08 March 2014

Notes - "I, Merlyn," / title - acknowledgements final / final - chapter one / errors

After noon. You had a lazy morning but a nap has helped. – It has taken you more than an hour of work to change the bottom paragraph of the introduction to each chapter to this:

            "I, Merlyn, have this little ditty above memorized to the point it sets stemmed in letters out of which each four-leafed chapter dreams grow to clover size. I knead the dreams into a word stream of music for the heart and soul and mind with hope that when read these stories cast a light into those living with an imagination that casts no shadow."

         1318 hours. I want Merlyn to speak at the beginning of each chapter of dreams.


         Good. Post. - Amorella


         Dusk. You have worked off and on this afternoon. Drop in what you have that is final draft and post. – Amorella
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Copyright © 2001-2014 by Richard H. Orndorff

This is a work of fiction. The characters, names, incidents, mythology, culture and dialogue are the products of the author’s imagination or they are used fictitiously.

All events, themes, persons, characters and plot
are the invention of the author.

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GREAT MERLYN’S GHOST: ONE

A Continuing Exploration Into Consciousness

By Richard H. Orndorff

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Dedication


            This book is dedicated four-fold; one, to my friends; two, to my many former students and colleagues with whom I taught for thirty-seven years, 1966-2003; three, to my daughter Kim, her husband, Paul and my two wonderful grandsons, Owen and Brennan and; four, the book is dedicated to the memory of one of my few dear ‘special’ friends Thomas Robert Pringle. We were kindred spirits, twin-minded writing allies from our early days at Otterbein University and our elections to its Department of English Quiz and Quill Honorary.


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Acknowledgments

            Many of the legendary historical names, historical settings; the romantic and neoclassical ideologies; and the scientific concepts and theoretical plausibility’s entertained amongst these margins can be found throughout Google and Wikipedia.

         I thank my life partner Carol, daughter Kim and son-in-law, Paul for their diligence and patience. I also thank specific friends, initial readers of my original Merlyn’s Mind trilogy: Angie; Bob and Patti; Cathy and Tod; Craig and Alta; Fritz; Gary; Jeanne and Jim; Laney; my Aunt Patricia and my Uncle Ernie for their observations and helpful comments.

         Also, a special thank you to my two living Muses; and, to my theoretical physics advisor with whom I have discussed the many plausibility’s presented in this edition, my lifelong friend John Douglas Goss, PhD. Physics and his kind and personable wife, Nancy.

            During these last twenty-five years Amorella has continually collaborated with writing projects all of them setting the stage for this one. Since 2007 Amorella and I have a working writing notes/journal at www.encountersinmind@blogspot.com. Feel free to scan when, where, how and sometimes why the grammar and content pots percolate as they do.

            My original objective twenty-five years ago was to intellectually stimulate and entertain my heart, mind and imagination. Now it is time to more maturely share the experiences of those years to interested readers.

                                    Richard H. Orndorff, Spring 2014

                                   
            This is Amorella, Richard’s writing guide and collaborator. The work is a fiction but the words are as honest as if he were swearing. What makes this truly a ghost story is that it is being set down as if an Angel asked Richard, recent among the Dead, to tell his story. I take the part of the Angel. Richard is the ghost, the human spirit. The words come from where they would come from if he were physically dead; the part one takes with her or him afterwards, the heart and soul and mind/memory of who one is in the continuing life of the spirit. Is it imagination or magic? Ask the engaging spirit of Merlyn.



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Chapter One

Slavery

            The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On judgment day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.

            I, Merlyn, have this little ditty above memorized to the point it sets stemmed in letters out of which each four-leafed chapter dreams grow to clover size. I knead the dreams into a word stream of music for the heart and soul and mind with hope that when read, these stories cast a light into those living with an imagination that casts no shadow.

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         1801 hours. The work is beginning to ‘move’ on its own. As I proofread and edit it is as though I am within an enchantment. I love the art of unfolding letters so much. It contains a magic to me similar to that of how I think the ancient Greek stage which was considered a magic ring for its theatre.

         We shall continue to drop in the chapters final draft. Why not. You want it free. You can have it that way online, at least for now. - Amorella


         1801 hours. The work is beginning to ‘move’ on its own. As I proofread and edit it is as though I am within an enchantment. I love the art of unfolding letters so much. It contains a magic to me similar to that of how I think the ancient Greek stage which was considered a magic ring for its theatre.

