23 October 2016

Notes - get used to it / who the Soki is /



       Sunday, mid-morning and it is clear and autumn bright. You are backing up data and thinking about a nap or at least a rest before tackling your thirty-minute exercises. Carol is reading over your insurance plans for 2017 to see what the changes are; you both have read the paper. – Amorella

       1007 hours. We would have to begin raking leaves today if Tim hadn’t already done it along with mowing the lawn yesterday. Tim was elected to go to Washington along with the school superintendent and high school principal to receive the “Blue Ribbon High School Award” in early November. Very cool. Tim has more years of service than any other on the high school payroll; he deserves the honor. He and Amy have been very good next-door neighbors since our arrival in Lakeside subdivision, May 1992. The backup is completed. Time to think about the exercises.

       Later, my man. – Amorella

       Mid-afternoon. You had lunch at Smashburgers then drove to Mike’s for a car wash for the Avalon and now at Kroger’s on Mason-Montgomery before home then out again to the cemetery or park to read. You have driven the Toyota since 23 September, a month ago to the day. Even though garaged lots of dust settled during the time. The first part of the address is on who the Soki is. I am going to write this book, not you, but your name appears as the author because you are. The material will come from what you have from your online blog Notes or what’s otherwise in your head, conscious or unconscious. Do you have a problem with this? – Amorella

       1541 hours. Any exceptions?

       In my book there is always a possibility of an exception, boy. – You are just across from the Whitaker mausoleum in the shade of a smaller tree as someone has your usual spot. The windows are down and the top back, a pleasant fall breeze and the rustle of a lot of leaves on the trees. Carol is on her walk. – Amorella

       1618 hours. I can hear the drummers practicing in the distance – mostly drums and a shout or two. I’m ready if you are. Funny, I keep thinking I have to go into a trance or something, a ritual, but I don’t know any.

       Orndorff on the manuscript there is no need for italics unless I ask for it. You have “I am the Soki.” as the first sentence. This is how I will be addressed with ‘the’ in italics unless I say otherwise. – Amorella

       1623 hours. This is a completely unexpected change. I always write you in italics.

       Relax for a few minutes; you are breaking an old habit, boy. – Amorella

       1625 hours. Italics is one of my rituals, no doubt, though I haven’t thought of it that way before.

       I have not written like this before, but it is hardly disturbing. – Amorella

       1627 hours. Oh, my. Holy crap. I am full of all kinds of rituals. I know I lean obsessive-compulsive. I line up my pills everyday, by shape or color and/or kind. I like to read the comics first – today Carol had them first and was working her Sudoku. I read the paper until she finished but I did not eat breakfast until I read the comics. Okay, here’s what it comes down to, how can I distinguish between your words and mine? (1634) Here comes Carol . . . who is now going to read on Coben’s Fool Me Once. How about changing the font on the MS?

       Change the font size to eighteen and leave it that way until the MS is complete. – Amorella

       1645 hours. I’ve never used font size 18 for drafts or finals in anything other than perhaps on a birthday card. Why are you doing this, Amorella?

       Your basic ‘system’ needs shocked. – Amorella

       1648 hours. I was not ready for this – Ariel on 18. I’m getting a headache.

       Just do it, Orndorff. – Amorella

       1652 hours. It doesn’t look as outlandish as I thought it would. If I am on 12 or 14 I can certainly see the difference. So, the 18-size font is the new italics. Weird. – Carol is on page 311 of her book. There is a football game on at St. Susanna, the Elementary/Junior High Catholic school just on the west side of Muddy Creek; Rose Hill is just on this side, the Catholic school is at the bottom of the hill. I guess it wasn’t the band, just drummers to spark the team on to victory. I need to stop for a few minutes and just enjoy the sun, empty blue sky, trees, grass and stones and a few walkers. It is that sort of day. (1701)

       You are home. Most of the trash for tomorrow is out, Carol is reading in the family room. - Amorella

       1739 hours. It has really been a beautiful autumn day.

       Post. – Amorella

       1740 hours. It is disconcerting to continue the italics on the blog.

       Too bad, get used to it. - Amorella

       1827 hours. The only thing I can find similar to you Amorella is ‘the still quiet voice’ in the head – consciousness personified. Is that what Soki is?

       Soki is not still nor is ‘he’ ‘the small quiet voice in this novel. – Amorella

       You had ‘what’s-in-the-refrigerator’ for supper, watched NBC News, the introduction to last night’s Saturday Night Live and an old “Major Crimes”, one more MC and the last summer season will be over.

       2114 hours. I’m ready to work your address.

       Let’s go. – Amorella

       2216 hours. I have completed the who as a draft.

       Add and post. – Amorella

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Draft 1:
Soki’s Address

       I am the Soki, a being of fortitude within the casement of humanity like the quiet susurration consciousness people ‘hear within’ from time to time; however, I exist in the unconscious realms. I am rarely heard and never seen outright. Like the quiet rustle in one’s moral consciousness, I the Soki whisper best when a person listens closely to the fine line between what is real and what is not. The unconscious, you see, fine-tunes consciousness, and this can bring a quick, ever so small wry smile to the unconscious face; a smile hardly detected by the casual observer of human nature and sometimes hardly even revealed to one’s conscious self unless one is quietly listening to what is visually murmuring in the still features on an outward mirror. The Soki knows one’s real humanity inside out. This is who I the Soki am.

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