02 March 2014

Notes - nap / planet / prep / prep 1 completed / new things

         Mid-morning. You and Carol had breakfast and read the Sunday paper. Carol is on the phone with one of her sisters. You are upstairs in your black bedroom chair, feet up in black wool-lined slippers on, chair back slightly with a small green pillow under your head for reading ease as your MacAir is setting on a slightly larger burnt orange pillow on your lap. You have on an old tan sweatshirt (a Jadah the Cat favorite for warmth) and a thin pair of light gray running pants you use as sleepwear. The raindrops outside are striking the window heavy like when water is about to turn to ice. The trees already have a light dressing of ice on their long otherwise naked limbs. The late winter sky is a mottled gray skycap. What to do first is your question. – Amorella

         1005 hours. I cannot remember the last time I began a sentence with a noun clause.

         I concluded my paragraph with a noun clause used as the subject; I assume you are referring to my concluding sentence. – Amorella

         It is time for a nap.

         Post. - Amorella


         1136 hours. I can’t believe it. I sleep for about an hour and the ground is already snow covered; and Carol is still on the phone. Slow falling flakes with the slight breeze carrying the snow from the south. I thought it wasn’t going to snow until after four this afternoon. Time to fill the bird feeders. A quick check on the Net and another reality hits.

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Ukraine announces a full military mobilisation in response to Russia's build-up in Crimea, where Ukrainian and Russian soldiers are facing off.
BBC
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         1147 hours. Surely our nature can be tamed from war. We continue to make cars and Olympic sports safer, why not politics?

          What planet are you on, boy? War is what makes people free. – Amorella

          Alas, for this there appears no good answer.


         Post. - Amorella


         Late afternoon. The light snow is beginning to fall in earnest. You and Carol had scrambled eggs and ham and a piece of bakery bread for lunch while you watched PBS Dayton’s “This Old House” from last Thursday. You have begun setting the final copy of GMG.One in Page for a runoff. You are beginning Chapter Six with your tweaking. – Amorella

         1605 hours. I realize that this set up will not be exactly cricket for the ebook but I want the draft in the format of a book. Right now I’m going to take a break. I am not setting the style format; it is straight font size 11 for my uses. I also cut the *** out at conclusions and in the text I dropped them from three to one. I like the minimalist look.

         Tonight, according to Hoyle, you are having pizza; Papa John’s specifically, a large half veggie half works – half for tonight and half for tomorrow. Carol is cutting coupons. Post. - Amorella

         Late afternoon. The light snow is beginning to fall in earnest. You and Carol had scrambled eggs and ham and a piece of bakery bread for lunch while you watched PBS Dayton’s “This Old House” from last Thursday. You have begun setting the final copy of GMG.One in Page for a runoff. You are beginning Chapter Six with your tweaking. – Amorella

         1605 hours. I realize that this set up will not be exactly cricket for the ebook but I want the draft in the format of a book. Right now I’m going to take a break. I am not setting the style format; it is straight font size 11 for my uses. I also cut the *** out at conclusions and in the text I dropped them from three to one. I like the minimalist look.

         Tonight, according to Hoyle, you are having pizza; Papa John’s specifically, a large half veggie half works – half for tonight and half for tomorrow. Carol is cutting coupons. Post. – Amorella

         1735 hours. I have through chapter sixteen completed. Time for a break.

         You had leftover turkey vegetable soup for supper instead of pizza (because of the weather) and a piece of bakery multigrain bread. The storm is not so bad as originally predicted because it dropped lower. You are to have between two and six inches by morning. You also have a doctor’s appointment late morning. You completed your first round of the entire book today. Tomorrow you want to go over it one more time before printing a copy for final proofing. – Amorella

         2036 hours. Carol is up watching the Oscars. I may watch a program or two tonight – “Revolution” and/or “Grimm”. I am glad I finished the first draft of the final draft and tomorrow after completing the second draft I ought to just go ahead and run it off. Then comes the real work.

         You are maturing as a writer, boy, but then what choice did you have? – Amorella

         I always have new things to learn Amorella. I can live with it.


         Post. - Amorella

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