Notes - Sunday / Amorella's humor /

       Mid-morning. Having finished the Sunday paper you are ready to return to bed this the gloomy, rainy day. Carol is still reading. – Amorella

       0934 hours. Later.

       Mid-afternoon. For a later lunch (Carol’s idea) you each had a Graeter’s kid’s cup of black cherry chocolate chip then topped it off with McD’s Egg McMuffins. Carol is making supper. The decision of the moment: four handbags, which to take to Jamaica? – Amorella

       1500 hours. I suggested the small, black over the shoulder travel bag with lots of compartments over a light bamboo handled braided catchall.  Carol and Kim are really excited about this wedding. Both have really pretty and exotic long dresses for the tropics. Paul and I will have a good time with the boys.

       The Brothers – Fourteen will have a twist to take to the last book. – Amorella

       1513 hours. I haven’t even looked at it yet. – It has 3243 words.

       You have some editing ahead. I’ll help. Take a break. Later, dude. Post. - Amorella     

       1601 hours. I have Brothers - 14 down to 1009 words. I didn’t know this segment was about the train set. I suppose it could be a steppingstone for Brothers 1, GMG.3 but I don’t see anything dramatic in it. In fact there is nothing dramatic in any Brothers segment – just a story about two retired brothers and how they spend their time.

       Post. - Amorella 

       1845 hours. I suppose I should look at this is to why Merlyn is dreaming about these two retired twin brothers.

       This is a point worth considering. – Amorella

       1847 hours. From what I remember Merlyn is using Richard to return to the Living so to speak.

       Literally, boy. – Amorella

       1849 hours. I don’t think I make that clear.

       It should be understood by the reader. – Amorella

       1850 hours. I didn’t remember this point. This is too much work for most readers, including ironically, myself.

       Such is my humor boy. Post. – Amorella