         We shall continue to drop in the chapters final draft. Why not. You want it free. You can have it that way online, at least for now. - Amorella

         I added this to my Facebook page earlier:

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I have changed my plans. For those interested in reading the final draft of Great Merlyn’s Ghost I will add it as I edit and make the corrections. It will be marked ‘Final’ at the top of my daily blog and you may read along as the final copy comes into view. I do not know if I can make it free as an ebook. If not, this is insurance that it is out there presently and you may copy the final in its parts for your own private use among family and friends if you wish. Once this final draft is complete and sent to an e-publisher I may have to delete these final selections from the blog. Thank you for your interest. – rho
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            2242 hours. I completed the Chapter One final draft.

         Add and post. - Amorella

         I could still find errors.

         What else is new in the human world. – Amorella

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Chapter One

Slavery

            The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On judgment day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.

            I, Merlyn, have this little ditty above memorized to the point it sets stemmed in letters out of which each four-leafed chapter dreams grow to clover size. I knead the dreams into a word stream of music for the heart and soul and mind with hope that when read, these stories cast a light into those living with an imagination that casts no shadow.




The Dead 1
            This is Merlyn. The date is 15 December 2009. I have been here entangled between the Living and the Dead since Orndorff’s third book Merlyn’s Mind was published in May 2008. Your twenty-first century Earth is not the Earth I left in the seventh century. This is for me is a quantum entanglement of heart and soul and mind between your Heaven and Earth.

            I am Merlyn's Supervisor and I am, through no fault of my own, entangled also. Merlyn resorts to a billiard table mind with six standard pockets but Merlyn cannot know which is the pocket to the heart and which is the pocket to the soul in the table or elsewhere. No one knows how or why the secret tunneling exists to heart and to soul. Glevema is another nearby spiritual entity in "The Dead" segments. She speaks not only to Merlyn, but to all the Dead. She is the ancestral mother of all living human beings and in here her voice rolls up and out of the ancient antennae-like spine humans are born to grow with.

            “Merlyn,” says Glevema, “you are indeed knotted as a belly button between me and our descendants."
            Merlyn felt the smoothly rolling and solid black mother of 8 balls in his tabled mind whisper, 'Life is the spirit’s armor.' The balled concept invisibly black 8 moves on across his green felted table to strike at the bumper boundary of Merlyn's soul-pocket, spin, then run the green only to fall into Merlyn's heart-side pocket where Glevema rolls unceremoniously into darkness. 
            'Mother vanishes below and I am sick at heart,' pops roundly yellow onto Merlyn’s mind table as a now cautionary yellow 1 ball stopping at near the center of the table.
            Mother of the eight ball reappears from near left pocket and rolls to a set on the white cue mark. "Merlyn," commented Mother in slight irritation, "it is confusing for me to be so mind-placed on your thinking table."
            Merlyn’s quiet smirk rose in a burnt orange 5 ball near the far side pocket in open confrontation.
            Mother reappears from the side pocket catching the intended smile. Resting marked and cued. She comments, "You have been on Earth for almost three years and are still adjusting to the twenty-first century."
            The reality shocks Merlyn's mind into a full table of sixteen scattering balls and he finds himself sitting instead on his favorite large piece of tabled granite, a slab resting in the ever adjusting meadow-of-his-mind. He finds himself suddenly staring at a petite and beautiful womanly spirit with the darkest of eyes. Her long curly black hair swirls over her magically feminine arms and fingers and legs and toes. Mother appears as he secretly endearingly imagines — a legendary Celtic faery without wings or wand. Such are the distractions that come from the depths that coil on the divide of the Living and the Dead.
            Merlyn queries, "Are you our once original ancestral Mother, Glevema, the granddaughter of Panagiotakis the Shaman, or are you her later ancient Greek look-alike twin, Sophia?” he paused, “Are you Sophia the Greek during the time of the First Rebellion in HeavenOrHellBothOrNeither? Or are you something else, a Shapeshifter?”
            Mother replies, “I am Glevema deballed Merlyn. I am your ancestral Mother of the Dead and all those presently living within Earth’s boundary." She stood slim, dark skinned and royal at her former living height of five full feet at less than ninety pounds. ”Now, you see me as I am.”
            Merlyn stood, bowed slightly in the humility and whispers, "m'Lady."
            Amused, Glevema asks, "When did you last see Sophia?"
            Merlyn responds, "She was in charge of constructing a bridge across the River Styx." Seemingly this event was only hours ago, realized Merlyn, that I was delivered to the presence of Sophia’s spirit, to witnessed the beginning of the Rebellion of the first fully conscious ten-thousand human spirits in Elysium, the Place of the Greek Dead. The first revolution of the Dead happened during the earth time of the great Greek storyteller, Homer, who lived in the ninth century BCE.
            A brief and passing thought encompassed itself and rotated slowly into the shape of a solid green 6 ball to the center billiard table . . .  'Wait,' thinks Merlyn, 'Today is a present earth date. I am an fully engaged human soul entrapped within a living human mind and body of Richard Greystone who is stuck not so solidly in the once familiar world of three-dimensional physics.





