16 February 2014

Notes - (final) Dead 18 / (final) Brothers 18 / 'Brevity' / (final) Grandma 18 / (final) Pouch 18

         Late morning. You had cereal and half an apple for breakfast as well as a glass of orange juice after shoveling half the driveway. You finished the driveway after breakfast and by that time the Sunday paper arrived much later than usual. You read the paper somewhat disturbed that your order of things did not materialize as expected. Even and added inch or so keeps the snow virgin white which you and Carol both enjoy while watching the cardinals, Carolina wrens and finches nibble at the seemingly never ending food supply. Most of the squirrels are eating next door as Tim has a larger food supply, especially of sunflower seeds. – Amorella

         1156 hours. I am ready to work on chapter eighteen. So, first to find a chapter theme.

         1224 hours. No such luck.  I never passed Dead 18. How could I? To edit was to cut the passion by a word or two. Sultry. I am bound by periodless definitions running hotter than anything friction can reply to. To go to wordless is to go to touch alone Merlyn. I could not be thee for one of a thousand days. Only old wise Merlyn can walk the beam of a threaded love from eye to eye, from a Master Druid to his Druidess and back again. She has all the charms and he has not a ball on the table. – Wow. Where did that come from?

         You are caught in Merlyn’s moment, boy, and you can readily see you don’t hold up. Such humor is a delight to see through crystal and with not the hint of shadow. Add the segment and post. – Amorella

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(final) The Dead 18 ©2014, rho GMG.One

            I, Vivian, re-consider never forgotten memory of waiting on love once again deliberated from heartansoulanmind with a brooding lip, I am vivacious and uncommonly forever eighteen. I am young in years but half a divine moonth along in years rather than days. I am as a babe though unslaughterable and ready for the capturing this older man, Merlyn; this great Bard and Druid of our own Caledonia. My thin soft white linen robe drapes suggestively tight or loose where welcome for a visual shadowy enrichment the dark triangle outlined below and subtle fresh fruit-sized bosoms, taut nippled to further enhance this Merlyn's questing imagination. Glancing down her breasts tingled of the goosiest of small bumps, each as a firm faery stem ready to flower for pollination.
            Happily glad, trooping seelings, the blessed faeries, conjure me a-musing . . . wondrously and sprite-like they, a piloerection of tiny hairs about to shoot a feminine succulents for capturing love's quick aroma in this Master Druid's most deserving nostrils.
            I, a druidess spectacular, swell in mind, shape-shifting my supple young heart to sway to the natural craving of our two druidic souls to reunite from Beyond to intertwine in ancient and naked worldly ways. In intuitive grace we shall be one and invisible but for the subtlest sighs of a gentle breeze at play among the highest leaves on the Oak.
            Bay tree laurels, like reason, are not for this momentary crowning. Pray today, no victors here but for Merlyn's plowing into my wholesome wet earth. A virginal seeding is not so much a soulful clutching, as it is the outreach of hot passionate desire.

            It is this enraptured youthful wish of mistaking mind for heart that leads young Vivian into the gravest error, an accident of unforeseen and unpredictable circumstance. Faeries, Vivian should have known, have greater trooping smiles in a spiritedness bordering on lasciviousness compounded by obsession rather than love-in-reason which in this earthly reality all living consciously are bound by even in Death.
            She stands forever if it suits her, a young lady-by-the-lake, ready to walk up and out the forest path exit ready to greet the man she has known for lifetimes but never once on Earth.

            Perchance here is Merlyn. Likewise, he stands a pace or two from the forest path entrance like a physics experiment in quantum entanglement. Merlyn's soul instilled in heartansoulanmind has no need of memory. Merlyn feels those still recent dreams are manifestations of Divine Justice whether he thinks it so or not.
            In an earlier time in life plods Merlyn, I was sitting on a recently fallen log minding my own business wondering how I would think as the second common element, air. Everyone knows how it is to be made of Earth and neither Fire nor Water would be so fully comfortable for its burning up or running off. Air; nothing is so intimate, long lasting and invisible. What I could be and do? He smiles soul contented, knowing intuitively that to be naked and running, the woods invisibly clothed in Air the most free and natural of Aristotle's magical four. The breathe of God will be my Heaven. That was my wish in those days when I measure these thirty-six years.
            Waiting for the white dressed druidess by the lake Merlyn brushed the back of his head as if an ant had fallen from a tree leaf and was taking flight. My virginity contains naturally cultivated creative powers and one day I will know what it is to be invisible. On that day I shall become the sovereign's Arch Druid's master.

