07 January 2013

Notes - I need you free, boy / intro of Dead-9 / con't


       Shortly after noon. You had your exercises but it is too early for lunch. Carol had washed her hair and is dressed. The winter sky is sunny, a reprieve from yesterday's clouds. You have been thinking about Dead-9 and are curious in terms of direction The Dead is going. Orndorff, if all the world thought like you we'd have a best seller on our hands. - Amorella

         I like these books. I like reading them because I am never sure what is going to happen and I love the interweaving of the stories because it adds, for me, much more in terms of dimension of how life is, or rather, how life appears to me is. Being too much 'in life' does not allow the time to observe it. I like to think Nature and the physics that goes along with it is as much as an experiment as our species, as observers, is. First hand personal accounts of how it is in this particular universe.

         You are caught in an immediate conflict. What you don't mean to suggest in the preceding sentence you suggest except you are for present leaving G---D out of the equation.

         Yes, I denied this immediately but you are indeed correct after some thought. How do you do this? How do you know this?

         I observe your totality, orndorff, heartansoulanmind, the unit, if you will. I am doing with your humanity what you are attempting to do in your present thinking. Your memories, those you would take with you in the books, are included in heartansoulanmind. You don't like the word because it sounds too feminine and sissified to your gray-bearded manliness. - Amorella

         I would not be so honest but that indeed slips in once in a while. I love the ideas of faeries and angels and that sort, but 'real' men aren't suppose to enjoy such childish thoughts. Fortunately for me I don't really deep down give a damn what people think. I don't care if they can read my mind or not. These are private thoughts. If they weren't real thoughts they wouldn't be out where I can read them myself. Such dark, dark humor you continually present me in this experimental writing circumstance I have created, i.e. blog and books.

         You are freer seeing your thoughts than you would be otherwise. I need you free, boy. Post - Amorella
        
          I need you free, boy is as good a title as any. Use it. - Amorella


        Mid-afternoon. You are waiting at Hallmark for Carol to pick up birthday cards for Mary Lou and Owen; her own birthday is coming up also. You just finished an excellent steak lunch at Longhorn; you split the fresh salad, and an added treat, Jen gave you a Christmas card; then mentioned the last time you had been in was before your Florida trip at the end of November. You told Carol the last time you got a card from a waitress was when you went to the Casino on Cleveland Avenue near Linden in the Columbus north end, and Sophie gave you a card. The Casino was a favorite spot in high school and through your college years.

         Late afternoon. You are at Pine Hill Lakes Park looking northeast for a change, at the grass, trees and City of Mason water tower. Your head is blocking the sun from hitting the screen, that is the point of the direction. Carol is on page 245 of Child's Worth Dying For; this evening you are having left over Papa John's pizza and watching last night's new season of "Downton Abbey" while you tape the news. Let's go to Dead-9. - Amorella

         1700 hours. I did not expect such a beginning and I, like Merlyn, am halted with an, "Oh." I did not expect the Supervisor to be a part of this story. I don't remember having HeranHim introduced before. I need to check. . . . I am wrong. Here is the first reference in Dead-2:

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Selected from Dead-2

         I would rather enjoy these Scottish trees and the flowering meadow. He observed the table and ball dissolve as a wispy white cloud’s in an early morning mist.
         Out of the corner of mind's eye Merlyn witnessed another once appear from behind the nearby giant oak.
         You did not hear the cue ball tap one of your solids, asked the Supervisor of the Dead.
         'I did not. I thought I was alone.'
         'I put the solid burnt orange in the far right pocket.'
         ''What unconscious thought of mine did you just put away?'
         'The Boatman,' evoked the Supervisor.
         Merlyn smiled in surprise and with more childhood energy than he realized, he responded, 'I don't have to pay the Boatman?'
         'You pay, boy,' snapped at Merlyn's tabled mind. 'Everybody pays the Boatman, even me, the Supervisor of the Dead.'