The Brothers 1

            Robert Greystone sits down at his desk giving a glance to his younger brother and asked, “Richie, what the world are you talking about?”
            Richard Greystone continues his spiel, “The brain and the mind are separate entities. As such it is possible to be in two places at once."
            “And, who is it that writes these books for you?”
            “My imaginary Captain Lamar brings me slave stories on his ferry across the Ohio River in my head. Lamar is my writing persona.”
            “Right. Lamar’s small ferry travels from Mason County, Kentucky to Ripley, Ohio in your head.
            “You are being too literal, Robbie. Captain Lamar follows the famous route of the historic Underground Railroad in my head. The words travel through the underground in my head.”
            “Richie, why conjure up such a literary devise? You don’t do this when you write poetry.”
            “The underground in my head surpasses the cultural slavery too long held in modern times.”
            Robert quipped, “We are all cultural slaves, Dickie. This is the way the world is, this is the way the world works." Society is not slavery, he thought, it is the way things get done. How else would things get done? “Why don’t you sit down and quite pacing.”
            Richard sat in the only available chair facing his brother behind the desk. “My stories are corded in the spine first then to the brain and then on to the mind," responded Richard, “from concept through word order and grammar – that’s Captain Lamar’s underground.” Secret words come from secret places, thought Richard. I know I am right.
            “Why don’t you stick to writing the poetry?”
            Richard’s eyes narrowed, “Why? You  are better poet.”
            Robert smiles, “True. I am.”
            “Your poetry is clear and concise with no nonsense.”
            Robert expresses his amusement with the ‘yes, of course’ chuckle he knew his brother hated.  He remarked, “That’s because my brain and my mind are in the same place. I don’t have an imaginary old Captain Leo and his whimsical ferry, Johnny Sprout, creating me poems hot from the northern hills of the Kentucky my mind.”
            “It’s Jonathan Sprout not Johnny,” grumbles Richard, “Captain Lamar just delivers the stories, Rob.
            “Johnny Sprout the musician. It’s all in your head, Richie.”
            A spot of anger rose, “Of course it’s in my head. I know where it’s from, Robert, but the mind is not the brain.”
            “Is this what floats your boat, Dickie? I mean we’re retired, you should know better. ”            Richard continued his verbiage, “Neurologists argue on the definition of mind. Here’s the first revised Merlyn chapter, read it over.”
            “Why didn’t your grand Captain Leo deliver your final Merlyn books the first time around? Why are you now redoing the works?
            Richard truthfully responds, “It’s Lamar not Leo, Robbie;” somberly he added, “I have a better understanding of Merlyn’s circumstance today.” We are all slaves, thought Richard, but the Dead aren’t slaves to anyone.
            Robert reckons, I know where this is from, then he drew the mirror of a waggish smile, “Do you remember when we first went to Ripley to see the Underground Railroad?”
            Richard sat in some frustration drumming his fingers on the soft chair arms, “Sure, I was about eight. Grandma and Grandpa took and showed us where John Rankin lived, the setting in Stowe’s Uncle Tom’s Cabin.” Richard chuckles, “I thought there was going to be a real railroad.”
            Rob softens, “So your stories float up from the underground railroad in your head.”
            “Look Robbie, people still want freedom from slavery,” surmised Richard but he dared not say it without further consideration from the Captain.
            “We live in America. We have freedom,” said Robert. “You liberal thinkers are all alike.”
            Richard retorts, “This is not about politics, Robbie. God, don’t you ever get away from politics?” You are an old fart just like always, a conservative cardio surgeon, once and always. He fussed up, “I hate politics and religion too, what’s the goddamn difference?”
            Seeing a win on the horizon, Robert taunted in reasonableness and control, “Too many years being slave mastering to your students has gotten to you, Prof Dickie.”
            “I wasn’t a slave master. I never had a student do anything I hadn’t done myself.”
            “The way I remember it, you enjoyed whipping the college freshman in your expository writing classes every year for thirty five years, man."
            Richard scoffed, “Bull,” but remembers when his students told him that some called his class Suppository Writing 101. One student had even told him in private that the few who failed the class called him, Professor Dick. What humor, he thought. I heard wonderful college humor interspersed with wonderful years of teaching; how I miss the classroom.
            Robert skimmed the first half page of manuscript in the nondescript blue folder and said, “Is this a final draft?”
            “It is the final, one chapter at a time.”
            “I’ll read it,” said Robert abruptly, but who's to say this will be any better than your first self published attempt?"
            “You are,” smarted Richard. “Surely, you, the significant poet, can understand how novel writing is.” Wrong word choice, he realizes.
Resetting his tone Rob comments, “I don’t know why you can’t just stick with poetry. We could publish a good book of poems together. This is what we were going to do when we retired, write books of poetry together and have them published.”
“It appears golf is more important than getting any of “The Brothers Poetry” published.”
“A different vocation. I have room for both. I have been working on a couple poems.”
 Richard smiles nonchalantly, “Balls and words both cut and slice.”
                   Robert looks over his glasses after a quick skim of the chapter. “There are four segments in each chapter? Why? You had three segments.”
         "Old Merlyn is dreaming four stories simultaneously, one with the Dead, one in the present, one in the past, and one in the future. The Dead dream in a verb tense disorientation,” declared Richard with an air of unconscious authority.
            Rob smiles, “Where’s more of “The Brothers” segment?”
            "Read what you have, carefully please. I'll get it to you. I'm reworking,” states Richard who left Robert to read his draft more closely while he headed downstairs to see Cyndi and Connie. Of all things, he fancied while traveling the stairs, here we are, two at-odds, lone wolf identical twin brothers, each married to the most compatible and popular of sisters, Connie and Cyndi Bleacher who were born a year apart but who are otherwise almost identical twins themselves. What were we thinking?