            In the interval Merlyn glances through himself to see the billiard table clean and empty of balls and he wonders if it is fair and just that reasonable cause and effect appeared to be eluding him. How can it be that when I ponder on my first meeting with Vivian there are no balls on the slate?
            I am thirty-six and a virgin and this would-be-druidess is eighteen and not. We are about to meet for the first time. I see her stealthily walking through the woods two arms outstretched from the lake's touch. She knows I see her for more than she is, a true druidess in the making. He glances down and sees two goose feathers, one pointed towards her and the other pointed towards him.
            How can it be we share the same pinion feathers when they point quills opposite? Is this event to be calligraphic as our two minds forever meet? Mind to heart and heart to soul – is this but a practice for full sharing. Open-minded I am ready for anything but the losing of self-discipline in this world or the next.

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         Such a closet romantic am I that I cannot fully close the door. The only way to let it go is to let each wordy bird fly as a flock and hope they land upright and together. Naked humanity must see the world as it is. To envision better is to escape the bonds of biomass and bones. Here is a tip of my old black beret to Vivian and Merlyn in their exchanged enchantment. Thanks for allowing me a peek. I am the wiser and more conservative writer for it. (1244)

         Yet, on you go my young man, walking with the romantic poets of the ages. – Amorella

         I am no romantic poet plus I am culturally bound in a double or even a triple fiction.

         No, you are not, but as far as I am concerned you may walk among them. – Amorella

         I am a law-abiding conceit.

         As you wish boy. You are a metaphysical conceit. I grant you that, as are all others of your species, don’t you see? Now post. - Amorella


         1640 hours. I have Brother 18 re-read. I can’t think of how I would change it – to me it certainly shows a slice of life and character quirks as it is/was in a small town. Not much passion though.

         Add and post. – Amorella
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(final) The Brothers 18 ©2014, rho GMG.One

            The two couples sat on the front porch across from Central Ohio's John Knox Cemetery. Connie and Cyndi sitting on the wood stained gliding swing chair for two and Robert and Richard were sitting in sturdier charcoal black chairs one on either side of the porch glider.

            Robert and Richard had just adjusted themselves on the warm but cloudy day. Robert spoke first, "Where are we going for supper?"
           
            "Let's go uptown for a change, I'm tired of the chains," commented Cyndi.
           
            "That's a good idea, how about Jimmy John's?" added Connie.
           
            "And we could have ice cream for desert," said Cyndi in retort.

            "That was quick. Sounds settled then," commented Robert shaking his head with the hint of a grin. "What did you want to do, Richie?" he added with a hint of sarcasm.

            He grumbled, "Like it would make a difference." Noting the sharp looks from both women, he mimicked his brother's dry grin. "Where did you want to eat, Robbie?"

            He shrugged his shoulders, "Hey, Jimmy John's is fine with me."

            "Why do you two not speak up? Why didn't you suggest where you wanted to go, Richie?" asked Cyndi.

            "Why didn't you ask a minute or so ago?" His shuffled face explained he had made his point.

            "We can't read your mind, Richie," said Connie with some irritation.

            "We can just let them scramble up some baked beans and hot dogs for themselves," reinforced Cyndi.

            "Mind reading would be illegal because of privacy laws," quipped Richard.

            Both tightened their lips and jaws. "Let's go to the kitchen, Connie." Both left without another word.

            Richard felt a tinge of guilt for instigating the squabble, thinking, 'I'll pay for this incident later,' but said, “How’s your cemetery poem coming?”

            “I haven’t been working on it, but I have another I’ve dressed up.”

            “Let’s see it.”

            Robert left the porch for a few moments then returned. “I had it in the folder under the car seat along with a few others I like to work on from time to time.”

