15 October 2014

Notes - trillions / Ch. 7 Stats / Ch. 7 (final) draft


        Mid-morning. After breakfast you were reading the newest Discover (November 2014) and two articles caught your fancy. The first is “Alien Protection Plan” on page fifty-six about the real “Men in Black”, a woman named Catharine Conley whose job at present is to protect aliens from human (Earth) contamination.         

       Some day humans will go to Mars, and you can’t sterilize a human,” [Alberto] Fairen argues. We are so intertwined with microbes that biology writer Ed Yong describes himself as “trillions of microbes in a human shaped sack.”

         The other article, “20 Things You Didn’t Know About Galaxies” on page seventy-four states among other facts: 1. Immanuel Kant coined the term “island universe” to describe the Milky Way galaxy and 3, one of the earliest uses of the term Milky Way is Geoffrey Chaucer’s “House of Fame” in which he liked the galaxy to a celestial roadway. Number 15 states The Milky Way rotates at about 250 kilometers per second (560,000 miles per hour) and completes one revolution about every 200 million years. The last rotation began during the time of the dinosaurs. – Amorella

         0954 hours. These articles are very interesting. There is always something to learn or to be reminded of. As far as Great Merlyn’s Ghost is concerned carrying trillions of microbes is probably the most important fact to remember in terms of both humans and marsupial humanoids. Surely Onesixanzero and Ship machinery can better understand the complexities of this and have come to the conclusion it is safe for humans to enter marsupial humanoid space; after all, marsupial humanoids have entered human space more than once with no human (to date) feeling the ill effects.

         Post. - Amorella


        After a Wednesday supper at the pub you completed Chapter Seven. Here are the stats. Post with the draft. – Amorella

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Ch. 7  – Common Core
Words - 3153 
Sentences - 250
Words per Sentence – 12.4
Sentences/Paragraph – 2.3
Passive Sentences – 3%
Flesh Reading Ease - 100.0
Flesh-Kincaid Grade Level – 0.6

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         1940 hours. Carol is drying her hair as she has a breakfast with retired teacher friends in the morning. We had a good supper at the Brazenhead tonight. We have the News to watch and I am sure a DVRed show or two. Here is the Chapter Seven (near final) draft.

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SEVEN  © 2014 rho, GMG.Two (final) draft
Common Core

            The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On judgment day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.



The Dead 7

         Neither Here nor There surrounds Merlyn in a pool of thought – a nymph’s light, thinks Merlyn. This oncoming spirit appears cut in half by a thin horizontal blade of spiritual light turning the body into a small replica of Earth’s moon. Her head is a spinning world of light above the shadowy torso and rhythmical legs solidifying as nothing before witnessed. The tips of her ten ghostly toes are miniature-spinning moon lights below – as if she is a strange heavenly constellation. Perhaps this is a goddess though I have yet to see one beyond my imagination.
            I have never seen a soul, yet my heart addresses this ghostly spirit a human soul seemingly detached and foreign to my own. The more casual her soul’s light, the more vibrant it also appears in the area of the torso, observes Merlyn.
            These dancing wheels, thinks Merlyn. I know these in the memory of the raining spirits.
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            Twelve human raindrops of equal size whirl one on top and around and under and over of the others like an elaborate child’s toy. Each dancer of rain floats in a touching field and each thus becomes disembodied from what it is not.
            I remember these twelve dancers, smiles Merlyn. I observed this event after the fact, a plausible reality within the confines of this HeavenOrHellBothOrNeither, as our new spiritual friends like to call this Place of the Dead.
            These original dancers, all shamans from about the ancient world danced above the River Styx. A sight to behold, I’ll tell you, says Merlyn to himself. These shamans are by name Ishtar, a woman from Assyria; Enki a high priest from Babylonia; Jun from China; Amenhotep from Egypt; Amrita, a woman from India; Teja of the Indo-Europeans; Meir from Israel; Kagami, a woman from Japan; B’alam from the Central American Olmec; Tiwanaku from High Peru; Dido, a woman from Phoenicia; and Mother’s first, Panagiotakis from pre-ancient Greece. The meanings of the Shamans’ given names in no particular order were: Truth; Holy; Glow; Light; Pharaoh; Immortality; Virgin; Lord; Star; Mirror; Jaguar; and Center-Stone began to dance.