Grandma’s Story 1

            This is Grandma Earth. I show selected examples of human spirits going back almost eighteen thousand years in the direct genetic lines, of the Greystone and Bleacher families. The human spirits in these stories are connected to some of you readers also. That is both the lighter and the darker humor resting in the margins. Homo sapiens come onto the earth whole and a selection of that whole, the spirit, survives, at least in here, whether one likes it or not — just like when being born. The species provided the ancestors of Robert and Richard and their chosen life partners Connie and Cyndi.
            Grandma’s old dark eyes glance off the page to view the reader as a representative of the species, with clarity she says, “You forget your ancestors, and you forget what you are, don’t you think? I have a long ago story for you, remarked Grandma. This dead man is still stuck, just like some of the living.

“It is dawn and my shoulders shiver. This is the way it is. I hear the crickets and other small creatures around the swamp. I am in a hole on a wall and there is no way out. This is the way it is. I am stuck. Let me out. My fingers are cold to ice. It is Winter in Spring. The birds sing. I am no bird. It is cold, and I am ice forming on the river. I am floating and cold but I am not the river. I am the common ground frozen,” asserts the dead man.
He turns to better face his audience. “I had a dream last night, and it was a whopper. The dream was about people who live out among the stars, and how it is that they are stuck too, like I am. I remember my own cold dawn. I am almost eighteen thousand years old by Earth’s gauge, and I am stuck flat in the ice near a surrounding the pond of stars. I am the first wizard and though solid I am still dancing.”
            Much later, the first shaman, Panagiotakis, while alive on Earth also looks to his audience and in a dancing memory points to a not so bright seemingly solid northern star in the night and reveals from memory, “We are from there,” then he pointed to the soil beneath his feet, “to here.” None of those who saw this shaman in life point and speak those simple words slept well that night.
            One of those attentive listeners was Glevema, his granddaughter. She tossed and turned in the darkness and a question unexpectedly brightened her mind, ‘How can we be here and there at the same time?’
            Later in life, she died and found herself waiting for members of her tribe to join her once they died and discovered they did not completely die. People had become respecting of the Dead by the time of Panagiotakis and his granddaughter Glevema. People had begun burying the Dead with rites and passages to accommodate the living and the dead at the same time. The living had made a conscious decision, to be in two places at once, to be with their living friends and to be with the memories of their dead friends. In this story Glevema becomes the first human consciousness-in-spirit to enter a Place of the Dead because she accepts her spiritual condition.
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            Glevema knows Grandma Earth with her white teeth gleaning as a white cloud usually unsoiled with wordy shadows. Grandma stares out at her listener thinking, the living and dead passing as wordy shadows on the whitest of walls. “Child,” she says, “I’m gonna sit on this here stump and hope it won’t stain my pretty blue and white dress floating along in a gentle breeze.” Grandma Earth sits down and expounds,  “You may not like it but I am your Nature inside and out. This kerchief on my head ain’t nothin' but the stars and the Beyond.”
            Grandma glances up into this dark sky and continues, “I got me this chant to take us from the Dead and the past to Merlyn’s dream story future set. I am the heart on which shamans like Merlyn dance. He don’t dance alone though. Nobody dances alone. Everyone has a love to dance with and Merlyn’s no exception. He dances with Vivian. 