            “Like where do you work?”

            “Sometimes when I am out for a short drive I will go down to the park, sometimes just a parking lot, or park under an old shade tree down the street. I can dig out a poem and see if the setting helps change my attitude towards the words. Here’s the poem.”

            Richard read Robert’s poem intently, recognizing his own parallel patterned thinking while reading.

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TRANSPLANT WAITING ROOM, CHIIDREN'S HOSPITAL
                                                                                                           

                                                Parents pace among the scarred tables,
                                                settle anxiously into shell craters,
                                                stare about for tonic comfort.

                                                New magazines paint the litter of butchery:
                                                more reminding of a holocaust
                                                with one picture, a girl,
                                                middle of a row, gently smiling
                                                at a sweet, treasured thought
                                                lost to the ashen grass of Auschwitz;

                                                it was the Christians, at Chatila--
                                                broken rooms, stray dogs lapping
                                                blood from pools, furnishings line
                                                the roads, the gray remains compose;

                                                children sled, tumble, cane to rest
                                                in the red snow of Sarajevo;
                                                good intentions stick to poles,
                                                grim advertisements for aid.

                                                Western Art in gilded frames haunts the walls:

                                                still life with ripe fruit; poppies
                                                bleeding a hillside; myths of Primavera
                                                down the bright corridors of morning;
                                                yet in one scene, parents perhaps,
                                                bending the will to stoop,
                                                glean the fields at evening --

                                                they could be Arab women
                                                sorting clothes at Kasserine Pass,
                                                or thin fathers picking rice
                                                among the limbs near Camranh Bay, or

                                                Parents, bent at the bed of human future,
                                                who have sent the organ-gathering troops
                                                to scour the farms of combat,
                                                and who have willingly bowed
                                                toward the any-price of child salvation.

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            “I’m not sure what to say about this. It leaves me organizing thoughts and speechless at the same time.”

            Robert gave him a sardonic look, saying, “That’s really quite a helpful criticism, Richie.”

            Richard returned with, “Sarcasm is a slice and dice scalpel, Robbie boy.”

            “I got the pun, Dickie.”

            Richard retorted slowly and more seriously, “That’s the problem with words sometimes, you think they mean one thing in context, and it turns out they mean something else again.”

            “That’s what was good about being a surgeon,” said Robert. “I was in and out, and the body being operated on was never my own.”

            Richard had a twinkle in his eye, “You can’t cut your thoughts, like it or not, the brain just keeps on working and producing.”

            “These brains of ours will stop one of these days, then where will we be, bro?” said Robert, who almost always slammed in the last word.

            Rob's content with having the last word, sighed Richard, and frankly I can't think of anything else to say. We need the girls out here to liven things up. How is it, I wonder, to be completely wordless?

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         You are having trouble with the conclusion. You are sad because your friend is no longer here to partake. – There, you added a last sentence. – Amorella

         1650 hours. Thank you, Amorella. It is a kind and thoughtful question. Bob was no fiction. Far from it. 


         1700 hours. A word for this chapter’s theme, passion?

         Brevity is the soul of wit, is it not? How about ‘Brevity’? – Amorella

         How do you do this, Amorella? How many times have I thought this. I have ‘passion’ or nothing, zero; then ‘Brevity’ falls into place from the ceiling of my brain. It adds a dimension. Each of the chapter words adds a dimension to the meaning or interpretation of the story segment. Thank you, Amorella

         You are thinking, ‘I could complete this chapter today.’ – Amorella

         I am, but thinking is not doing. I have not had a nap. And, now it is questionable as to whether we are staying home tomorrow or heading to Worthington. I would just as soon get it over with. Carol is washing her hair. That makes me think she is still considering on driving up.

         Add and post. – Amorella

         ‘Brevity’ is the theme word for chapter 18.

         
         Carol is watching the Olympics and you just had a glass of cereal for supper along with your nightly pills. As not much is happening let’s go work on Grandma Eighteen. – Amorella

         1954 hours. Grandma 18 is complete and I hope more easily understood.