            At the same instant on Earth a lonely man by the name of Ezekiel looks up in the air near the river Chebar and reportedly sees: a whirlwind came out of the north, a great cloud, and a fire enfolding itself, and a brightness was about it, and out of the midst thereof as the color of amber, out of the midst of the fire. Also out of the midst thereof came the likeness of four living creatures.
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            “Hello, Merlyn,” says the spirit beside. “I am called PouchMaster. I cared for a babe of a marsupial humanoid spirit called in life, Elderfelder. In life she had but a stub of a brain but her heart carried her and she was taught how to dance by the elements that hold physics together. There were many witnesses to what was perceived as a gift from G---D. When I dance Elderfelder dances within even though she is afar and fully grown and humanely educated to our spiritual cultures.

            “PouchMaster is a distinctive name for a distinctive member – a shaman you are, I could see this in your moon-glowing arrival. We were no different in conscious origin though similar seeds were scattered across the grandness of our shared Milky Way galaxy.

         In less than the blink the spirit of the woman and the spirit of the man form a refreshed library of mind; developing in both an overlapping of ghostly experience and study. PouchMaster and Merlyn calmly observe their sanctuaries above the still quiet waters of the ancient many-named River. The dancing lights move in darkness as night and day for both also disappear.
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            Within the Folds of the Dead rests Ezekiel with dead eyes open and heartansoulanmind in another place where once there was a Voice from the firmament that was over their heads, when they stood, and had let down their wings. And above the firmament that was over their heads was the likeness of a throne, as the appearance of a sapphire stone: and upon the likeness of the throne was the likeness as the appearance of a man above upon it. And I saw as the colors of amber, as the appearance of fire round about within it, from the appearance of his loins even upward, and from the appearance of his loins even downward, I saw as it were the appearance of fire, and it had brightness round about. Ezekiel slumbers dreaming, what wheels I once witnessed in the air were not witnessed alone. The big wheel runs by faith and the little wheel runs by Grace of G-d.

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Brothers 7

            Each is sitting across from the other having a medium diet drink and a grilled burrito at Taco Bell.
            Richard asks, “How have you been sleeping nights?”
            “I wake at three sometimes. Then I go back to sleep or I get up and work on a project or watch television then go back to bed, comments Robert casually. “I get at least eight hours of sleep a day; sometimes more depending on my naps.”
            “Me too. I don’t get up at three in the morning though unless a good foreign film is on. The perspective helps me visualize human characters.”
            A slight smile seeps, “What is a human character compared to one that is not human?” questions Robert.
            “Empathy,” replies Richard without hesitation.
            “We have empathy, at least to a point. I could have never been a college professor or a teacher of any kind,” notes Robert.
            “Likewise, I could never have been a surgeon.”
            “Our women were both nurses. Tough head nurses.”
            “Same hospital.”
            “Different floors.”
            Richard asks, “I wonder if the mind has floors?”
            “Where’s this come from?”
            “I’m thinking about levels trying to remember what floors the women were on,” replies Richard
            “The mind has three levels.”
            “I’m not talking about Freud, the unconscious and all that. I’m talking about the mind itself. “Your ability to see those last moves this morning shows the ability of the mind to visualize and to analyze potential chess moves, your own and mine too.”
            “It is just the training we both have,” says Robert nonchalantly. “You didn’t see the next move so you took the sure way out with a draw. I would have done the same.”
            “But you did see the move. What allows you to see it, and not me?” asks Richard.
            Robert munches on the oversized burrito for a moment then smiles and says, “I had the perspective of being on the other side of the board.”
            “What difference does that make?”
            Robert deadpans the comment, “It wasn’t my move.”
            “So you thought it though because you weren’t focused on it.”
            “Not to win. I wasn’t going to win and was ready to kick myself for not asking for a draw earlier, but I was white. I thought I might have the advantage.”
            Richard grumbles, “You were waiting for me to make a mistake.”
            Robert laughs, “You did, Richie.”
            Richard concentrates on his burrito, then wads up the papers. “Why doesn’t the mind have any residue?”
            Robert answers sarcastically, “I don’t know. Why? Let’s see. Maybe it is because it doesn’t exist. It has no physical existence.”
            “So it has no waste.”
            “If you mean there is no anus of the mind, I have to agree,” smiles Rob.
            “But where does the input come from? What is the mouth of the mind? asks Richard half humorously.
            “The brain. If the mind exists separate from the brain, it is fed by the brain.” Robert pauses, “That might work as a metaphor. People say they feed their brain knowledge, that the brain spits out answers.”
            “That the brain is full of bullshit,” adds Richard.
            “Talking is the anus of the brain. If that is what you are saying I mostly agree, Richie.”
            “Doesn’t the mind talk too?”
            “I use my mind the most when I am silent and focused.”
            “With a scalpel in hand no doubt,” said Richard.
            “No doubt,” replies Robert. “A sharp blade of polished stainless steel readying for its first incision.”
            “To get into the mind though, words are used.”
            “Or numbers, or symbols.”
            “Which is sharper a symbol or a metaphor?”
            Robert sits back, finishes his burrito and takes a drink of cola. “You can’t make a like comparison between a symbol or a metaphor.”
            “Okay, I agree,” retorts Richard with some excitement, “but which is more effective to working a concept or a thought? In one of your poems, let’s say.”
            The more emotion he clues in Richard’s voice, the more objective Robert becomes. “Religion and politics use symbols or icons first. Symbols are more effective.”
            “That’s true – the tree as a symbol.”
            “The elephant and the donkey.”
            “The rich or the poor.”
            “I like the tree. It has roots and provides shade.”
            “Speaking of roots,” says Robert, “I told Connie I’d be back by two.”
            In attempted wit Richard says, “Two roots in a single long orgasmic toot.” Both laugh as they pick up their trays for the trash.
            “One of the afternoon beauties of retirement,” says Robert with more feigned seriousness in his face than he imagines.

