17 August 2015

Notes - observations / transparency

         Mid-morning. Carol is readying for physical therapy at the community center. You have checked your email and had a Kroger soft cookie treat after breakfast. – Amorella

         0858 hours. Life is continually interesting. Around 1120 hour yesterday you commented:

You are concerned about this poem writing but you need not be. It’ll come into play sometime today. Post. – Amorella

I had no idea what I would come up with. When it hit me to observe the actual Scottish dancing on You-tube I thought that was in reference to “into play” and that I had ‘self-fulfilled’ the prophecy so to speak. Only later, when I suddenly realized I had a poem that might fit I thought ‘Eureka, I have done the poem today.’ The poem that came to mind in a flash was my:

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DRUID'S LAMENT

                                      There’s a paced march of an army of ants
                                      And wrens a-fluttering in a kind of dance,
                                      Thick dark leaves turned over real light
                                      And thick meadow clover bent just right.

                                       It's about time for sowing winter's wheat
                                       The West wind’s a-blowing across my feet,
                                       The mighty yellow Sun is moving on South
                                        Big Moon’s rising near small stream's mouth.

                                        When water begins to churning white and high
                                        Come rains, come rains, come rains try;
                                        Cool me down, make me thick and muddy
                                         Make my heart beat fast, my cheeks quite ruddy.

                                        The shrilling sounds of troops of crickets
                                         Swirlling in my mind like rabbits in a thicket;
                                         Small thicket made magic with lots of things to do
                                         Before Fall sets in and the Harvest i8 through.

                                          North-west breeze sniffing at my door
                                          This hot summer’s blast will be nevermore;
                                          Bright Harvest Moon, soon will be rising
                                          Cool bright, like love gone philosophizing.

                                          I’m walking on with my friends and clutter
                                          Chirping my thoughts with a bit of a flutter;
                                          Dancing and churning and swirling about
                                          Like a wren in a thicket in a late summer’s drought.
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         Once I read the poem I realized it was too long and more nature oriented than I wanted. I looked over the table of contents of Take Two and found “Beltane’s Eve” with its twenty lines. Now there is no coincidence here – my observation is all from my mind – showing how I worked through the problem and solved at least the first part. Now I have to write (through Amorella) Dead 10 and then put the poem in my twenty-first century perspective.

         Post. - Amorella


         Nearing noon. You did your forty minutes of exercises and continue to feel better (psychologically) for it. Carol is working on bills to pay and errands to do after lunch at Smashburgers. Let’s work on Dead Ten until time to go. - Amorella

         It rained hard through lunch but when you arrived home after errands you found it had only sprinkled a bit. Carol is napping and you are thinking about it. You did read the Popular Science that arrived today.

         1524 hours. One of the interesting articles talked about two robotic kits that were $250 and $500 each. If Owen were older I would buy him one to build if he was interested. Shoot, I’d even think about buy me one if it would do stuff.

         Check out the robots that are available. – Amorella

         1736 hours. Carol and I napped after I checked out the robots. Honda’s ‘Asimov’ is the best and most sophisticated at the moment; the price about $2,500,000 thousand – a bit above my personal budget. We are at Kroger’s on Mason-Montgomery Road. Carol has her list and is walking better every day. She’s up to 123 degrees – her other leg is at 125; and her flatness is at 3 degrees off zero, plus she has lost another quarter inch of puffiness. In another three quarters of an inch both knees will be the same size. Very cool.

         Today she is wearing a nice gray T that she bought in Arizona and a light ivory pair of pants/slacks with side pockets on the legs. Carol is quite attractive – always has been as far as I am concerned. In college she was 123 pounds at five foot seven inches and she is about 133 at the same height today. She has more of her dad’s build – Dad H was six two or three and weighed about 165 at most – tall and lanky – he was a track star when at Otterbein. These are approximates, pretty close, but I wouldn’t swear to them. Anyway, the point in my head is that Carol is looking good and walking better (her fuller natural gait every day. The only time Carol wobbles is when she stands on one leg, her right leg. She says she needs to gain a little more strength. – Next year will be time to work on the left one then she’ll be done with the knees for fifteen to twenty years. I’m proud of who she is. I’d be proud to know her even if I didn’t live with her.

         Your enthusiasm is what it is. Dead Ten is coming along. You’ll no doubt watch a couple more shows tonight as the deadline is nearing for your copied ones before Thursday. You are two weeks behind on “I Robot” and you may have a “Masterpiece Mystery” or “Masterpiece Theatre” or two to delete before you lose your Time-Warner DVR box. Post.  – Amorella


         2234 hours. I thought the work done on Dead was in my notes – it should be for copy sake. Here it is
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TEN
Roundabout Reel

            The Supervisor has a little saying:
                                    Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                                    A pocket full of posies
                                    "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                                    We all fall down!

                                    We rise from clay
                                    On judgment day
                                    Be we dead or still alive.


The Dead 10 – 1st draft

                           Wing-dancing spritely across leafy forest
                           Feather bright birds sing along in a chorus,
                           Dead trees' gray fingers will leaf out quite soon
                           Under misty full light of magic May Moon.
                                   
            Merlyn lies comfortably as a stone sarcophagus on the top of the granite-like mountain separating him from the Earthling Dead. There is a difference up here in my sanctuary from down by my hut and stream, he thinks. There is a residual effect, an echo of sorts from life that may stay awhile in one or more of the person’s most intimate surroundings. It is a place that most of the Living at one time or another get the tincture of a haunting when the ghostly spirit as it were, is no longer there or perhaps never was there consciously. That’s my observation that has no more validity than I do. Such a lace of humor to drape me this side of the River; a dark humor that forever sparks my humanity to survive beyond physical death. Humor, to my spirit, is everywhere, a delight like a spring valley of fresh flowerings. All one has to do on either side of the River is to observe one’s surroundings. With this, Merlyn flashes above his sleepy stone-like head to the Supervisor’s saying in parchment-woven heartanmind:

                             Ring-a-ring o'rosies
                            A pocket full of posies
                           "A-tishoo! A-tishoo!"
                           We all fall down!

                           We rise from clay
                           On judgment day
                           Be we dead or still alive.

         These, the first words from the other side, and from our Supervisor’s mind no less – gleaned intelligence. No tunnel or flash of light for me; nothing more than the presence of words hanging in the dark. – 276 wk

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         Transparency is authenticity in 276 words, orndorff. No one can deny the timing of your notes. Post. - Amorella

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