From these two ancient hearts by soul made one
Show these stories where passions are begun.

Our well-known druid and druidess will do,
They are the same, human spirits that make up you.

In a timeless corridor where musing memories rightly tie
Our Vivian and Merlyn do consciously lie.

From anecdote and Grandma's tooth-filled gums
Our past shaped narrative to a future dream story comes.




Diplomatic Pouch 1

            Pyl Williams-Burroughs sits next to her brother and pilot, while they await departure instructions from Detroit to Burke Lakefront in Cleveland.  Pyl turned excitedly, "Justine, what'd you think of the auto show?"
            "I liked it. I liked the new plug-in hybrids the best."
            "I liked them too,” she replies. “Which ones did you like best, Blakey."
            "Right now, I like the sunny and mild weather — not bad for a third of the way through January.” He paused, then matter-of-factly remarked, "We are a go on 33."
            Justin leans forward pushing himself back to sit up straight and adjusting himself to better observe the instrument needles fluttering as the worn asphalt runway began to more swiftly disappear beneath the fuselage. ‘We are up,’ rests his anxiety. Intimately his next thought is, ’now all we have to do is come down.’
            An hour into their flight Blake and Justin were enjoying the meticulous drone of the Rolls-Royce engine in line with the darker blue above and the gray blue waters of Lake Erie ten thousand of feet below. Dusk will be around five, brooded Blake as the tip of the Cessna Eagle’s left wing appeared to lightly tap onto an unseen object. “What the hell?” mumbled Blake.
            "Was it a bird?" asked Pyl cautiously.
            Justin interjected, “It sounded like a car tire kicking up a stone."
            Blake picked up the small binoculars for a quick inspection, "There's a crack near the wing tip light." His puffed lower lip and grouching demeanor lead to another round nervous of cabin silence into a satisfactory landing at Cleveland’s Burke Lakefront Airport.
            While Pyl and Blake visually inspected the landing light held fiberglass wingtip of the parked Cessna more closely Blake observes a minute gray spongy substance within the slight crack. This is secondary to the reassuring fact that the crack appears easily repairable.
            "What is that gray stuff?" asks Pyl.
            Blake replies, ”Probably bled out bird gut."
            "Scrape me some," orders Pyl. "I'll have it analyzed. I want to see what kind of bird was flying that high."
            Her husband Justin moans, "What for? Jeez, Pyl, it’s ground guts.”
            Pyl ignores the comment by saying, “Justin, get me something to put this in. We were pretty high for it to be a bird."
            At that point a stranger walks up to the wing and begins inspecting the damage.
            Pyl asked politely, "May I help you?"
            "I saw you coming in. I am interested in buying an old Cessna P210N like this one."
            The woman has such an odd dialect, thought Justin as he picked up a small plastic envelope for Pyl. Noting the stranger’s dark Mediterranean-like eyes, he first gives Pyl the envelope and then extended his hand, "I'm Justin. This is my wife, Pyl and that's her brother, Blake, on the stool.” Curiosity gets the better of him, “I’m surprised you just didn’t call the plane, the Eagle or Silver Eagle, that’s what people usually say.”
            The female marsupial humanoid quickly gathers herself into a warm smile, "Hello, I’m Fran."
            "That's your name?" questioned Pyl.
            "Yes," as she gave her hand to Pyl she caught her error and she added, "My given name is Francis Parker, and you are Pill?"
            Pyl giggled, "My brother couldn't pronounce my real name so I have been stuck with P-y-l ever since."
            The humanoid turns slightly and shakes Justin's hand, "And you are the brother?"
            "No, he's my husband,” answers Pyl. “My brother Blake is inspecting the damage."
            Blake quibbled business-like, "We think a bird hit the wingtip light. A slight crack, but it appears repairable."
            "I have a trace of the remains," adds Pyl. "I'm going to have it analyzed to see what kind of bird it was."
            A slight crack, thinks the humanlike alien. Our Ship was considerate. Ship would have been more so had he not allowed the touch at all. Interrupting her thoughts she says, "Well, good luck making the repair.” Francis quickly adds, "Blake, how much would you give for her?"
            Pyl moaned, "Daddy would never want us to sell this plane, Blake. She's family."
            Francis declares, "Upon a decent inspection and fly about, I’ll give you up three hundred thousand and not a dime more." The human lookalike concluded masterfully with an in your face business-like smile.
            "Give me your card. I'll contact you tomorrow," responded Blake.

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             0634 hours. Sunday. I have already discovered and corrected several copy errors. I will try to be more diligent. 

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