14 January 2017

Notes - caught error corrected /



       Mid-afternoon. You had a late lunch at Piada Street Italian and dessert at Graeter's, both on Mason-Montgomery Road -- you each had a scoop of peppermint ice cream with a dollop of hot fudge. You were near the bottom of the last can of peppermint until next Christmas season. Earlier in the day you were feeling unwell although towards noon you did your exercises. You were doing them when Carol came up and noticed that the back of your left leg was most fully bruised in a deep purple. You called the doctor to get a slip for an X-ray but they were closed. You sent a photo to Paul and Kim and they called immediately. After hearing on the conditions leading up to the observation Paul declared it a broken vessel and to put a cold pack on it; "if it changes go to the ER". So far it hasn't got any worse but the leg is swollen in the area. So much for your day. You both have to work on the bedroom to prepare for Dan the painter at eight Monday morning. - Amorella

       1550 hours. The leg feels a bit heavier but there is no real pain other than arthritic and that is tempered by the one-a-day tramadol.

       Let's work on chapter five. - Amorella

       1556 hours. Fine, I'm for it too.

       1656 hours. I finished with five but I am unsure it is in a near final draft stage. It appears complicated to me as it scores 55.8 on reading ease; 9.1 on class level.

       Set up an document showing the reading scores on each chapter. - Amorella

       1701 hours. Should I show these stats at the conclusion of each near final draft chapter online?

       No. - Amorella

       1703 hours. I will work on this.

       1719 hours. I completed the task. Obviously, I did not complete chapter three and will work on this tonight. Sorry.

       You feel bad but this is you in your natural state. People who had you for class or know you well, know. You do the editing, etc. Live with it. Post. - Amorella

       1731 hours. Wise thinking, Amorella. I have certain responsibilities here and I need to take care of the errors myself. This experience is well deserved. Sorry, readers. I need to be more personally responsible for my editing and placing near final drafts. I will correct chapter three.

       2114 hours the editing errors for chapter-three-nfd have been corrected. 

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