         I think many a married man will understand my boy. Add and post. – Amorella

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( final) Grandma's Story 18 ©2014, rho GMG.One

            This is Grandma. Bloodlines were important to the Royals of Europe within their national identities of political power. This story’s legendary bloodline traces to Pharamond, King of Westphalia, who died in four hundred and thirty of your common era. King Pharamond is about to declare his love to Argotta Genebald of the East Franks an important bloodline link.

Here we are in a forest clearing. Princess Argotta of the East Franks sits on the trunk of a large fallen walnut tree and faces east. King Pharamond wishes to sit beside her, but under the circumstance, he sits on a smaller oak log facing her.

Pharamond thinks (in this time of muddled and muddy politics and religion) -- I am attracted to all that I see -- beauty, but not beyond compare. Argotta sits as a friend, and as a possible lover and mother; yet most important, as I muse she sits a princess. First, I must tell her I love her, and second, I must ask for her hand in marriage, a state marriage already secretly approved of.


Should I wait until he speaks, thinks Princess Argotta? It seems only polite to do so. I don’t know why he wants me to be his walking companion in this forest? He has not made any advancement for which I am grateful. I appear to be the handle of the sword. The king is the point and he is sharply double edged. I am no flat of steel though. I can exchange a blade handle easily enough. Harmonies exist in a marriage of such royal metals. It is odd for me to have such a quick thrusted thought to feel. I should up a shield for his silence, but now, strangely, I do not care for one. Normally I feel the need to speak. It is the job of a Princess to speak her mind. Others need to know what to do. I am built to instruct.


“We haven’t seen the owl today,” said King Pharamond.

“No, we haven’t milord.”

            “You are beautiful when your cheeks are red, my Princess Argotta,” disclosed the king.

            She smiled pleasantly while as she looking to Pharamond. She said, “M’king, did you know I am skilled in the art of blacksmithing?”

            Pharamond laughed from the unexpected, “I did not, m’Lady. I had no idea. Where did you learn the arts?”

            “My father, the king. He is skilled in the old arts.”

            “I did not know.” . . . along with what other secrets, he thought.

            She stood, straight and ancestrally proud, “Yes, when he discovered I was interested in the arts he taught me. I have created a sword with my own hands, milord,”

            “I did not know,” smiled Pharamond more warmly. “And, your father, he is of the old ways? I always considered him a follower of the Bishop of Rome.”

            “That he is, and so am I. We do not agree with the Visigoth tribes to the south. We accept Jesus as God. I understand the Visigoth question this.”

            “True,” said the king. “Some people have doubts.”

            Without thinking or even flinching, Argotta immediately replied, “It is not a fact, milord.”

Pharamond was taken back momentarily confused, “What do you mean, my Princess Argotta?”

            The king's unusual tone took Argotta by complete surprise. Her eyes darted side to side and appeared to roll back because the royal tone came so quickly, she answered, “You cannot doubt a fact, milord.”

            The king replied in relief. “You are skilled in the academics also, I see.”

            “Of course, milord. What would you expect of a princess?”

            King Pharamond blurted, “I would like you to be my queen, if you so desire it also. You will always be free to verbally respond to me as a man would respond, Princess Argotta. In public and in private.”

            “This is not the Catholic way, milord.”

            “In private we each are not the Catholics we are perceived in public. We have more in common than I suspected.”

            “We do, milord,” answered Argotta as took a step towards the king. She knelt automatically and drew her right hand forth as if it held an invisible and magic sword, “I accept your offer. You may thus kiss this queen’s hand, King Pharamond.”

Old Grandma knows which way it goes
Along the genetic path petal-filled with rose;
Hand in hand from any solitary Eden left
Is an ancient story of an Eve and Adam bereft.


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           2027 hours. This Pouch segment was more awkward than I remembered. The ‘brevity’ fits in, in my mind, where Blake realizes he and Yermey have death in common because both are the oldest on board of each species. There is a kind of game ‘play’ on Brevity is the soul of wit in this. The soul being immortal and all but wit comes a mortal’s tongue. It is interesting word play.

