Notes - settling / construction /

      Morning. Brian from Air Authority is here for routine maintenance on the furnace. Carol is upstairs reading with Jadah nearby; Spooky is down by you sitting under one of her favorite chairs. You have gotten several comments from both sides on your Facebook piece. You are enjoying the joy or disturbance you are causing with it. - Amorella

       1012 hours. It is fun reading the reactions. I made a few comments on them but I got bored as no one is going to convince the other side; it's just wasted effort going back and forth with the same person. What is irritating is that I find small grammar errors and correct them only to later find another error or so. I keep correcting them; there is not much else I can do.

       Alas,  but for your humanity you would be perfect. - Amorella

       1017 hours. You have a good way of settling me down.

       Post. - Amorella

       You are ready to work on the chapters. If you wish you can continue on editing through chapter seventeen for continuity, then we'll begin again with Soki. - Amorella

       1049 hours. That's better as each was on conversation with Earthling and Marsupial humanoid.

       Take a short break, then we'll work. - Amorella

       1215 hours. We worked for the last 36 minutes and completed the editing of 16 and I quickly scanned 17. It doesn't look too bad. We had Pyl and Yermey and Hartolite and Justine conversations but what about Friendly and Blake? I'll have to read 17 more carefully no question about it. I didn't remember them being above the dark side of the moon in chapter 17.

       Time to take another break. - Amorella

       1411 hours. We edited chapter seventeen. I checked over the chapters and forgot we had the first conversation with Blake and Friendly, so everyone is covered. I also skimmed over the other chapters through twenty-one. I don't see many problems. This should go fairly quickly. Of course, the focus is going to change as Soki adds his commentary.

       It will, and in the process other soul-bound and Betweener perspectives will make themselves known. An intuitive flash is as an Interjection. Once an intuition flashes in a darkened room the interior reflected cannot be unseen. - Amorella

       1424 hours. Heaven or Hell comes to the mind; the rush of a poetic Beauty comes to the heart; the soul remains indifferent as if it has seen it all at one time or another.

       1429 hours. That was a surprise. Who is this?

       That was soul's unnamed friend, boy, a perspective to read the soul inside and out, an Interjection event as it were. Her name is Incogna. She will be used only where and when needed. Think of her as an intra-dimensional sprite, a light flicker, as it were, of her true self. Post. - Amorella

       1446 hours. As long as she adds substance to the sense of metaphysics I'm all for her construction.