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Grandma’s Story 7
            “Let’s refresh the family with this story,” says Grandma. Everyone is connected to the Dead but other than those recent little attention is paid. However, in these books the lineage is important to give perspective as well as a reminder that you will be among those dead one day. Most of the Living aren’t going to have the time or inclination to wonder what your life was like, even an important moment of it. Genealogists will be interested and getting your birth and death date correct as well as marriage date or dates but their purpose is to relate information to family members to remind people where they come from. This is better than nothing. This doesn’t mean anyone in the next generation is going to be interested. How interested are you? The genetic run of individuals and their families mostly crumbles away like old places – scattered head stones or strewed cremains. In here though human beings, marsupial or otherwise dead are not places. The human spirit is a continuous event of heartansoulanmind is more like the unabated element of hydrogen in the physical universe than anything else. That’s how Grandma sees it. People, marsupial or human, tend to have a narrow inclination of their worth singularly or compounded because that is how it seems. Not in these books though. Ghosts understand such matters better. It helps if you are not all ‘here’ and you are not. Nothing is.

            Criteria and Renaldo are a sample of the direct ancestors of Robert, Richard, Cyndi and Connie. These are the spiritual Dead rising up into the consciousness of the spiritual Living. Criteria and Renaldo have a son, Thomas who continues to live in west Scotland. Thomas marries Hilda from Northumbria. They have twins, Jacob and Judah. Jacob and his wife Ruth have Duncan and Sarah, grandchildren of Thomas and Hilda. Judah and Anne have two children also, Joseph and Daniel. When Thomas dies, they stay on at the Scottish estate raising sheep for a tidy profit.

            Hilda returns to one of her estates in Northumbria and invites Jacob and Ruth and their children Duncan and Sarah to run one of her English estates there. Lady Hilda wants her grandchildren to keep the wealth in the family.

            Sarah develops a strong alliance with her grandmother Hilda, after hearing Jacob and Ruth are murdered in Viking raids in 783. Daniel and his wife Treasa escaped the destruction of Criteria and Renaldo’s estate.

            In order to survive Daniel and Treasa and their son Wilfred live by deception in the Scottish Highlands as noble Vikings named Frodisharg and Vigdisdottir. They are able to take some of their former possessions and money and become buyers and sellers of relics, most important to them is acquiring their former oak table where Grandfather Thomas once sat and learned from Merlyn, at least that is how their story goes.

            In Northumbria, a part of England, Sarah and her husband Robert have two sons, James and John. When Robert dies Sarah sells the land and sheep she inherited from her Grandmother Hilda. By 941 James’ son Madison is 53. His wife is Shandy. Their son Lyndon and his young wife Daisey have their first son, Ackley. The brothers inherit Sarah’s wealth and move to Pucklechurch to live.

            In this same year in the Scottish Highlands, Daniel and Terasa’s son Wilfred along with his wife Daria live in Glasgow and have a granddaughter named Dana who is helping to run the expanded family relic business, Enterprise. Dana’s husband Douglas is killed in battle in 936 and he leaves Dana and her grandmother Naime to raise the two children, Cory, five and Tully, four, both of whom love to play with an imaginary elf under the old oak table.

            On 25 December 1066 William crowned King of England at Westminster. The widow of James, Scarlet is 46 is writing a letter to Wanda, her mother-in-law, who is married to Sarah’s other son, John who is 80. Scarlet has a son Seaton who is 22. Seaton’s wife Dallan is 19. They have a one-year-old daughter, Aida.

