23 January 2015

Notes - G. segments to resolve /

22 January 15

         Tomorrow is Carol’s birthday. Today you are readying yourself to see Dr. Veni B. and to have your blood tests and to find out the particulars.

         Arriving home you read the paper and had the rest of your breakfast. Carol is drying her hair and you are feeling good that the drive into and from Anderson Township (Five Mile Road) and the doctor’s appointment both went well. Plus, you just broke an unspoken personal rule and had a piece of dark chocolate for a treat. – Amorella

         Late lunch at Smashburgers, then a nap. Refreshed, you and Carol watched last night’s “Mentalist” and an older “Blue Bloods”. You have the genealogy out so you can begin adding.
        

23 January 15

         You gave Carol two good humorous birthday cards and she found them both as witty as you did. Last night you were going through your years on a Facebook page and rediscovered a You Tube video from Liberty University Online titled, “Fibonacci’s Fractals”. It reminds you of your natural sense of mathematical order in the universe.

         You had soup for supper and watched “Elementary” and the second episode (season one) of “House of Cards” as well as NBC News.

         2156 hours. I am still in trouble over Grandma’s genealogies. I think I am going to have to rework Grandma 7 once again. I am into 20 generations so far from Criteria and Renaldo. I cannot expect the reader to comprehend this line, when I cannot myself.  I have to remember Merlyn is dreaming these episodes and while in a line the Dead whose stories are chosen are seemingly arbitrary. I don’t really know how I wrote these stories in the first place.

         You have all your notes, boy. – Amorella

         2206 hours. I am obviously making these Grandma segments too complicated, too detailed when the rest of the book is not set up that way. The segment is out of sync with the rest of the dream episodes.

         You want to relive the lives of the Dead and you want to give them the respect of a birth and death year to make them more legitimate. Good intentions, boy. – Amorella

         2211 hours. You are right. I want them real in my head first and their story second. I have to resolve this.

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