10 August 2014

Notes - angelic wit ? /

         Mid-evening. You arrived home from a good two days with Kim, Paul, Owen and Brennan. The boys behaved admirably. Upon Kim and Paul’s return from the wedding this afternoon Kim handed Carol a dozen Jennifer cookies from On the Rise. You had a pleasant chat then left. You will return Thursday afternoon for dinner at Olive Garden at the Polaris Centre. Friday morning you will leave for lunch with David and Marsha in Massillon. You have been spending time working on a revised e-Publication of GMG.One. Wait until tomorrow to go over it again, one more time. You feel it is better but I wanting to touch the poem:

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Yesterday, upon the stair,

I met a man who wasn't there.

He wasn't there again today,

I wish, I wish he'd go away...

From – Wikipedia – I met a man who wasn’t there
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         Here is the addition at the conclusion of volume one. - Amorella

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end of chapter twenty-one

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            ‘This concludes the first volume of Great Merlyn’s Ghost which shows me bodiless and naked except for a heavy dressing of transparent agnostic armor. Clearly, here I stand speaking to a Presence, a pretend Angel, that may be no more real than I am,’ thinks a suddenly enlightened Richard Greystone, a man who does not know whether he is dead or alive. ‘Am I an extension of dead Merlyn’s dreams? Where is my perfect validation of reality, my twin, Robert?’

            “Orndorff, you don’t have a twin named Robert.” replies Amorella in a touch of angelic wit, “and the only Presence in here is me not you.”

From – GMG.One revised draft – Ch. 21 - conclusion
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         2202 hours. I like the concept of it, the humor, which needs to carry though to the next volume.

         I see it as a sample fact of your life in thought, orndorff. Post. - Amorella

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