05 July 2016

Notes - in the AM /


      Moving towards noon local time. The car is mostly packed and Carol is at the hairdressers and will be home in about an hour. – Amorella

       1157 hours. I talked to the girls about our trip. I think Jadah understands “we are going to see Kim, Paul and the boys,” but I just told Spooky that, “We were going in the car.” She and Ellie didn’t get along the last time Ellie was here, so what will be will be. I think they’ll be fine on the trip; it’s in the afternoon and both usually nap.

       It appears you now have one to three readers on Dewdrop. – Amorella

       1216 hours. That’s okay. I’m not much interested in the numbers because the only place I’ve mentioned it is on Encounters. It is interesting to me to read the dialogues without the extra material cluttered in the way of the rest of the notes. I’m glad I’m doing this – it provides more personal reflection and when I find myself naturally (unthinkingly) moving into present tense in a past setting it appears to be the right thing to do though at first it was unintentional.

       I have not seen to correct this because it is a part of the editing for clarity in this case the present tense is for you because it is bringing the memory back into a present tense. I don’t know that it adds to authenticity but it certainly doesn’t take it away from my perspective. Post. - Amorella


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