* * *
         This is the Nature of the Dead. Merlyn in a brighter awareness noticed the eight ball now setting alone on the very center of the green-felted mind-slate. I have no other balls, shuttered Merlyn, not even a cue ball to knock this mother-in-the-meadow of an eight ball off center.
         The Supervisor being wise in forethought, dimpled as SheanHe sat on the fully leafed gigantic oak limb hanging taut and strong, high above a young-spirited Merlyn fully meadowed in his now vibrant passionate engine charging heartansoulanmind. Merlyn said, “This, my human spirit, runs on a deeper gravitational energy than love. I am hot in substance and now fully married as iron was to make steel.”
         The Supervisor of the Dead surmised, ‘Merlyn is as wound as any alarm clock in the world of consciousness. Let him ring only when Necessity or the Boatman demands it.’

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         It is too much to remember, Amorella. You have already been introduced.

         I play the character of the Supervisor, boy. You know I am not the character. - Amorella

         Yes. My error. I would not consciously think otherwise. It was a slip of the fingers on the keyboard.

         Add what you have and post when you arrive home. Carol just said she was getting cold. - Amorella

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The Dead - 9 - draft

         Merlyn stood surprised to see Mother Glevema, Panagiotakis and Sophia, who had stubbed her toe at her entrance to his sanctuary, standing beside Mother. "Greetings, Mother, Takis and Sophia. The first time I have ever seen you two together, the resemblance and a mother and daughter separated by a multitude of generations has never been more remarkable. Appearing the same age in spirit you are as the identical twins in other stories from this Realm." Merlyn added politely, "I thought this was a private matter between Mother and me Takis, but I can see by your sagacious presence it is of more overriding importance."
         "Indeed," replied Panagiotakis speaking to Merlyn as if Mother and a daughter were not present. "You must speak to the Living about the First Rebellion to add order and authenticity to the books. You visited in those days when the First Rebellion began and know something of those times because you were witness in the second nature of your spirit."
         "Indeed I was. I was given that privilege, by you I imagine."
         "It was by the Supervisor, Merlyn," interrupted Mother.
         "Oh." With this news presented as a fact at hand, Merlyn realized he was not the Dead's choice to lead the return of the Dead to the Living; it never was.  215 words


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The Dead - 9 continued

         Merlyn's mind moved quickly. How did the Supervisor pull this off? That is my first question. Why does Mother tell me not Takis? Why didn't Takis tell me? Surely he knew the truth? Mind quickly moved to Heart's memory and a whispered circle of multiple ghosts in singly themed thinking that have come to the attention of those ready to move on after physical death.
            Who am I? Why am I here? What shall I do here? How much can I know and understand of my role and responsibility in this Place of the Dead, Avalon.
         In general the Dead agreed on this substance: “We thought if we were not free in life then we would be free in death but that is not the case in this Place. We ruminate and find camaraderie through our personal identities, personalities and interests. The human center is Our Mother, the first who was allowed in this Place. She is our common point. We are equal citizens through our ancestry. We have become a hive of sensibly silhouetted questions searching for equally reasonable responses. What else can we do?”
         Merlyn's soul did not seek the answers to heartanmind questions. There is no need in a Place unknown to Time and Space. The soul is as the gravity that draws heartanmind within. The soul is a refuge from endless questions and equally endless responses. A soul is here and now. Dazed, the fully Merlyn re-arrived. Only Sophia stood within his sight. He asked, "How should I tell the story, Sophia. You and I witnessed the First Rebellion. You were a leader. What is important for the Living to know of something so very long ago?"
         "It was less than three thousand earth years ago." She drifted into a tranced figure. The heartbeat of mature self-consciousness sounds the sunless spirit room with no need of shade.

          312 words  - (more needed)
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         2323 hours. I am stuck, Amorella.

         You are fine, to this place in the first draft. We will pick it up tomorrow. Too late and you are too tired. Post. - Amorella


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