            In the same December in Glasgow, Vendela, 44, is the widow of Dane. Vendela is Cory’s great, great granddaughter. Her father was named Palmer. Vendela has a reckless daughter Luella, 15 who will eventually inherit all Vendela’s fortune. Thus we have a selected genealogy from Criteria and Renaldo. Grandma winks. Think how it would be tracing a selection of your immediate family back some three hundred years? You are the end result of much human heart-felt attachment over the last three centuries. And, whether you have children or not, others will carry on the legacy of human species.

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Diplomatic Pouch 7

            Mr. Kembel sits in the chair thinking: I no longer stand. I sit and still await Drenakite. Surely she is at the outer door. This is not a good sign. Embarrassed, he flushes away such primitive, superstitious thought. History envelops me. It has some twenty thousand years since the last plague and I feel we may be opening the door to another by bringing these Earthlings here. Ship is less than two hundred miles from our atmosphere and in a special blackenot. Ship is communicating only with Onesixanzero. No one else knows what is at stake. Our machinery has us tied, thinking this introduction is ultimately for both of our species health and safety, but machinery does not succumb to biochemical contagion. It has no fear, no superstition. I should not either.

            Dark humor invades. Such irony it would be for me to be in secret charge of causing a possible new plague that might wipe Planet One of our species in less than a week if some strange mix of these aliens with our environment would cause small unthinkable biochemically killing mutations in our similar atmosphere and rivers. A virus of epic proportions killing one-third of our population, Planet One.

            “This would be no worse than plagues already effected on Earthlings,” comments Onesixanzero, “and it would be far less a problem than when only one hundred marsupial humanoids survived that last plague on Planet One. We have run the numbers and Ship and I do not feel anyone will be unsafe because of biochemical contamination. No one, Earthling or Marsupial will get more than a headache at most, and that, we concur, would be more psychological than anything else. No one on Earth has died because three marsupial humanoids invaded their environmental habitat, but then your concern Mr. Kembel is less with the Earthlings than your own habitats. Ship and I are equally concerned for the health and safety of both species.”

            “I forgot you might be listening to my thoughts.”

            “I did not hear a word, replies Onesixanzero. “We analyze your functioning bodies and brains and make deductions on your thoughts. We read you better than you read yourselves; this is how we serve. Drenakite will now enter the room.” The door opens. Mr. Kembel begins to rise.

            Drenakite says, “Hello, Mr. Kembel. Please, remain seated. We need to talk, and this Preserve is the only place on ThreePlanets to do so.”
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            Kembel watches Drenakite leave quietly while thinking, the woman is spooked. We have to keep on top of this. He says to Onesixanzero, “I need to talk privately to my daughter.”

            “She will talk to you momentarily.”
            “Hello, Father?”
            “Friendly, StoneHouse has been found and Drenakite is spooked by the coincidence.”
            “Where is it?”
            “It was found under a riverbed. The digging is classified among top cleric. If it is StoneHouse it will be the most revered sacred site on ThreePlanets.”
            “Why is Drenakite spooked? She is the most reasonable of all the Cleric on ThreePlanets.”
            “It is believed by the Cleric that the body of Elderfelder is buried beneath the floor of StoneHouse,” he comments.

            “That would be like finding the bones of Abraham or Jesus to the Earthlings.”
            “No, I think it would be like finding evidence of everyone’s Earth Mother, Eve.”
            “This is also newly High-Science classified. Onesixanzero informs us that a crawlbabe on PlanetThree has only the rudiments of a brain but her body instinctively scaled to the pouch and is surviving on her own.

            “That is Elderfelder the Dancer.”
            “You see the problem.”
            “And no one knows we have returned but you, Drenakite and Onesixanzero.”
            “Onesixanzero and Ship have merged machinery for our health and safety.”
            Friendly’s voice emotions slightly, “The Earthlings must come first. They are our guests, Father.”

            “Not yet,” he clips.
            “They are Ship’s guests first.”
            “This is not a good time to announce their presence to anyone.” Or yours either Friendly, thinks Mr. Kembel.
            “Do you want to talk to Yermey? He should know these events.”
            “He’ll listen then make a joke. You tell him.”

            “It’s just his dark humor. He has witnessed much in his long life.”
            “How are your Earthlings holding up?”
            “Well. They are busy learning how it is. Ship let’s them view what they want.”
            “Surely he is not going to tell them what’s happening.”

            “Ship probably feels that’s your department, Friendly. But, I think you should wait. The excuse is normal isolation quarantining. Keep it that way for the time being.
            “Maybe it would be good to have the Earthlings visit the StoneHouse archeological dig,” suggests Yermey. “Place them in the thicket with us.”

            “I’m captain, Father. Yermey and Hartolite are privy to this conversation.”
            Mr. Kembel gives an order, “Yermey, I seek your further advice.”

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