the future of our species.

         This is a view rarely stated. It effervesces from the deep once in a while without warning. Later, dude. Post. - Amorella 
   

         Mid-afternoon. You are at Pine Hill Lakes Park again, with the sun at your back looking northeast at the grass, trees, water tower and Mason high school boys running laps, this is their fifth or sixth lap around the area from the water tower over to the earth dam and out on the other side of the kiddy park and back to the water tower. When Carol returned from a yearly checkup you had a half a ham and cheese along with a stop at McD's near King's Island; Carol got a decafe coffee, her usual, with three creams and three Splenda. She presently is on page 393 of Child's novel.  You are preparing the new document for Brothers-9. Check out the original chapter; let's see where we are. - Amorella

         Wow. This story is short and fits just as is.

         Check to clean it up where needed. Drop it in then post when you return home. Easy enough, huh. - Amorella
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The Brothers - 9 © 2013, rho

Richard sat in his favorite black leather chair studying Robert’s pungently worded poem titled:
        
                                               "Nature Junkie”
By Robert
                                             a bumblebee --
                                             the big black one
                                             with yellow stripes
                                             enters the bright
                                             white flower
                                             of a hosta.
                                             From the front porch
                                             my chocolate Lab
                                             mouths a stinging memory.
                                             I see the bee
                                             body working inside.

                                             I suspect
                                             other creatures,
                                             unseen,
                                             see a meal --
                                             ants waiting
                                             its fall to earth,
                                             or a lizard
                                             immune to venom.
                                             if it wanders to ground
                                             in the chicken yard,
                                             the hens will rush,
                                             pop the droning pill.

                                             I walk off the porch,
                                             pinch shut
                                             the flower petals
                                             to hear the panic of wings,
                                             to get the buzz
                                             of bee
                                             up the fingers,
                                             hoping
                                             it will go to my head.

         “Good poem, Rob. Precise. I love the line, ‘to get the buzz of the bee up the fingers hoping it will go to my head.’ Rob's poetry always has the feeling of a slight twist of phrase. I wasn’t expecting ‘up the fingers,’ Who would have thought, ‘up the fingers’? I love it.
         “Thank you. When it comes to poetry we usually agree.”
         “Coney Island of the Mind, ‘Number Five’.”
         “Ferlinghetti. That is was a great poem and still is as far as I am concerned,” stated Robert. “Real poetry, no traa-lee-laa crap.”
         “I’m still stuck there,” said Richard. “You moved on with the poets to modern times, but my heart is with the Beats.”
         Robert added abruptly, “That’s when you stopped your style. There are other ways to say things.”
         “I liked the Beats' bluntness.
         With a sheepish grin Robert asked, “Then you won’t mind me asking you about your automatic writing?”
         “It’s not really automatic, Rob. That is what some people call it. It is a part of some people’s writing process. I have to be in the right frame of mind to write the Merlyn stories.”
         “Is that what you are calling them now?”
         “It’s a basic and natural frame of mind,” said Richard, “like my word trancephysics. It is like writing while in a light trance. In fact, there is a word for it that relates to autosuggestion.”
         “Ideomotor action. William James wrote about it,” grinned Robert.
         Richard reflected his brother’s grinned, “You saw my dowsing rods over in the corner didn’t you?”
         “I saw them; unscientific re-bent clothes hangers, but I knew what they were for. Were you looking for water in the back yard?”
         “I was looking for unmarked graves in the cemetery. Dale gave them to me after talking about them with a plumber who used them to find leaks in lines between the house and street.”
         “Dowsing has been debunked, you know. Water witching and the like. Studies show that finding water by dowsing is a fifty-fifty proposition.”
         Richard responded, “The rods do move though, I think it has to do with electro-magnetic energy."
         “The Divining rods work because of unconscious suggestion to small muscles in the fingers that work through subconscious response,” noted Robert, ever the medical doctor.
         “Well,” suggested Richard, “then when I am in form and a semi-transcendental state while writing, then I’m writing from my inner self. What’s wrong with that?”
         Robert deadpanned facially and verbally, “Nothing as long as you aren’t going off the deep end.”
         Richard disputed, “Anything that exists, whether we know and understand it or not, is natural. My bet is that it is some sort of electro-magnetic force, and if it isn’t, if it is solely from within, and it has to do with muscle response, it is still biophysical-electrical.”
         Robert re-focused, “So why were you dowsing for unmarked graves?”
         “It was fun. I think it is interesting that the finer finger muscles can move by involuntary suggestion alone. It makes you wonder on who pulls the trigger in some murders. I think of Shakespeare’s character MacBeth and his killing of Duncan. Lady MacBeth suggests it. His hands and fingers take up the action whether he wants to do it or not.” Richard paused, “the rest of the story shows another side of MacBeth. He did kill an innocent man, and his guest to boot.”
         “It is just a play, Richie,” countered Robert.
         “I know, but still it is interesting that a simple dowsing rod can show we are not fully consciously responsible for some muscular action. It doesn’t take much consciousness to pull a trigger.”
         “I can tell you it takes a lot of conscious action to move a sharp surgical blade into a living human body,” said Robert emphatically.
         “Point taking,” said Richard. “I am sure that it did.” The emphasis drove home on "it did." This was as a dark reminder that both were no longer employed in their chosen professions.

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         I feel better about it. Bob will like that his poem is still included here.

         It will always be included, boy. Now you can relax. - Amorella

         I am into the words and notions and memories, Amorella, the word processing, the keyboard and computer screen provide this. I am relaxed. (1601)

         Later, Amorella

         You are at Kroger's on King's Mill waiting for Carol to pick up ingredients for either Alta's turkey soup or chili. You both noticed that the new pub, Old Bag of Nails, might be open at the other end of the Kroger shopping building. It is the same one that is also in Worthington and Westerville. You have enjoyed eating at both; thus a new place to try for lunch or supper.

         I have an empty bottle of Arrogant Bastard Ale down on my basement desk. I bought this domestic and drank it at the Worthington pub some years ago just so I could have the bottle. I usually get fish and chips. I don't remember about Carol. The last time we were in the Westerville pub was a year or so ago with Cathy and Tod. We walked to Uptown from their place on West Park about three hundred yards from Otterbein's campus. Talk about walks-with-memories. That was the way it was every time we took a walk in old Westerville. I feel better most of the time than I did a couple of years ago, but I don't walk so much. Nervous about falling I suppose. I've only fallen once on ice this winter; that was in the driveway.

         1636 hours. Grandma's-9 is 1906 words and it is one of my favorite Grandma Stories; it is about the 'Australian' aborigine, Abbatoot and the Zero. It takes place about 3,000 years ago, about the time of King Simon being killed by the son of the king Simon tortured and murdered earlier. I don't know how I will shorten it, but it'll be a fun challenge.


         Mid-evening (an hour or so before bed). Let's go over Grandma-9. I will help edit. Use a copy. - Amorella

         With your help I think I have most of Grandma-9 complete. I have 685 words.

         You are close to the amount needed but a near-final drafting can wait until tomorrow. Post. - Amorella

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