         You let your mind carry you away; you are at times that light-weighted. Add and post. No more tonight. – Amorella

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(final) Diplomatic Pouch 18 ©2014, rho GMG.One

            "Who would have ever thought we would see this live?" uttered Blake Williams quietly.
            "Never in a million years," declared Justin.
            "What does this mean?" asked Pyl.
            Justin quickly rebutted, "Why does it have to mean something, Pyl? Jeez. We are here in space witnessing the dark side of the Moon."
            "There is a purpose,” grimaced Pyl. “What do they want from us?"
            Yermey seemed to pop up from nowhere, "You ask a good question, Pyl Burroughs."
            "Here it comes," mumbled Justin unthinkingly.
            "What's that?" smiled Yermey.
            Blake grinned sardonically, "He means Pyl will be direct.
            Yermey chuckled, put his hand on Blake's shoulder and said, "Let's go in here and sit for a minute where we can talk comfortably."
            The relatively non-descript empty room had two chairs and a couch roll up into place for sitting while the ceiling and upper walls created a soft lighting. Blake enjoyed Yermey's brotherly touch and said, "All this needs is a fire lit fireplace to appear from the far wall."
            Yermey laughed softly, saying, "No fireplaces here but I could arrange for one. I’ll be right back.”
            "No, that's fine,” responded Blake.
            Pyl sat on the couch with Justin fitting in beside her, "I don't know what's fine, Blake,” she said. “We don't know, but I assume we are going to be used by these people."
            Justin realized Pyl hardly knew he was there and comforting is not what she needed. He off-handedly fell into Pyl’s mood, "Pyl's right, Blake. We need to know more before we get cozy with these people."
            Yermey returned quickly and sat, looked at each earthling and commented, "I appreciate your honesty; really, we all do. Cozy is not a word I know well. We want you to feel safe and secure. First, we respect your species. This is the reason we came here. The greater ThreePlanets family is not happy we have arrived here, and even less so for inviting you onboard as guests."
            Jokingly Blake mouthed, "Good cop, bad cop."
            I think Friendly might be able to better explain. "I am neither a good cop or a bad cop. We would like, if you three accept, to have you teach us more about your culture from your personal standpoints. We want . . . "
            "I understand you would like some help Yermey," interrupted Friendly. "It is not often Yermey asks anyone for help. That is what he is doing. Let us give you some private time to talk this over among yourselves.” She stood and Yermey followed quietly.

            In the course of the conversation something stuck out to Blake that would change his life, Yermey had said, "the machinery allows us to see who we really are," to which Friendly countered, "it helps us to analysis are private agendas in advance of action."
            "What do you think, Blake?" asked Pyl, "Are we ready for this?"
            He looked up, "Ready for what?"
            "Ready to help," replied Justin. "Do we want to help these people help themselves to our ways?"
            Confused, Blake smiled sheepishly, "I think I am missing something here." He saw Hartolite passing by, called her in and asked,  “Do you think we can really be helpful to you people and helpful to our own species also?” Suddenly Yermey re-entered quietly.
            "This is important to us, to have you be our ambassadors of sorts. We have come all this way," reinforced Hartolite. "We four are the rebellious ones by being here on our own. Our visit was and is not officially sanctioned. We cannot come out and say 'Hello, we are official representatives from ThreePlanets."
            "Why have you not used SETI?" asked Pyl. "It seems to me this would be a natural first place to communicate."
            "We prefer one on one personal contact," answered Yermey, "because we are trying to avoid the cleverness and bullshit. We don't have time for nonsense."
            "You live five hundred years," responded Blake. "I think I smell some bullshit right there."
            "I don't have time," declared Yermey bluntly, "because I have lived those five hundred and some years already."
            Blake caught the look in Yermey's eyes; no question, he thought, these people are human. "We have death in common. I understand.”
            "Our Parents-in-Charge would use machinery to deal with Earth if it is forced upon them," said Friendly.
            "Communication machinery, not as sophisticated as Ship," added Hartolite. "We have no weaponry. We need none. When we think 'run' or Ship thinks 'run' we do. We are very fast plus invisible when need be."
            Surprisingly even to Pyl, she commented, "We have too many machines on our planet. We are willing to listen to what you would have us do. We want to remain on good terms in any case."
            "Good," smiled Yermey, “we like those terms.”

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