09 August 2014

Notes - See, you view /

         Late evening. Yesterday afternoon you discovered that you had a choice of correcting between one and ten errors in the epublication for fifty extra dollars or as you chose the more expensive ‘premier’ publication process, you may resubmit from scratch the entire e-publication. You have wisely chosen the latter and made several more changes. You have just completed this once again and this time you are pleased that the book is written with a slightly different and broader theme and focus. For example, my words are rewritten as you, Richard, better understand the English translation below:

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Acknowledgments
            Many of the legendary historical names, historical settings; the romantic and neoclassical ideologies; and the scientific concepts and theoretical plausibility’s entertained among these margins can be found throughout Google and Wikipedia.
         I thank my life partner Carol, daughter Kim and son-in-law, Paul for their diligence and patience. I also thank specific friends, initial readers of my original Merlyn’s Mind trilogy: Angie; Bob and Patti; Cathy and Tod; Craig and Alta; Fritz; Gary; Jeanne and Jim; Laney; my Aunt Patsy and Uncle Ernie for their observations and helpful comments.
I also thank the late Thomas Robert Pringle for prior permission to use two of his previously published poems: “Nature Junkie” and “Transplant Waiting Room, Children’s Hospital”.
         And, a special thank you to my two living Muses who know who they are; and to my theoretical physics advisor my lifelong friend John Douglas Goss, PhD. Physics with whom I have discussed the scientific plausibility’s presented in this edition; and, also to his personable wife, Nancy who has provided comments and suggestions along the way.
            During these last twenty-six years Amorella has continually collaborated with my writing projects. Since 2007 Amorella and I have been writing working notes/journal at www.encountersinmind@blogspot.com. Feel free to scan if your curiosity is piqued.
            My original objective twenty-six years ago was to write to intellectually stimulate and entertain my heart, mind and imagination. Now it is time to share these cerebral experiences to interested readers.

                              Richard H. Orndorff, Summer 2014
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            This is Amorella, Richard’s inner guide and collaborator. This work is a fiction but the words are as honest as if the author were swearing. What makes this truly a ghost story is that it is being set down as if an Angel were asking the ghost of Richard, “Who are you?” I, Amorella, take the part of the Angel. His ghost, his human spirit, replies, “I am mostly fiction and rather than articulate an autobiography, I have a fiction residing in my heart, my soul, my mind and memory.  I am dreamer first, and I as such, I begin with my dreams while they are still fresh.”

            At the same time, I, Amorella hear Richard’s unconscious mind also saying, “I am an agnostic. Damned or no, I am honest. My doubting humanity has nothing to hide from an Angel, pretend or not, or an Angel of G---D, imaginary or not.” These stories come from my reality of having once lived an existence in a setting that on one level or another cannot be proven to exist except to and through other human beings. So, here I stand within this angelic Presence. I am not alone either living or dead. If I am heard on either side of this proverbial and existential River, I am a human spirit, just as you are; I am real or once was. Who are you?”
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         2234 hours. I may yet make another change or two before re-sending this in sometime on Monday. I am thankful for the errors that allow me another chance cleaning this up and gaining more conscious insight on the book’s intent. Straight-on, I, an agnostic by nature, stand in this fiction, be there a pretend Angel or no. – rho

         See, you view the words of the book differently, imperfections and all. Good. Post. - Amorella

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