Late morning. Carol just left for her
walking at the community center and you just finished your forty minutes of
exercises.
Mid-afternoon.
You are centered in the north area of Rose Hill Cemetery facing west and under
the tree trunk shade of an old Walnut. The sky is cold but mostly clear with
lots of bright sunlight. Carol is reading a new magazine, Taste of Home.
You ran errands and had lunch at Longhorn’s with Jenny as your server.
Excellent service, excellent meals. You have been thinking about yesterday’s
post. In fact, upon awakening this morning you concluded that this ‘spiritual’
business, as you like to call it, is about the ‘Diplomatic Pouch’ chapter. –
Amorella
1445
hours. It does. The ‘spirituality’ centeredness is on the marsupial humanoids,
on their present leader (I can’t remember her name). She works with the
computer (I can’t remember his name either. Drenakite, the 470 year old
sacerdotal priestess dressed similar to a Buddhist monk (chapter six) and a “lone refurbrisher of Onesixanzero, a
singular biochemical and tri-quantum field thought-reason-emotional analysis
speculator based on advanced marsupial and human elements of consciousness and
unconscious behaviors.” I came to this conclusion because the response to the
spiritual-like gathering immediately reminded me of the Quakers for whom I have
a fondness as I do for the Unitarians of the nineteenth century. I cannot
imagine human beings not discussing religious aspects such as theology,
scripture and doctrine. And, if it’s not religious doctrine it’s political
doctrine with all its ramifications. This is pure primate behavior not
marsupial, at least not to the same extent, and this is partly because the
marsupials are a matriarchal-oriented culture.
You
have put the ‘Diplomatic Pouch’ segments six through ten in one document to
better keep them in line with the internal plot. You could do the same with
each segment – all chapters. – Amorella
2139 hours. I don’t remember what all
I did on the GMG.1 but I will go over each segment grouping them
together as if it were a separate book, four separate books actually. As I am
putting together this revision of the earlier Merlyn books I might as well set
it up to make sure it flows separately as well as together. That was always the
plan but I need to see how good the plan was. I have to be more careful. I am
thinking that if I eventually get the books done in a more proper, more artistic
way I will spend my money and get the GMG trilogy printed, even if only a few
copies for family and friends who wish hard copies. I will attempt to leave a better
part of myself in print.
2152 hours. I am a bit embarrassed by my previous paragraph here, but I will not deny it was a thought. I was startled to find that last sentence on the screen. I did not think it consciously, that's for sure. It is so unlike me to have such a thought. It sounds arrogant and/or self-righteous.
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